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Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 37: Sybil Lives Here (vjgm)
I thought this was good! Thanks! :)
Reviewer: gypsymomma (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
I loved this story so far! Its kept me laughing and smiling the whole time. Can't wait to read the rest.
Reviewer: edwrdcu77enlover (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 20: Imprint?
who wouldn´t fall in love for this Edward? his a keeper ;)
Reviewer: JBender (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 32: You Don't Get Lei'd in Hawaii?
I just want you to know that this is by far my favorite way to read Bella and Edward together. Snark is always a winner. You are an amazing writer. I love love love it. :)))
Reviewer: edwrdcu77enlover (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 15: Show Me the Money
soooooooooo funny! hope my family gatherings were the same :)
Reviewer: professormoody (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
just found your sorry and spent all day reading..love it!!!!!
Reviewer: Emmi (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
This was so cute!!! The "marry me TODAY" thing was just total winner :) I can only imagine Alices wrath :D Loved loved loved this chapter !!!
Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
OMG!!! I love this fic. I've been reading this for 4 days!! The best AU ever!!
I can't wait to read the next one.
Rox
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2010 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
Oh wow! This is a great story! I read it all at once. I can't wait for more!!! :)
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
Oh that was awesome. Any story that references the best parody ever is awesome. LOL May the schwartz be with you! LOL
I'm glad Bella finally agreed. Charlie is a smart guy. Very sweet chapter. Although I'm curious where Edward went during breakfast. Will we find out? Was he getting a honeymoon suite??
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
great update please please update soon!!! And please tell me that edward will at least tell his family!!!
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun
GREAT GREAT!!!!! This chapters have been great!!! but please update soon!!!!
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
Loved it! Really sweet! I loved the bargaining with Charlie (and I'm glad she told him in advance).
Reviewer: bighenluvsrobert (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
AWESOME------WAITING FOR MORE.----------LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
I can always count on you to make me smile no matter what I say stop the birth control and let the girls loose for a run just think how mad they will be if their plan woks and the twins get really big while they are benched for nine months
Reviewer: Azrielstar (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
Aw---- I think that was my fav chappie ever- especially the cheese:) I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: kerrylee (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 35: Island in the Sun
Oh god, oh god, oh god! I was on tenderhooks all day with this, trying to sneak more reading time throughout work.... never a good idea! Flippng amazing cliff scene, for a multitide of reasons. Felt I was in shock too, after it all.
Reviewer: megsten (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
aww .... alice is gonna kill her lol
Reviewer: sheknitsnicely (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
Ah they are indeed SO DARN CUTE! And I love that Charlie is planning on hazing him. Ha ha. He had to do it. He wouldn't be Charlie if he didn't. The girls are my knights in shining armour. They know what's best. BELLAWARD FOREVER! x
Reviewer: Fairest of Them All (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
THEY are precious :)
Reviewer: lovin_twilight (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
wow, that was A LOT of cheese. I kept picturing them rolling around in the surf making out with him wearing one of those teeny tiny man shorts like in James Bond. How many chapters are left? I am going to be so sad!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
Edward's proposal of getting married in Hawaii now and another ceremony when they return to WA. Bella has been thinking over the options. She decided to say yes. She told Charlie about it and she haggled her dad down to 1 week of harassing Edward. They had fun on the beach. Edward loved her black bikini. After talking to her dad she told Edward they have to go shopping. He asked what for. She said a dress. Sounds like she's going through with the wedding. Has Edward even called his family about it? Will Bella call Renee or wait until she returns home? Will Alice be devasated that she had no say in the plans or decisions about the wedding? Surely Alice, Esme, and Rosalie will plan a huge reception party or small wedding and the reception. Alice loves to party.
Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
omg..i love this story..i've read it through twice now!!!!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
Aww! I hope they get married sooner rather than later!
Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2010 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 36: Playing Hardball (vjgm)
yay! how could she not marry him asap? great chapter!
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