Reviewer: lea72476 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
Great story! I love Emmett quoting Ricky Bobby. HA!
Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
i LOVE mr. meat sweats. I get caught giggling from him. And THE GIRLS.. they just say what we all feel! love em
Reviewer: B and E 4ever (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
your story really cought my eye when i read the summary i am really enjoying it so please keep the chapters coming ill beg if i have too.
Reviewer: VampyreLvr (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
I seriously havent laughed this hard in a while. I'm sitting here at work (well pretending to be working) and everyone thinks I've lost my friggin mind. PLEASE post the next chapter. What do you accept for bribes?
Reviewer: Akalei88 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
So when do we find out why Edward's all worried and whatnot?
Also, great chapter, nice sexual tension.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
Awesome chapter. I think that Charlie should've put Jake in the back. I thought that Operation Dazzle was going to work, but it didn't. How did Edward get out of it?
Please update soon?
Reviewer: dvandever (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
I really love the fiesty Bella. Plus i like that you give Bella the little angel and demon's usually its Edward who has all the voices telling him stuff, lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: hixxybaby1102 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
I am loving this story!!
Reviewer: Mombailey (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
This works for us. This really, REALLY works for us. Just a little to the left...HAHA!!! I love all the movie references...they're hysterical--RICKY BOBBY!!!! and ok here goes.....PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!!! I WANT MORE!! My girls will invite your girls over for a sleep over and they can do each others nails :o) I LOVE YOU!!!! hows that??
Reviewer: lightingfast (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
that is so funny
Reviewer: mangler (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
mmmmm I love tarts, especially citrus. can't wait!
Reviewer: sweetishbubble (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
can i just say that i love how you give the ovaries a say in this? It's classic and cracks me up. thank god my girls are quiet, I think i'd have to rip them out if they were that vocal. But, I think they learned their lesson when the uteras took a permanent vacation, if u catch my drift....
oh - and BRING ON THE LEMON!!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
loved opertaion dazzle and the Father Boyfriend meeting, just as awkward as they always are. The internal Bella and her girls conversations are very entertaining and I am just loving Emmetts character.
The car keys scene was hot, and I can't wait to see what kind of lemon tarts the girls serve up. I have the feeling that both Bella and Edward are about to become big fans of lemon tarts.
Pleasde don't keep as waiting for too long, the edge of your seat is a very uncomfortable place to sit.
Reviewer: ainsleyhayes (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
Jeebus! You could update in 500 word bursts, and The Girls would still have me clutching my ovaries with glee every time. So... what can I bribe you with? I had a professor who accepted bribes on degree of how badly you were failing: C - an iPod; D - a pug puppy; F - an iPug (which is, apparently, a pug puppy that will sing songs). So... I want this next chapter so badly that I will give you an iPug, and teach it all of your favorite songs. So please don't be a cockblock and withhold the treats. Think of the iPugs. I trust you'll do the right thing.
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
Operation Dazzle was a brilliant plan... too bad Bella couldn't stick with it. Btw, Emmett being a professional wrestler is one of the funniest career choices I've seen for him to date. And Ben practically being a fangirl is equally awesome. Can't wait for part 2!
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
LOL this was funny. Love the banter between the group. And loved how Edward tricked Bella into thinking that he had never watched Talladega Nights. Hilarious. Love the dynamic that Bella and Jake have.... annoyed yet loving big sister to annoying freeloading little brother. LOL
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 7: Graduation Presents
The girls are cracking me up..
And I just have to say..I recently got an iPhone and while I was waiting to be seated at a restaurant Saturday night I was reading fanfiction in extremely tiny print. I completely ignored my sister for my fanfiction addiction. haha
Reviewer: struck_at_the_sky (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 7: Graduation Presents
I'm reviewing, I'm reviewing... Wouldn't want to upset 'the girls'... not when they entertain me so...
Again, another chapter that did not disappoint at all. I wonder if he'll let her drive? The inner dialogue with 'the girls' is, as always, humorous. I've loved every word of this story so far. You're doing something quite lovely here. Thank you for sharing!
Reviewer: edwardsproperty21 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 7: Graduation Presents
hahaha i love this story
Reviewer: Luna Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 7: Graduation Presents
its a really good story
cant wait till the next chapter
Luna Cullen x
Reviewer: Hollycooks (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 7: Graduation Presents
v funny lolcatz is mai fayv
Reviewer: bitmorechaos (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 7: Graduation Presents
i adore you.
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 7: Graduation Presents
Loved the ghostbusters reference in this chapter! You never fail to crack me up. I hope you update soon. =)
Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 7: Graduation Presents
I am glad that he surprised her and came to graduation. That meant so much to her. I wonder how much the girls will have to wait. They are tormenting her and I think it is so funny.
Love the story -- update soon
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 7: Graduation Presents
very hot, Just loved Edward pining her against the wall and the gifts from Charlie. I really hope that all the men in Belas life get to meet at the diner. I am sure it will be just as well written and entertaining as this chapter, maybe even more so since a worried Father meeting the new boyfriend is always fun to read.
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