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Reviewer: Ledybug (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
Seriously, you freaking hilarious. Your fictional ovaries and I are kindred spirits. Read my story on here and you'll see why. Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
i love the girls , let them have their wicked way
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
TOTALLY GREAT!!!!!!OUTDOOR SEX!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Ceradee22 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
Maybe next time they can do "Sit On My Face," although the girls would definitely object. I love this story, please update soon!
Author's Response: This made me LMFAO. Bella would very much enjoy that song. However, I think the girls would enjoy the one that goes
ISN'T IT AWFULLY NICE TO HAVE A PENIS... etc.
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
hilarious chapter, where do you come up with this stuff? "the girls" crack me up :)
Author's Response: It's all in my evil little (sometimes) alcohol-soaked brain, bb. And I get poison ivy that bad. I shudder to think of it.
The outdoor sex? Happened to me. Of course, I embellished a bit. I'm too neurotic to enjoy it so I just wanted the hubs to hurry up. LOL. I figured Bella and AlAnonward would have a hotter time than I did in RL.
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
FYI my favorite part in one crazy summer has always been when the little girl freezes her face that way. Oh and knowing Dow. What's Dow? The maker of mace.
Author's Response: I love the little girls too! But I think my fave part has to be when Bobcat Goldthwait gets stuck in the Godzilla costume and he ends up trashing the LobsterLog model. LMFAO.
Of course, and The Boat with the Ferarri engine. GOD, I love that movie.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 12: Operation!
JUST AWESOME!!!!!!!
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
Omg I was totes saying earlier this evening that I hadnt read an update of this in forever, and voila! The girls must be mindreaders too. Hee. I loved the interaction between Bella and Edward this chapter. So sweet, yet so HOT! Can't wait for the Meet the Parents chapter! LOL
Author's Response: I know it took a while. Sorry for that. Work, the other fic and the Age of Edward contest entry all conspired against the girls. I'll try not to take so long next time. Hope it was worth the wait.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: stupidsuckedinreader (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
Love all your movie references. Bella's ovaries sound like me after I am liquored up!
Author's Response: What a coincidence... because I usually come up with the best lines for the girls in the same state! I'm so glad there are others out there that love all of my favorite movies. My husband makes fun of me for liking them.
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
Awesome chapter. You are not hated! This chapter was worth the wait! I can't believe that Edward and Bella had sex in the middle of the meadow. Awesome. :)
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: You really can't believe it? With the girls screaming at her for their precious all the time?
And you know if EFC was trying to get with you outside (or anywhere) you wouldn't say no. Don't lie.
Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
Great chapter, lots of lemons! You know there really aren't that many Bella getting pregnant stories out there...I wouldn't be opposed to you writting it so that BC didn't work ;)
Author's Response: Hahaha. Now I KNOW you have to be kidding.
There will be NO babies in Work In Progress. If I let the girls have what they want, then they might shut up!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Haileywood (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
So I've been reading your story the last couple days and OMG I just saw the banner for this story and it is total WIN. Loves it!
Reviewer: alternate universe (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
gotta love the sex hair!
Reviewer: mr108 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 12: Operation!
laughing so hard on this chapter - great lemon, great description of operation - it is in fact the devils game - that is the only way to describe a game where you take body parts out of a perfectly fine person. The clown is on perpose becuase the care the hell out of little ones and it is the way they can esact revenge for being forced to the circus when they are too young and tramatized by the event. Cannot wait for the update. Love the writing
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 12: Operation!
i loved and hatred that game as a kid. that was sooo funnyyyy...
can't wait for more
Reviewer: redk9 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 12: Operation!
Greeeaaaaatttt story! Love this Bella!
Reviewer: duckyd16 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 12: Operation!
that was soooo freaking amazingg!!! it was a really long wait. :( but i loved it!
Reviewer: nmommy02 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 12: Operation!
awesome story! GladI was told abou ti
Reviewer: Luna Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 12: Operation!
OMG i love this chapter!!!
cant wait for the next 1
Luna C xx
Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 12: Operation!
that was a very nice lemon.... I applaud!
operation getting a lil frisky... leadin into a phone call from mom..... that is just classic.... I love it!
way to take them both back to childhood... playing doctor and then mom interrupts....
can't wait to see what happens there!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 12: Operation!
Best chapter yet, very funny and hot! :)
Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 12: Operation!
Oh yeah, it was GOOD for me! Edward was almost demure before, but not he's not the least bit hesitant...grrrrr! Poor Bella and that damn bike ride, I felt her pain! Operation was funny, I enjoyed that. I wonder what's up with Mom?
I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: mico (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 12: Operation!
This story is hilarious I literally keep laughing out lound...I guess snarky and sexy belong together!
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 12: Operation!
Ooh, Bella! Shower sex! We hear that's really hot!
Who were they hearing this from? Had they been communicating with my nipples? If they were communicating, they might be able to take over the world!
I Laugh. A lot.
I wondered if they were going to play Strip Operation ;)
As for the Lemon? I Love you SOOOOOOO Much !
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 12: Operation!
Oh bb it was so good for me!!! MMMmmmMMM
So Esme is callin right. The way it sounded when he told the story about wrecking the car it didn't seem like his parents had forgiven him, just his brother and sister. IS this correct?
Hmmm I think I wanna play operation now HEHEHE
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