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Reviewer: racheygirl (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 34: Manbots and Making Out
What a gentleman... and we know he asked Charlie's permission didn't he??? If Bella doesn't want him, I'll take him!!
I really enjoy reading your fic... very witty and funny!!
Reviewer: kathy6900 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 32: You Don't Get Lei'd in Hawaii?
I've stayed at that Four Season. The tasty men serving strawberries on the beach is worth the price alone.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen30 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 7: Graduation Presents
I seriously thought I'd see fog start rolling out of it... then maybe a big ugly demon dog with red eyes would jump out of it and growl, "ZUUL."
Heh. If I wasn't so pissed that all my food was gone, I'd laugh at myself.
I am the Gatekeeper... I thought to myself, giving in to the urge to giggle.
And Edward's the Key Master, the girls said in a sing-song voice.
Maybe we could get together and bring about the Destructor. I'd like to see Jake get eaten by the Stay-Puff Marshmallow Man.
Fucking priceless! There are no words!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen30 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 6: The Money Shot
Eww.
Bella, we're staying away from him. Potheads have low sperm counts.
No argument from me there.
It is amazing that a fic can make me giggle every update but you my dear have suceeded.
Jake is retarded. He and Mike would make an excellent couple. Just saying.
No Edward?
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen30 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 5: Cat Scratches and Road Rage
Yes, Bella. Welcome to the dark side. Did you know we have cookies?
Omg Ovaries have cookies? LMAO
I was getting all hot and panting and you cockblocked me? That is so rude.
Okay why is the dog here?
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen30 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 4 :Dyslexic Heart
I just discovered this fic and Oh Em Gee! It is full of fantabulousness (That is a word in the Steph Chronicles, just so you know). Tanya the hussy pussy. *snorts*
The ovaries are brilliant in their horniness and I say screw proper dating etiquette and let them have sex already...
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 34: Manbots and Making Out
AAAAAUUUUUUUUGGGGHHH you big tease!!!
Reviewer: hisgreeneyes1 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
Outdoor sex... Hot!!! Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Nevaeh Rae (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
The banter between her and her ovaries is hilarious!!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 34: Manbots and Making Out
Wonderful trip to beautiful countryside. Winding, curvy roads are never good after just eating. Marvelous pool and waterfall moment between Edward and Bella. Bella knew proposal was coming and wanted it. Now the man proposed in a beautiful setting, very romantic, and she yelled "Oh no". What's up with Bella? Yes she doubts herself, but she isn't her mother or father. Their relationship was/is nothing like theirs. She and Edward have a strong, compatible, humorous, loving, cheesy, and snarky relationship. Each party can be themselves. Each are accepted for who they are and will be. She may doubt herself, but she shouldn't Edward knows what's right.
Reviewer: lydchil (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 34: Manbots and Making Out
Oh my gosh! The first attempt of the proposal and the actual proposal were very cute! Great work! I'm excited to see what Bella says in the next chapter!
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 34: Manbots and Making Out
A cliffie on a cliff top !
What are you doing to us ?
Thank god the next chappie is written !
Update !
Pretty please ?
Reviewer: Nevaeh Rae (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 5: Cat Scratches and Road Rage
Thank you so much for mentioning Road Rage cards, I googled them b/c at first I didn't believe it but they were there!! I love you for introducing me to them, they are going to be my new best friend!!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 34: Manbots and Making Out
The water sex was hot, the proposal was sweet and Bella's a fucking moron! :)
Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 34: Manbots and Making Out
I knew it!!!!! Bella don't freak out girl! Just take the damn ring and marry that man! And Edward! I love you because you kept trying lol! Great chapter!
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 34: Manbots and Making Out
Wheeeee~! I wondered if he would actually get it out today :)
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Chapter 34: Manbots and Making Out
holy jaysus. excellent chapter!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 34: Manbots and Making Out
Well, damn!
Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 34: Manbots and Making Out
Wow - i've read the whole thing over 2 days...this is one of THE BEST I've ever read...Love it
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 34: Manbots and Making Out
Wow... what a place to leave the story! I actually like the cliffie. LOL My best friend and his wife went to Hawaii for their honeymoon and their pictures were just absolutely breathtakingly beautiful. The pineapples they brought home were incredible. Love loved the chapter. I had a feeling he was going to propose wehen they were on the park before he got hit by the frisbee. Such a great chapter.
Reviewer: vampluvr88 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 7: Graduation Presents
Don't know whether to ROTF or pull my tongue back in ... : ). Love your humor and keep up the fantastic work!
Reviewer: mackie911 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 34: Manbots and Making Out
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 4 :Dyslexic Heart
I am laaaaaaaaaaaaaffin at this chapter. Love the banter. And the cat? Haw haw!!
Reviewer: stilly001 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 34: Manbots and Making Out
Dude. you are mean. poor edward! she better say yes immediately! he's begging bella! begging! girl, you crazy.
Reviewer: sheknitsnicely (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 34: Manbots and Making Out
Oh wowz. That was intense. Why would you do that, eh? A cliff hanger.....ON A CLIFF. I like your style. Really looking forward to the next installment, OBVIOUSLY, and thanks for the lemon. I REALLY appreciate it, I mean REALLY. :D x
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