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Reviewer: casey1121 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

Holy Shit! I was not expecting her to nearly fall off the bloody cliff! I wasn't even expecting Edward to propose in the last chapter. I love this story - it's so fun and sweet and not predictable. Can't wait for more! Love it! Thanks!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

Love the end of this chapter!

Reviewer: lovin_twilight (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

she's gonna say yes!  i know it...the girls won't let her say no!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

Bella has such great insecurities about herself.  She is so afraid she'll be like her parents especially like her mother that she can't make a permanent commitment.  Edward forces Bella to talk with him about her thoughts and feelings.  Bella has an awakening with her feelings about Edward. She loves him and wants to stay with him.  She finally answers his wedding proposal with "Yes".   Edward wanted to kiss her to celebrate her still being alive and their engagement.  Bella stopped him because she didn't want him to kiss her after she was car sick.  Soccer Mom has everything.  Like a boy scout always prepared for every occasion.  While she is getting rinsing her mouth Bella is just Bella on her feet.  Coordination isn't Bella's strong suit at all.  Fate has a hand in Bella's clumsiness over the guardrail as she falls heading face first to the edge of the cliff to tumble to the rocky shore and ocean.  Thank goodness for Edward's fast reaction time and grabbing her ankle to keep her on the penisula to avoid the edge of the cliff.  Bella had cuts and scrapes all over her hands, arms, knees, and legs.  Even her face was affected.  The both of them realized that Bella's life almost ended in that second.  Edward was frightened he was going to lose his world when she fell over the cliff.  Bella also realized the closeness of tragedy to herself.  Edward is in protective and caretaking mode with Bella.  They check into the hotel and arrive at their cabin.  Edward cleans her wounds and doctors them. Edward after making love with Bella after their nap has a realization of how fragile life is and how quickly life can change.  Edward makes another proposal.  Bella is confused she's already said yes to his marriage proposal.  No Edward wants to get married ASAP.  Doesn't want another moment not together and joined.  Bella goes into shock for another day.  It was hard enough for her to say yes to being engaged and now he wants marriage.  Edward and those tractor-beam emerald eyes can talk Bella into anything when she's dazzled with his eyes and kisses.  Looks like before they leave Hawaii there will have been two Cullen boys getting married for better or for worst.

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

Loved the chapter.  I held my breathe as Bella was tettering over the edge.  I wodner what Bella will do!  OooOooOOOOoooo

Reviewer: busyreading (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

Fabulous, always fabulous!!!

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

*Le gasp*

Very nice twist on the cliff-diving scene. Let's get these two reproducing, shall we? The girls are going nuts here.

Reviewer: kriskit5 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

will there be a baby at the end?

Reviewer: kalanthia (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

Great chapter.

The best part are the last three lines! Why wait?

Reviewer: edwardmania (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats


Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

Jesus H!  I swear to baby Jeebus, only this crazy ass, snarky Bella and her motherfucking talking ovaries would accept a marriage proposal LIKE THAT...with vomit breath...and then almost kill herself accidentally...IN MAUI!  *shaking head*  Poor Edward, he has no clue what he's in for with this crazy chick.  LOL  Well, maybe he does and he's really just at nuts deep down.  SHEESH!

Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

Good lord Bella! I'm happy she's alive! I didn't think she'd say yes so soon. Yay! Great chapter!

Reviewer: jatara18 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

LMAO! I thought about the end of New Moon as soon as I got to that last part and then read the A/N made me crack up! This story has been amazing so far keep up the good work!

Reviewer: vampfan173 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

This chapter had it all! Romance, comedy, cliffhanging drama. . . hahaha.  Loved the kstewart "oh" at the end of the chapter.

Reviewer: pamirvine85 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

woohoo!!!!! lovin it.

Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

She going to marry the Precious.  Today, if she knows what is good for her.  Waiting on the edge of my seat.

Reviewer: mariebethmiles (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 17: What's New, Pussycat?

I think you should write movie scripts. You are freaking hilarious. You've got plot, drama, jokes, and wonderful writing. That is more than most movies can say these days. Fantastic job.

Reviewer: tsarcasm (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

So sweet! 

Reviewer: twilgirl (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

Holy crow!!!

Reviewer: the_summerwind (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

love ur writting two thumbs up if i more thumbs than one those would be up too so praise the lord i only 2 thumbs.plz plz plz update soon

Reviewer: sheknitsnicely (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

OH YEAH OH YEAH OH YEAH! We DOOOOOOO want to marry the precious today plz? F'yeah. I'm glad you didn't keep me waiting too long since the last update. I might have had a coronary! :D Can't WAIT! x

Reviewer: Wlbmh (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

Hilarious! Fabulous! Loved the crack about Emmett thinking she would be jumping off a cliff after the proposal. My vote is with the "girls"...get married TODAY! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

I'm glad she said yes!

For a moment, I thought Bella would fall down the cliff. =( But I should have trusted you, so....shame on me.

I don't know if Bella will get married that day, but she might since she had a near death experience. Besides, who can say no to Edward?

Looking forward to your next update!

Reviewer: twi_mom_teddi (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  a million times YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fantastic chapter!!!  if it means having edward bandage me up, I will gladly almost fall off a cliff, ok?  : )

Reviewer: CANyouDAZZLE (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun

aww I'm blown you took the other banner off. :(

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