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Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
Hilarious, as usual! I seriously love this story, it makes me smile :) I am looking forward to the dinner chapter!!!
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
the irony of this chapter was that i was reading this on my laptop in front of my own husband and father-in-law laughing my ass off in tears!! greatness!!
Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
Very, very nice! Fantastic chapter! Bella stealing Edward's car keys, Emmett cutting Bella off on the road, the whole "meat sandwich" thing...all hysterical!
I can't wait to see what happens at dinner...and afterwards of course! I love this story!
Reviewer: ObsessiveEdwardDisorder (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
FARTING, REALLY?! OH MY GOD, I THINK I BUSTED SOMETHING WHEN I READ THAT.
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
This story is hilarious! I love the talking ovaries- they are seriously deranged, but oh so funny!
Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
LMAO. Your story always gives me a good laugh. Love the Carlisle section. Thanks for updating.
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
i absolutely love the girls....can't wait for more
Reviewer: sweetstarryeyes (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
As usual, I laughed out loud at the girls! They are hilarious! I espeically loved their reaction to Dr. Cullen. And making him an OB/GYN? Genius! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: kshaudae (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
Is Jake in love with Bella in this story? Will Bella's ovaries get what they want?
Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 7: Graduation Presents
Just love your Edward to pieces! Showing up at Bella's graduation ceremony to support her! Adorable.
Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 4 :Dyslexic Heart
I LOVE that Tanya is a cat!! :)
Reviewer: AndraLee (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 1 - The Meat Sweats
GRRRReat! Tell me, please, that the little swimmers are Navy SEALs preparing to pillage and plunder the local girls (can't rape the willing)"....plz?
Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 3: The Obligatory Bella Barbie Chapter
I just started reading this today and I'm hooked. It's adorable...funny, sexy, well written! I'm excited I have the weekend ahead of me and chapters yet to read!
Reviewer: AndraLee (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 4 :Dyslexic Heart
we're so not worthy either...meow
Reviewer: AndraLee (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 3: The Obligatory Bella Barbie Chapter
Yummy! I am so hooked. Makes me wanna play doctor.
Reviewer: Mombailey (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
I may have reviewed this already...it would have been when we were in DC...
So just in case, I reiterate my fav part:
Oh, Lord.
You know the Lord doesn't like it when little swimmers are wasted...
Something about that line struck me as familiar. Surely they wouldn't... Then they sang:
"Every sperm is sacred, every sperm is great. If a sperm is wasted, God gets quite irate..."
So the girls were Monty Python fans? At least they had good taste.
As I watched Edward pack up, I knew three things: First, I had talking ovaries with their own distinctive personality. Second, there was a part of me, and I didn't know how dominant that part might be-
Very dominant. Just give us a flogger and we'll show him.
-that wanted to have Edward Cullen's babies. And third, I wasn't sure if either one of the first two things bothered me.
That is all.
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
Hehe....Listesing to Bella's ovaries s funny as hell....Please update very soon, this was awsome. ;D
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 4 :Dyslexic Heart
Hehe...Tanya is a cat??!!That shits incredibly funny!! ;D
Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
OOOHHHH...this shit is getting seriously good! I love it! When Edward straight up NEEDED Bella in the woods, I was like holy shit! That poor guy has some serious demons to face. It looks like Bella might be able to help him with that.
I can't wait to see what happens when Bella meets Edward's parents, this is going to be fantastic! I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Shell_Linkin (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
Love it! The girls rock! But I'm out of chapters :( Please please don't leave us hanging too long for the next chapter.
Reviewer: nmommy02 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
Awesome chapter. I love that it was outdoors! So fun!! Don't leave again and keep posting please!
Reviewer: twilightaddict40 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 7: Graduation Presents
I LOVE the girls!
Reviewer: spuntinsel (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
hate you? no way. i'm in love. lol.
Reviewer: yeuxdor (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
That was a set-the-girls-fluttering outdoor scene! I love your sense of humor and the call from Mom.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
HAHAHA!! I've been singing that Monty Python song since they first had sex!!! With the exception of Space Balls, I fear we each have (apparently half of) the same brain!!! :)
Does that mean that Edward would love us, too? I have ovaries! I have a vag!! Umm...OK....I'm not as um....fit and tiny as Bella, but hey! I'd let him motorboat my boobies.....
Sigh. I'm out of chapters. What a sad thing. I hope you update soon, and tell the girls I said hi :) xoxoxo
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