Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2008 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 10: Dinner and a Girlfriend
LOL Loved the end of this! OMG too funny! LOL Just read all the chapters, and gotta say I'm enjoying this fic. Can't wait to read more of it. Keep it coming! :) ~Cat~
Reviewer: darkangel_140 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 10: Dinner and a Girlfriend
great chapter! i loved Bella and Tanya's reactions to each other!
Reviewer: bedward4ever (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2008 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 10: Dinner and a Girlfriend
seriously that was funny!!! like keep going dont take too long though
Reviewer: Mart (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2008 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 10: Dinner and a Girlfriend
Freaking hilarious. That is one of the best chapters to date. Bella should have left it so it would look like Edward lost his job or something. Too funny
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2008 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 10: Dinner and a Girlfriend
LOVED it!! Bella's last comment to Tanya was PRICELESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Goo82 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2008 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 10: Dinner and a Girlfriend
loved the update
Reviewer: who knows (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2008 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 10: Dinner and a Girlfriend
I'm so glad you have a new keyboard, so you can give us more!! I was so happy to see there was a new chapter. Somehow I missed chapter 9 - Phone Call, so I got a double bonus! Tanya, she seems to ruin everything. He needs to kick her to the curb. So glad Bella had such a good time, more than fun, with Edward.
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2008 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 10: Dinner and a Girlfriend
YES! LOL GO Bella! XD Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: rhea12 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2008 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 10: Dinner and a Girlfriend
wonderful!!! update soon!
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2008 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 9: Phone Call
eeks!! What's Bella going to say to Edward??
Reviewer: NoMoreThanUsual (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2008 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 9: Phone Call
That was great! I chuckled at your line: "What a great sort of girlfriend I was!" Too funny. Another great chapter Reiko! I can't wait to see where you take this story. :D
Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 9: Phone Call
goodness, how long are your nails? lol. Great chapter for this story as always. I was wondering when you would update again. Sorry to hear about your keyboard. I'm looking forward to reading ch. 10!
Reviewer: Lola Schatzi (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 9: Phone Call
Get her Edward! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 9: Phone Call
Your Edward is so deliciously exhasperating the way he flip flops about Bella and irritating in his self absorption - write more!
Reviewer: Debussy_This (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 9: Phone Call
I love Edward's inner monologue. I can just see the drama rolling out from this point on. LOVE LOVE LOVE!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 9: Phone Call
Oh My!!!!! I am waiting patiently for the next update!!!
Reviewer: edwarddazzlesme17 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 9: Phone Call
this is a really good story
can't wait for the next chapter =]
poor keyboard...
Reviewer: edwarddazzlesme17 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 9: Phone Call
this is a really good story
can't wait for the next chapter =]
poor keyboard...
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2008 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 9: Phone Call
a cliffhanger?! my goodness! but a really realy great chapter!! can't wait for the next one!!!! so hurry if you please!
Reviewer: rhea12 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2008 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 8: Steamy After Dinner Dance
ahh!!! update soon!! I LOVE IT!!!
Reviewer: KayBressi (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2008 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 8: Steamy After Dinner Dance
I think Edward was right for confronting Bella. Granted, Edward was a huge ass in the beginning, but just when he started to turn around and be a good boy!!!
I think he could've chosen his words a little more carefully... Although, nobody really watches their mouth when their angry. Hell, I never watch my mouth. I hope everything gets better. I like happy endings
Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2008 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 8: Steamy After Dinner Dance
UH OH!!!!!!!!!!!!! Jake went to the restaurant and saw her! Oh shoot... let more drama begin! Love the long chapters! Can't wait for more!!
xoxo
jennie
Reviewer: movieandbookgirl (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 8: Steamy After Dinner Dance
Ah, so Bella and Jake were the ones embracing in front of the restuarant. I thought this chapter was very well written and I look forward to reading ch. 9!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 8: Steamy After Dinner Dance
AWESOME!! I cannot wait for the next update!!
Reviewer: NoMoreThanUsual (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 8: Steamy After Dinner Dance
Great chapter, Reiko! Nice and long too! ThHanks for that!! There's nothing better than a jealous Edward LOL What a great chapter and a great storyline. It's so original. Love it!
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