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Reviewer: Sabz (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2008 05:58 PM · On: Oneshot



Reviewer: lexehh (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 05:14 AM · On: Oneshot

I bet he was angry. Bella is such an adorable moron. But seriously, the thing I loved so much about Twilight was how little bad things always happened to her, that kind of stopped after Twilight, and if you ask me they were the best bits.

You did a good job. 

Reviewer: HandPFeather (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2008 06:59 PM · On: Oneshot

I thought it was a great one shot - too quickly finished however, I would have liked to see it develop into the dinner....but that's because the writting pulled me right in!  Nice job.

Author's Response:

Thanks alot! I think I enjoyed the comment on my writing more than I enjoyed your compliments on the story! lol! I've been considering writing a FF on the dinner scene, as well.

Well, if I do decide to do it, it will be up here!  And once again, thank you.

Reviewer: juliet233 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2008 11:02 PM · On: Oneshot

I think that was very well-written - I can completely see Edward acting that way :)

Author's Response: Thanks alot!! (Especially on the 'well written' comment! LOL)

Reviewer: NoMoreThanUsual (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 07:00 PM · On: Oneshot

That was good!  I enjoyed it a lot.  Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanls for reviewing^_~+

Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 05:03 PM · On: Oneshot

I enjoyed reading it, thanks!

Reviewer: RunsWithVampires (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 03:33 PM · On: Oneshot

 I liked this I think in Midnight sun this is how it will be.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I cant wait for MS. It's going to be good ^_^ Well, while until Meyer finishes MS, we can still imagine ^_~+

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