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Reviewer: slg (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Soixante-Neuf
that was f*#% Hot! I know that is not the most prolific way to express what i thought about the chapter---but i have to imagine that is the feeling you are trying to get across when you write this story
Author's Response: I can't lie, getting that reaction does give me a smile and a giggle ;-) Thank you so much for reading babes!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: redbean (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Soixante-Neuf
I wasn't sure if I was going to like it...another story about them getting closer before the wedding but I am SURE glad I gave it a try. Very hot hot hot! I love your characterizations of all the family members although you could lay off calling Alice a pixie ;) Love what you are doing and hope you keep on writing!
Author's Response: Dually noted about the pixie ;-)
Thank you so very much for giving my humble little fic a read, you have no idea how much I appreciate it!! I do try to keep in touch with my readers and if there is anything you would like to see happen between B&E either before or after the wedding/change, please, feel free to message me and I'll do my best to bring it into fruition. I've gotten some wonderful ideas from my readers and I write this for all of you as much as I write it for myself.
Again, thank you so much for reading and please, stay tuned!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 12:37 AM · On: The Talk; Part Deux
This chapter was great!!! So funny!! I love all the boys just talking, Emmett is a riot! Amazing writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you are enjoying my little fic!! Please, stay tuned!!!
*MWAH*
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Soixante-Neuf
Um, yeah, I like Darkward too. Great update!
Author's Response: Yeah, a lot of people seem to like Darkward. I think I may be able to convince Edward to let him out to play a little later in the story so stick around ;-)
Thank you so much for reading!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: Tori_76 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Soixante-Neuf
69...YUMMY! Can't wait for the wedding night. Are they gonna make it?
Author's Response: LOL! I'm glad you liked! Are they going to make it? Well, you'll just have to stay tuned to find out huh ;-)
Thanks for reading babes!! *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: spacecakes (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 06:25 PM · On: North of the Border (V)
i love love LOVED every juicy (!) minute of your kick-ass writings -- thank you so much - v. cool how you included all the cullens into your work
thank you thank you (and my husband thanks you too!)
Author's Response: Thank YOU for taking the time to read!! You rock and please, stay tuned!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: Lilly9999 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 06:19 PM · On: Painfully Slow
I love this story! Yes, please continue past the honeymoon!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Soixante-Neuf
Whew, I think I need a cold shower now! ---- you're not the only one my friend! Hot Damn!
Author's Response: LMAO!! Thank you so much bb! *MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: ccf (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Soixante-Neuf
Mmmmmmmore Darkward
Author's Response: Patience my little perv, I'm sure I can convince Edward to let Darkward out to play a little bit later in the story ;-)
Thank you so much for reading!! *MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: samstatic (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Soixante-Neuf
MORE!...NOW!...(please)
this is just great, seriously though, keep going.
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you so much for reading babes!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Soixante-Neuf
oh soo good - more - more - more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and please, stay tuned!!
*MWAH*
Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Soixante-Neuf
Awwwww how cute,
i liked the whole jasper gets worked up,
so everyone gets worked up concept, haha
update soon
x x Cassie
Author's Response: Thank you for reading Miss Cassie! *MWAH*
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Soixante-Neuf
Okay, leaving the computer to go shower now. Yeah, may not be cold enough. Maybe I should just treak down to the harbor and jump off the dock...Whew! :D
J'aime bien le soixant-neuf!!!
Wasn't just dear Eddie's best experience to date, we're all right there with him, and WOW, what a ride!!! Damn, I'm REALLY looking forward to the wedding night now! (can you see my cheshire cat grin from there?) mwaha!
Author's Response: I've got buckets of ice water if you need it, I try to keep them handy nowadays ;-)
As always, thank you so much for reading and for all of your support with my humble little fic! You rock woman!!
*MWAH*
Reviewer: Life Is Everything (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Soixante-Neuf
This story is insanely hot. Seriously! Keep up the awesome work :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much bb!! Please, stay tuned!!
*MWAH*
Reviewer: heathcliff (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Soixante-Neuf
Oh, oh, gold star for me, gold star for me!! (Heathcliff holds her hand in the air and jumps up and down*) The second I read that chapter title, I said to myself, "Oh HELL." But hell it 'twas not. It was pure heaven, just like all of your chappies, BB! Soooooo H-O-T hawt!!!
And I just have to say, I love the part at the end where Edward communicates with Bella about how far they have come sexually. I thought that was very in character of him to say, and it added a lot of depth to your story.
And um, Edward taking me multiple ways from behind as his lip twitches against my neck? OUI, OUI, S'IL VOUS PLAIT!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, gold star for you bb!
Thank you so much for reading and for all of your support babes, big loves for you!!!!
*MWAH*MWAH*MWAHA*MWAH*
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Soixante-Neuf
Mmmmm! 69! I think I'm gonna like this chapter--as if I ever doubt it!
Author's Response: LOL! I hope you did, indeed enjoy it ;-)
Thanks for reading and I hope you survived *MWAH*
Reviewer: KS123 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Soixante-Neuf
Ok, so I've said this in every review, but I just love your story! It's so sexy and playful. It's such an enjoyable read. Keep it up, Kitty! Meeeeow! ;)
p.s. - Your Chapter End Notes were incredabley sexy and envoked a very wonderful image. Please do this next. Please. Thank you.
Author's Response: So glad you likey babes and have no fear, I'm sure I can coax Edward into letting Darkwark out to play a little later in the story ;-)
Thank you, as always, for reading! You rock!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: msbull (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Soixante-Neuf
Fantastic
Author's Response: Thank you so much! *MWAH*
Reviewer: Twiggy (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Soixante-Neuf
Oh Kitty - You made my day with this chapter! Hugs to you baby girl! If I ever win the lottery I will pay you to just write crazy amazing stories for me to read while I am sipping refreshing cocktails and watching my pool boys (who look shockingly like Rob and Kellan) doing something that requires them to not have on a a shirt! If you need more inspiration for future chapters you are welcome to join me!
Author's Response: Tie up the pool boys, I'm on my way!!! I'm so glad I can make your watching the half naked pool boys handle their long hard poles around your warm, wet pool ;-)
Thank you so much for reading babes, you are so awesome!! Extra love for visions of pool boys dancing in my head :-D
*MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*MWAH*
Reviewer: AgMag (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Soixante-Neuf
Holy Jesus!!!
That was unfathomable!!! I wanna live with Jasper and Alice now! Sheesh!!
Author's Response: Thank you baby!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: meyerjc2002 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Soixante-Neuf
Awesome. Can't wait to read the wedding night!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much bb! Only 4 days to the wedding, please, stay tuned!! * MWAH*
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Soixante-Neuf
Wow oh wow!!! ;)
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you! *MWAH*
Reviewer: Eiko007 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Soixante-Neuf
Yeah!!! kool!!! please keep writing!!! i'm going to keep checking for you're next update xD good luck!!! byebye
Author's Response: Thank you for reading babes!! *MWAH*
Reviewer: VampSK (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Soixante-Neuf
finally caught up on your story! thank God angsty edward has taken a hike! i have to say that i loved jasper in this chapter...nothing like spreading the love (lust), ha it was nice to see b&e have a nice soft moment at the end of this chapter too. how sweet!
looking forward to your next update! :)
Author's Response: YAY you're all caught up!!
I'm so glad you are enjoying my humble little fic! I adore all of my readers so much it isn't even funny!
Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review! *MWAH*
Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 07:19 AM · On: Soixante-Neuf
"I could have climbed back through her window and taken care of this little situation in ten seconds flat. That, I knew for a fact." I heart you! That was an awesome cocky Edward line (and yes...still thinking about 10 seconds).
Rose & Alice were hilarious! Alice trying not to look at Edward! And Rose, OMG! I was cracking up at their inner thoughts. Must have been a good conversation for Alice to not shop, I agree! Now I want to live with Alice and jasper...okay, just Jasper! But still.....
You amaze me yet again! You keep coming up with the best new ideas for the story! Keep it up! And I love your little edward's at the end! They are hot!
Author's Response: I heart YOU bb! I have to admit that I have awesome readers that tell me what they want to see happen between B&E or what they'd like to read about and I do my best to make it happen.
Thank you so much for reading babes, you rock!! *MWAH*
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