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Reviewer: zay1413 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
Excellen Chapter, makes me want more!!
Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
LOL!!!!!!!!!!! i think the whole "about three things..." is ridiculously awesome!!!!! i couldnt stop laughing alloud! so much so, in fact, i woke my baby! (it's 12:55 AM here btw!) hahaha, i think this is my favorite bella ever!
Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 39: Muffins, Misapprehensions, and Making Promises(vjgm)
Aww.....tear. I LOVE these guys. I'm going to miss then and I love ur last chapter. I've read afew last chapters that have really let me down and this one was perfect.
Reviewer: sadie_nikol (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 39: Muffins, Misapprehensions, and Making Promises(vjgm)
YESSSSS, procreate they MUST!!! I've wanted this for THE longest!!! I'm so sad this is coming to an end, and you are AMAZING!!! I LOVE how they made up, awesome!!!
Reviewer: Life Is Everything (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 39: Muffins, Misapprehensions, and Making Promises(vjgm)
A beautiful ending! Congratulations on finishing a great story :D
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 39: Muffins, Misapprehensions, and Making Promises(vjgm)
LOVE IT SO MUCH! Soooo. missed a pill?
Reviewer: Schlager G (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 39: Muffins, Misapprehensions, and Making Promises(vjgm)
I love this story. Thank you!
Reviewer: twilgirl (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 39: Muffins, Misapprehensions, and Making Promises(vjgm)
NOOOOO! say it ain't so. I don't want these two to go anywhere!!
Reviewer: twilgirl (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 38: Confessions, Coercions, and Chicken Wings (vjgm)
I love that chapter. Their banter is great!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 39: Muffins, Misapprehensions, and Making Promises(vjgm)
Bella's procrastination in not telling Edward about having the apartment and her doubts for the short time of being home. She had already made her decision that home was wherever Edward was and would be. She planned on surprising him with muffins and coffee to make the talk about her fears a little easier, but she forgot her cell phone. While she was away the landlord of her apartment called to mention apartment floor flooded needed maintenance men repair to arrive today. Woke Edward and he was angry about her not mentioning about her apartment. But they never went to her apartment to pack it up and figure out what to do with furniture, etc.... So when Bella got home with coffee and muffins he was upset. Bella did try to explain that she was going to tell him when she brought back breakfast, he didn't believe her. Their first married fight and Edward promised they would talk about it when he got home from work. Bella was upset thought she lost the best part of her life Edward. She went to her dad's to talk. Dad said you just need to talk with Edward. Her dad gave her a heirloom picture frame to Bella for her birthday. It started to storm in Forks so Bella tried to call Edward on his cell, her cell, and left messages she would be home as soon as the storm stopped in Forks. Also that she loved him. If Bella's luck wasn't bad enough, the rental car parked under the tree in front. The wind, lightening, rain, and storm the branch broke off and crashed into the rental car. Oh boy. Wonderful. Lights are off, Charlie's cell phone was dead, what to do? How can you tell Edward you can't get home? Charlie said Edward would have to pick her up. Bella thought was over and he would never come for her. Our hero loves Bella so much, he was afraid Bella left him the way things ended that morning. He arrived on Charlie's doorstep. Bella and Edward finally had their talk about her fears and his apology. He gave her a marvelous gift. A charm bracelet that represented how they met, their marriage, and many more meaningful events in their relationship. The best part was it could have more charms added throughout their marriage. They slept in Bella's old room for the night and celebrated their love quietly so Charlie wouldn't join them for the final act. Sleeping in each others arms and knowing together they can handle anything now and forever.
Reviewer: niknox (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 39: Muffins, Misapprehensions, and Making Promises(vjgm)
Oh, I've just adored this all the way through!
Reviewer: zoe1982 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 10: The Morning After
Hah!! I so knew it!!!
Reviewer: sadie_nikol (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 38: Confessions, Coercions, and Chicken Wings (vjgm)
That was so fuckin' HOTTTT I don't know what to do with myself, LOVE shower sex, LOVE IT!!! Gr8 fuckin' job!!!
Reviewer: Princesse2186 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 39: Muffins, Misapprehensions, and Making Promises(vjgm)
Beautiful. Thank you.
Reviewer: MsLessa (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 39: Muffins, Misapprehensions, and Making Promises(vjgm)
Thank you for taking us on such a wonderful ride. I've greatly enjoyed your Edward and Bella. The Girls though have absolutely made this story. I have laughed so hard at Pot Smoking Clueless Jake, Tanya the Hussy Cat, Rennie.... so many good moments that it makes me sad to see this go.
Thank you for all the effort and time you've spent on this. It's given me hours of enjoyment.
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 39: Muffins, Misapprehensions, and Making Promises(vjgm)
brava
Reviewer: hwright605 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 39: Muffins, Misapprehensions, and Making Promises(vjgm)
Loved this story from start to finish! A touch of angst but no heartfail - perfect. Thank you so much for sharing it.
And muffins are really just bald cupcakes y'no. ;)
Reviewer: Haryk (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 39: Muffins, Misapprehensions, and Making Promises(vjgm)
One word for ya: PERFECT.
Is it silly that I got just an eensy weensy bit teary-eyed? Hehehe.
But anyways, I'm beyond sad that this story is just about over. I really, REALLY enjoyed following this Bella and Edward on their journey to happily ever after. Somehow you managed to keep me literally laughing out loud must of the time, "awwww"ing the other half, and nodding in complete understandment other times as you tied in real life aspects. This had everything you could want: humor, fluff, HOTT lemons, but always realistic and believable.
Ahem. Over all, one of my favorites!!!! :D Can't wait for the epilogue!
Reviewer: tsarcasm (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 39: Muffins, Misapprehensions, and Making Promises(vjgm)
Awww, sweet. Love the sex in her old room.
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 39: Muffins, Misapprehensions, and Making Promises(vjgm)
"because life is a work in progress" I love how you wrapped that up. She's still quirky and goofy and Bella, but just how she deals with missing a pill shows so much emotional growth. Poor sweet Edward thinking she left him; poor Bella getting trapped at her dad's. At least he got there to her. And she was ready for him. And they made the sweet sweet lovin'. All's well that end's with loving the precious...just saying.
Reviewer: Tarbecca (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 38: Confessions, Coercions, and Chicken Wings (vjgm)
FAST UPDATE PLEASE!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 38: Confessions, Coercions, and Chicken Wings (vjgm)
I have enjoyed every word of this delightful story and I am sorry to see it end but even my husband asked whe he see you update if the overies have finally got to do their job I so do hope thats your end for the final chapter
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 38: Confessions, Coercions, and Chicken Wings (vjgm)
You have to ask ...UPDATE !!
Loving the girls ....
Gah ,I'm just so in awe of your writing ....
:)
Reviewer: Shonla (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Chapter 38: Confessions, Coercions, and Chicken Wings (vjgm)
great chapter. i love these guys! i'm going to miss them.....tear.
Reviewer: Bones_Rocks (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
I love this story so much. The Peter Parker reference had me laughing out loud and my dog giving me the 'what the hell' look!
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