Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 2 - That Was Unexpected
Oh lawd! That's hilarious! Emmett as a pro wrestler!!!
And love that Bella's ovaries have a mind of their own...her own cheering section!
Author's Response: Cheering section, peanut gallery, evil devil voice... :)
Reviewer: ShanShan (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 2 - That Was Unexpected
LOL. The last few sentences of this chapter made me laugh so hard I almost peed my pants...But it'd be cool, right? :p
Love that Emmett's a pro wrestler. Kinda suits him, in a way. Am really looking forward to the date though. Go Sex Hair!
Great start! I'm most definitely following this to the end. You've got me hooked. :)
Author's Response: It would DEFINITELY make you cool. Billy says so.
I hope you enjoy the date and the surprise I left for everyone at the end. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 2 - That Was Unexpected
Emmett as pro wrestler The Grizzly aka Mr. Meat Sweats - I Love It!
Are the loose track pants his special Thanksgiving pants? My face hurts from smiling/laughing. This really is fun - It is Definitely going in my favorites :)
Author's Response: They might be. Because they have snaps all the way down the sides, and he can rip them off if they get too tight. Isn't that a visual...
Glad I could make you smile!
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
That was sooooo much fun :) Can't wait to hear more from the ovaries and for a call to Dr. Sex Hair !
Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 2 - That Was Unexpected
fun
Reviewer: Ambra (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 2 - That Was Unexpected
I really like the characters. It will be interesting to see where you take this. I agree it should come with a warning about liquids and taking a human moment before reading. You are in my favs.
Author's Response: So glad I could make you laugh. I thought this chapter wasn't even validated yet... Hope I didn't mess it up! Sorry if I made you pee in your pants... but that is what I aim for, after all. I'll include a requirement for wearing Depends or Ooops I Crapped My Pants in the next chapter.
Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
Meat sweats.
Thanksgiving pants.
I have tears dripping down my face and I just wheezed like my Nana, I am laughing so hard. I won't ask you for an update because I hate when people do that to me...
screw it. UPDATE.
Author's Response: I love making people wheeze. I'm like pollen that way. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: malice (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
Very cute so far. I'm definitely intrigued. The setting is definitely unusual and the overall playful tone is fun. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you keep reading and enjoy!
Reviewer: malice (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
Reviewer: Lanemyer (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
EPIC! So funny, I really loved it but I figured I might when it said her ovaries were going to talk to her.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you continue to read. More fun with body parts coming up!
Reviewer: randigiles (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
This needs to come with a disclaimer..."Do not consume liquid near laptop while reading" I nearly killed the computer when i came upon "meat sweats".....i am going to use that for days! lmao.........please update quickly.
Author's Response: So sorry about the laptop! I have a strict rule: no liquids within 5 feet, because if they're any closer than that, it's going to find its way onto my keyboard. My good friend coined that term, meat sweats, to describe what happens to my hubby every time we go to one of those places. He just won't stop eating!
I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: carolinacrc (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
:grins:
Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
OMG you had me at Smarties! for reals, I miss them....it's not weird to miss chockies right? =)
Oh and ovaries do really talk, seriously. Mine said YES PLEASE when I met my hubby...awwwww lol
I really like what you have so far, I lolgasmed with Meat Sweats. That shit is hilarious!
Melsie!
Author's Response: No, it's not weird to miss candy! My hubby gets the meat sweats whenever we go to one of those places... he IS emmett. Just a little skinnier, and a lot more techno-savvy. :)
Are you Canadian? I had a friend in Canada who sent me the chocolate Canadian smarties, and I sent him the American sweet and sour ones. Both kinds are awesome!
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
Is that a valid number ? I remember having my ovaries talked too everytime I'm watching Rob Pattinson (hihihi) just kidding!
Author's Response: Ha I wish... the last 4 digits are actually my home phone number when I was a kid! Seriously... that's where I came up with the ovaries... because they talk to me when I watch Robward! No lie. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
excellent story!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so excited to be able to post here, and I appreciate your review! I'm giddy. This Bella is a lot like me, so it makes me feel nice.
Submit a Review
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
| 
