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Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Obligatory Bella Barbie Chapter
He can hear the ovaries can't he. That's how he knew she called him Sex Hair. Oh my damn this story just got ten times better.
Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 2 - That Was Unexpected
Nice. Saw it coming but well played. ANd why must women objectify my gender by associating us with sweets. JK love the story.
Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
Oh so funny. Really enjoyed that chapter. More commentary from the ovaries they are funny.
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
that was so hilarious, my family probably thinks I am crazy from laughing at the computer so much. Looking forward to more!!!
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
Ah, amazing chapter, once again. This is a fab story, and I can't wait to read more. Thanks for the sweeeeeet lemon.
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
Wonderful, as always!
Thanks for updating!! :-)
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
wonderful chapter, entertaining as always, I loved the banter, and the girls where very amusing. Congrats on another smokin hot lemon, I can't wait to see what happens next, please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
love it....please continue
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
OK that was sexy as hell. I know this is inapropriate to say but I kinda felt like I was watching a porn, that's how descriptive that lemon was. Crap! now I have to wait til my husband comes home from work later. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: justjo (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
Hmm. Is Woodsrock Edward Woodward? Or did we just read about him there?
So sexy! More of it! More of Edward in charge, like in the forest car park! yum...
Reviewer: MiaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
Hahahaha I could totally tell what Edward was thinking while Bella was owning him and Emmett at Rock Band.
Especailly when you mentioned that she added using her hip to get into it, and his points kept going down. He was totally turned on!
Great job :]
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
Unique plot line. The first 16 chapters were very entertaining. I like the girls. They are funny. Are Edward's also talking to him as well? Looking forward to where the story will lead. Will she write a book? Quit the job? Keep up the good work. Your lemons are marvelous.
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
I loved this :]
Reviewer: twilightmom96 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
love it the poor volvo
and when u finish this story u so have to write an ending or something in the future that invoves the girls actually getting the sperm and making a baby LOL.
Reviewer: veggiegirl0601 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
Yay I loved this chapter! Edward's boys are definitely running the show lol. Thanks for the sexy times, can't wait for the next update! xoxo
Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
Loved it...so great!
I love this story and I'm wondering if there's going to be more drama thrown into the mix or is this mostly going to be a fluff story? Not that I mind either way, just curious!
That lovemaking session at the end was totally hot, by the way...YUM!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
OH MY GOD. Bella's ovaries are my favorite characters in your stories!! I can picture them as the welcoming committee for Edward's tadpoles, handing out maps of Ovumland, "You are here" marking the starting line, and a big pot o' gold drawn on her ovaries.
That was some seriously hot sex, btw. Rpatz boning me all slow and sexy like that? Shit, it gets NO better than that - not even at an all-you-can-eat meat buffet!! Of course, Bella's preferred meat is Edwardo's tube steak...or his chorizo caliente!!!
Love me some Dr. Hoo-Ha too....and poor Rose, having to live with dating the Peentologist...ICK!!!
Everything about this story cracks my ass up, seriously. Thank you for the update and 10,000 hyena laughs. :)
Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
lordy... gotta love the girls... the unoffical welcome wagon ladies.... gotta love Bella showing the Boys whose boss... and you know it turned Edward on that she beat him.....
love that she's fitting in with his fam... and her hurting the car was priceless.... not to mention Edward would have done it himself if he'd opened the door... you know....
can't wait to see what the am brings and if Bella will find a new job...
Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
I love the girls! And Dr. Hoo-ha - that is some funny stuff! Loved it! Love the chemistry that is so evident between your Edward and Bella too.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
Great chapter.
Poor Edward and his Volvo. It was hilarious how he planned to tease her. Yeah, I knew that wouldn't work, lol.
Please update soon?
Reviewer: JaJiTaXx (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 16: Anticipation...
this is so funny...
lmao...
i always laugh reading it...
keep going...
update soon
Reviewer: twinklyspecialkag (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:25 AM · On: Chapter 15: Show Me the Money
loved it, loved it, loved it...please continue!!
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 5: Cat Scratches and Road Rage
A DREAM SEQUENCE!!!! How could you! You mean mean person! That was too cruel!
p.s. loving the story & loving the girls!
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
Loved the banter between the two of them, nice to read about a Bella that can, sometimes string afew words together infront of Edward!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 15: Show Me the Money
love it....this is hilarious.....keep the chapters coming.
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