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Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
Very hot, looking forward to more! :)
Reviewer: Jojo3508 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Obligatory Bella Barbie Chapter
ovary whisperer that is pretty freaking funny. the whole idea of ovaries talking and giving Bella advice is harlious. I have never laughed so hard. I can't wait to finish reading what you have posted so far. Great job!!
Reviewer: Elisabethe (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
those girls are some hussies!!! WAY TO GO BELLA!!!
Reviewer: yeuxdor (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
mmmmmmmmm
You wanted something more articulate?
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
totally can't wait for more!!!!!
Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
hats off to the girls, another great chapter, Glad to see that the relationshipis moving ahead in leaps and bounds. Also glad to see that Edward wants to figure out where the realtionship is headed before they take the next step, thoufg I am wondering if that will happen before morning as well.
Thanks for another great update, please don't keep us waiting to long for the next one.
Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: Winifred (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
holy christ this is some funny shite. love the movie references reallyreally most excellent and we are not worthy
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
This story never fails to crack me up! The lemon was amazingly awesome, too.
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
WTF?! I am with the girls on this one. What a waste of good genetic materials! For some reason I still want more... grrr! It was very well written and yummy, but I am not fully satisfied. ;) Yes, you did give us a bit of RST, but not enough! Good God! You have me craving more sex for these two like a pregnant woman hoovering curly fries and vanilla milkshakes!!!
I certainly hope you are going to explain why Edward was a bit hesistant to actually fuck her. Can he really read the minds of those girls? Is he afraid of wanting to be a daddy so soon after meeting Bella? I need answers and more lemons! It's going to be agony for me to wait for the next chapter, so you did your job very well. Thanks for another fun and lusty installment! :D
Reviewer: jess25 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
love it
Reviewer: Mombailey (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
MY PREEECIOOOUSSSS... the girls whispered. Then they fainted dead away. OMFG!!! Hysterical!!!! I can see them placing the back of their hands over their foreheads as Gollum has his way with them!!!!....LOL OMG LOL!!!!
"That good, huh?" I am the greatest. OK, Rocky or Mr T....HAHAHAHAH!!!!!
I was such a liar. It would probably happen before we got out of bed the next morning. OMG!OMG!!! I think I just woke my husband up laughing so hard I shook the bed!!!! You my darling are as priceless to me as my collection of New Kids on the Block dolls and the beer bottle cap I saved from my first date with my husband of 18 years!!! I LOVE YOU SISTER!!!
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
Whooo Bella! She got what she wanted. Heh heh. So my guess (which has been the same from the beginning) is that Edward is a recovering addict--alcoholic perhaps? Don't tell me if I'm right or wrong. Just throwing guesses out there. Great chapter!
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 2 - That Was Unexpected
Holy Shit Batman!!! Emmett is The Grizzly!!! That is freaking hilarious!!!! So in love with this story! Must go on to next chapter now!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
Bella won! For a moment I thought that Edward would win, but no.
Great chapter! I can't wait to read more! Please update soon?
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
Haha!!! I'm now officially in love with your story! I've laughed so hard reading this chapter I started crying. I can't wait to hear more from Bellas ovaries and of course to see if the Panty Alert Level has been increased. Hehe
Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
well, they've broken the ice so to speak.... and now they have to actually talk, Edward has something to say, and if they want to have a serious relationship Bella needs to let him speak and stop obsessing over the physical, they've gotten a taste but before they get so caught up in that stage..... you know.... life needs to be a part of it!
and Edward needs to take the oppertunity to talk when he has it.... just do it man!!!
can't wait for more!
Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
Finally! They got some... sorta.
Reviewer: starlit (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
leavin some love - dang your storyline ROCKS! Love these two and your creativity with them!!
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
Great chapter! I love the girls.
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 9: Lucid Dreams
Very nice, can't wait to read more. Please update soon. Love to read the secret Edward's been waiting to tell Bella once the time was right.
Reviewer: Southern_Magnolias (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
Such fun! Bring on the lemonade!!!! Now, stop reading your reviews and post the next chapter! ;-)
Reviewer: lifesaver918 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
This story is awesome! I have to say when I first read the summary about her ovaries speaking to her, I was a bit hesitant, but I'm glad I decided to read this anyway. Its fucking hilarious!!! Your writing is excellent as are your characters and how they interact with each other. Hopefully after this last chapter Jake won't try to become a thorn in Bella's side.
Please please please update with the next chapter soon!!
Heather
Reviewer: lovely_e (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
Love it!!!! Need more, update soon!!!!
Reviewer: AS Blythe (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 8: Shake and Bake
I'm not sure how to get lip gloss to you intact, so hopefuly a review saying how much I'm enjoying Bella and her very vocal body parts (that sounds rather dirty...) will encourage chapter 9 to appear soon.
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