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Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2013 12:15 PM · On: If I Was The One
this is a good story.i feel sorry for Bella. she wants to be loved and accepted for herself, where her husband want her to be his Barbie doll, kinda like a Stettford wife. Shes done this for so long that she hardly sees any of her old self anymore. Cheating is wrong but shes so lonesome and hurt and Jacob has drove her to that place.
Reviewer: just a fan (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2011 08:19 PM · On: Piece By Piece
its time for leah to tell bella what a dud jacob is, sounds like he and sam are from the same litter-----JERK,s this has been a good story and edward has had more than enough patience with bella.
Reviewer: taylorcm1831 (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2011 06:19 PM · On: You Make My Dreams Come True
really amazinh story. I love and adore it.
Reviewer: sam604 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2011 04:12 PM · On: You Make My Dreams Come True
What a great story, it was wonderful to read. Enjoyed the music selection. and i even googled some of the location you used just to see for myself what it looked it. Love london, never been, one day i will though. looking forward to the sequal if it takes place and your other stories. thanks for writing this.
Reviewer: lynard69 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Beautiful Disaster
Thank you for introducing Jon McLaughlin. He is really good. His song Human would go so well with this story.
Reviewer: lynard69 (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2010 07:33 PM · On: Same Problem
Thanks for all the warnings, but you make it out to be worse than it is. You make it sound like it is going to be soap opera trashy and in reality it is much better. You write with finesse and it is based in reality. I can imagine the plaguing guilt, as well as it should be there. But I am also happy to know that it is a E/B HEA. Plus this is the first fic I have read that has Rose and the meddling friend. Almost always it is Alice.
Reviewer: regina498 (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 05:32 PM · On: You Make My Dreams Come True
Love the story. Perfect example of why people should never settle for someone when it comes to marriage. True love is all consuming, never ending and grows only stronger as time goes by. It's worth holding out for....
Reviewer: Sydney Witherspoon (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 08:34 AM · On: Beautiful Disaster
i think you writing is very very good...
Reviewer: aechorp (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:07 PM · On: You Make My Dreams Come True
Thank you for the wonderful story.
Reviewer: Ladyannita83 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 06:18 PM · On: You Make My Dreams Come True
I loved the story....
Reviewer: djwolf55 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2010 08:14 PM · On: You Make My Dreams Come True
I just read your story. Simply marvelous! Thank you for such a great story!
Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:05 AM · On: You Make My Dreams Come True
Nice ending. It really summed things up, even without a sequel. You know they get their HEA complete with a baby.
Great job!
Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 01:18 AM · On: A Moon Song
I really wish I could finish tonight considering I only have 3 chapters to go, but it's 3 am here and my kids are going to be bounding in my room in a few hours.
Great job! I do find Bella annoying at time, and you have managed to make me hate Jacob in this fic (shame on you! lol), and Edward is as dazzling as ever...although he needed to have a bigger back bone on more than one occasion.
Can't wait to see how this all ends up!
Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2010 12:04 AM · On: Piece By Piece
Please, have Leah tell Bella! If I were in the situation I know I'd want to know!
Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2010 11:48 PM · On: Kiss and Say Goodbye
I really hope Edward grows some balls soon and makes her choose. It's not like she's really tied to Jacob in anyway, other than obligation and guilt....Although, I for one know what that's like....
Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 10:12 PM · On: You Don't Know Me
*sigh* I really don't like when people make Jacob the bad guy all the time. I love Jake. He's my second favourite character. Carlisle being my fav. In every fic, he just always seems to be cast in this light. I know why writers do it, the whole Jacob vs Edward thing, but I still don't like it
Author's Response: I know... I understand where you are coming from... Not sure why I did it... It just seemed right when I went to write it.
Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Awake
I know its wrong, but I would have done it too.
And Bella/Leah?? Hmmm......
Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Beautiful Eyes
I don't condone affairs either, but in her case....Yeah, I'll just leave it at that. Things happen for a reason
Reviewer: velvetbutterfly (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2010 08:47 PM · On: You Found Me
I admit I've had your story in my favs for awhile now. I read the first chapter ages ago and was immediatly intrigured....and then I was distracted by my own fic. But I'm back and ready to finally finish! Can't wait to see what happens
Reviewer: tox (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 05:07 AM · On: You Make My Dreams Come True
I super, mega loved this story!!! Thanks for sharing it with us. I hope the sequel comes soon...
Reviewer: amra (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Piece By Piece
I've been really enjoying your writing and this story! However, this chapter tore me apart! I must say that I'm shocked at Edward. I mean somewhere around a month after they broke up and he is already with someone else... that's hardly time to get over someone that was your soul mate... the love of your life!!
To Bella's credit she didn't ask for him back after she found out.
Reviewer: andersse (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 12:39 PM · On: You Showed Me The Way
Whoa - big shockers there. Glad we are getting a happy ending. I have enjoyed this story even though I was frustrated w/ Bella so often. But that is real life - nothing works out like it does in the fantasies!
Reviewer: andersse (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 07:30 AM · On: You, My Love
hooray
Reviewer: andersse (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2010 06:16 AM · On: On My Way Home
yay!
Reviewer: andersse (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Kiss and Say Goodbye
Yes, Edward needs to dump her ass. she doesn't deserve him!
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