Reviewer: Wanderer417 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 20: Imprint?
Oh he's good if I were gay I would be swooning right now. Since this is not the case I will heartily applaud his efforts and make fun of him for being a moron in the first place. Good chapter.
Reviewer: booty (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 11: Magnetic Junk
Wow..an alcoholic. I really didn't see that coming(well, besides the last line of last chapter). Glad that he has been recovering. Looking forward to reading what you have in store for these two.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 02:22 PM · On: Chapter 15: Show Me the Money
Oh My this story is sure a funny one... That story was lets just say that I was LMAO!!
Reviewer: MiaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
That was perfect. Beautiful. Amazing job!
But I think my favorite part was the end when he trips on his own pants and boxers around his ankles. ;)
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
This chapter was great please please update soon!!!!!!
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
Aw hhhaha im happy they finally told each other.
Reviewer: Merrisol (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
Well, he definitely knows how to push her "button." He is soooo good at what he does. Lucky bitch .... lol. And the girls got to see the little swimmers again!
Reviewer: kalanthia (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
Oh, the mental picture that you just gave me there. I'm finding it very hard to stop giggling at the thought of Edward falling out of bed like that.
I'm glad they made up and are happy.
Reviewer: booty (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 3: The Obligatory Bella Barbie Chapter
Ha. Love the use of "sexytime tractor beam." Made me laugh so hard.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
Can't believe the girls weren't having a loud love-fest at the end...
Poor Edward...too much blood taken from the brain and moved to other places...
Reviewer: laurelbarnes (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
so will bella's girls ever get there baby?
Reviewer: Classical Vamp (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
Best post coital scene ever.
Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
Awww love! It just makes me so happy!
Reviewer: tigger12 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
god i love this story. absolutely amazing; really, i get so excited when it shows up on the feed
Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
Oh, hooray! So absolutely perfect!
Reviewer: Twilight_Muse (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
OOOOOHHHHH!!! AHHHH! I LIKE this one! It was funny
Reviewer: twilight0507 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
Loved this chapter. These two are so cute & funny together! keep up the good work!
Reviewer: wendeline (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
love it.
Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
Yes, it was DAMN GOOD for me! I loved it, they're so great together!
Reviewer: shellmarie (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
Love it! You had me laughing and awing during the whole piece. What I love about your writing is the humor instead of all the angst.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
Great chapter!
I loved everything about it! I'm glad that everything is good between them again.
The poor baby is starting to act like her mom. Hopefully that will stop, lol.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: pacpal (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
Ok, this chapter was just fucking amazing - first of all, that lemon was...just....sweet christ. There are no words - Well done my friend....well done. Plus, this whole chapter was fucking hilarious. Some of my favorite lines: "Oh, God. R.I.P., internal filter. You never did work properly." "Bella, you HAVE seen her lick her own butt, right?" "Never quote Star Trek again when we're naked" - and then you end it with him tripping over his boxer-wrapped ankles?!? I don't think I've ever laughed out loud so many times in one chapter. You are pretty much my hero :)
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
Ohh. I think I melted a marshmallow. I need to go show. I hope that lets you know how good that chapter was. ; - )
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 21: Melting the Marshmallow Man
can't wait for more
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