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Reviews For Gone Fishing
Reviewer: xiolaperry (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Fishing

I think this is the first Edward and Charlie fanfic I've read- and I really liked it!  I hope you write more.  I love 'missing moments'. thanks

Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Fishing

The fish were scared of Edward, I love it. I also love the fact that Edward took the time to do something with Charlie.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the love ;)

Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Fishing

This is one of the cutest non B/E onesots i've ever read! So adorable, so sweet, so real. Loved it. Halairious ithout trying to be overly funny, the situation itself is ironic and comical, an amazing story that i enjoyed reading to whole time!



Author's Response:

Wow!  Thanks so much.

Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:09 AM · On: Fishing

I really like stories with Charlies pov, he's so funny. I thought you did a good job with it.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I wish we saw more of Charlie's perspective in fanfiction, since we don't get it much in the books.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: izziey (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Fishing

fun-ny. especially since there were no fish!



Author's Response:

I'm glad readers found this amusing.  I wasn't trying to be overly funny, but I think the situation just kind of presented itself since it is so deliciously awkward.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: renee721 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 04:16 AM · On: Fishing

That was great! I loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: twilover09 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Fishing

There aren't many Charlie-Edward stories, and the ones that are usually focus on negatives, so it was fun reading a light-hearted one for a change. I think you portrayed both characters' personalities and mannerisms well, in canon, and still interesting. Good job!



Author's Response: Oh how I would love to see more stories that had characters that were not romantically involved! Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: kelsey_jim (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Fishing

you did a really good job with charlie. i loved it.



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 10:10 AM · On: Fishing

This was great. I think you really got the characters spot on and added just enough humor to make it wonderful. Terrific job!



Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I really appreciate your review.

Reviewer: ravenhpltc24 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2008 07:14 AM · On: Fishing

Haha, this was great! You'd never know this was your first fanfic. I love Edward/Charlie awkwardness. And you really captured Charlie's point of view well. Great job! I really enjoyed reading this. :)



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Charlie is so much fun; I should probably solely write in his POV haha.

Reviewer: edward_lover229 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 01:20 PM · On: Fishing

awww!! I think it was really cute the whole fishing trip idea very good! I also liked at the end when Edward was smiling beause you know he knew what Charile had said:]Sorry about my babbling:]



Author's Response: Yes, it was a small, yet sweet, victory for Edward, our favorite dazzler.  And I love anyone who reviews- I never regard it as babbling, lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Seventeen Forever (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 01:00 AM · On: Fishing

YOU SHOULD TOTALLY RIGHT ANOTHER FAN FIC!!! It was so awesome. I LUVED that last part where Charlie called him "son". This was an awesome story!!!! Awesome Job!

Author's Response: Another one's coming ;)  Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: amelia (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2008 06:01 PM · On: Fishing

I like this! It is very well written and captures Charlie's point of view wonderfully. Keep writing!! :)

Author's Response: I really like Charlie :)  Thank you for your comments!!

Reviewer: FIRE_and_ICE (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 09:29 PM · On: Fishing

Great story i really enjoyed reading it, can't wait to read more of your stuff.  =]

Author's Response: Thanks :)  I just posted my second fic!

Reviewer: Wings (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2008 11:28 PM · On: Fishing

Love.  It.  I felt like I was reading Charlie from Meyer's POV.  Dearest, I knew you could write!  :)  Haha, and I feel like I was probably your inspiration here in more ways than one ... some of the phrasing seemed like something I would say.  ;)  Guess we both have to do some give and take for our mutual characters.  Way to dazzle me.

Hope your travels have been uneventful.  Just finished New Moon, obviously, and I knew what I had to do first.  Can't wait to read what I know you have to be writing next.



Author's Response:

Haha, well, since you are my conscience, it would make sense that some things I would say would sound like something you would say :)  I have just started my next story, b/c I don't have anything else to do in Atlanta right now, lol.  I'll have to call you soon and give you an update.

I am so glad you could finally read it! 

Reviewer: Tai Birdsong (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2008 02:59 AM · On: Fishing

WIN!!!!

Ahaa. I live for fanfiction like this. You're reaaaallly good, I can't believe that you're a virgin authoress! Lmao.

Can't wait to read more of your stuff. ;D



Author's Response: Wow, thanks for your enthusiastic response!

Reviewer: per lamore di anima (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2008 10:23 PM · On: Fishing

congrats on your first fanfiction. i have been trying to write one for months but ive never typed a word.

as for quality it was amazing! very good. i love it. keep writing. 



Author's Response: Haha, my advice to you is to just suck it up and start typing whatever comes into your head.  I resisted at first (because I generally like to tell myself that I am a terrible, slow writer), but then it just starts coming very naturally.  Now I am hooked...I wish I had more time!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: juliet233 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2008 11:29 PM · On: Fishing

I like this!  It's fun :)  And I like the addition that the fish are scared of Edward *giggles*



Author's Response: Hehe...yeah, I don't think Edward is going to recommend his family take a fishing trip anytime soon.

Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 01:57 PM · On: Fishing

This was really sweet, and well-written. Plus, I think such an outing would have been completely in character for Edward.

Author's Response: Yay!  I wasn't sure whether or not people would respond well to Edward choosing to detach himself from Bella's hip.  I'm glad you think it could happen.

Reviewer: twilightitis (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 08:44 PM · On: Fishing

 ohhhh dont let reviews get you down... I liked it. it was refreshing to see charlies pov for once. you could prolly do this in edwards pov too. I like your writing style and i think you should continue writing.

Author's Response: I haven't been brave enough to try Edward's POV...you know, the whole hearing voices thing and all.  maybe in the future...lol

Reviewer: colourguardqueen (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 11:47 AM · On: Fishing

I liked it.

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: RunsWithVampires (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 11:39 AM · On: Fishing

 That was really good you should write more!



Author's Response: Thanks, I'll try :)

Reviewer: Marigold (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 11:38 AM · On: Fishing

Aww, this was really great! I think you kept Edward very much in character, and probably Charlie too for that matter. I enjoyed it very much! :)

Author's Response:

I always wonder what the heck Charlie is thinking, which is how this particular story came into existence.  Not to mention I really wanted to see Edward reach out to Charlie.  I mean, he wants to marry Bella, but he knows she has reservations about marriage mainly due to the fact that her parents would flip out.  The common sense solution is to try and dazzle her parents into loving the idea!  Not exactly how this story ends, but hey, it would be a start.

 

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: pixiechix7 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 11:36 AM · On: Fishing

I loved it!

It was funny and sweet and charming all in one! :)



Author's Response: Haha, that's what I was going for...glad you think I accomplished it!

Reviewer: Reiko Katsura (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 10:44 AM · On: Fishing

This was really great! I was giggling the whole read through!

I love how Charlie tries so hard to dislike Edward because of what he put Bella through, and even so, his efforts are a nugatory attempt. Seriously, who cant like Edward? lol!

All jokes aside, this was really great! It was interesting to read about Edward and Charlie's bonding trip!

For your first fan fiction, you did a wonderful job! I look forward to reading more fics from you! (If you want to write them, that is ^_~+)

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much!  What an encouragement.  I already have another story idea, so hopefully I can write it in a few weeks before school begins :)

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