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Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
hahhaha this chapter was funny..
aw shes in love...
didnt see that one coming :P
Reviewer: La Jodi (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
You are hilarious! I love it! I am constantly laughing out loud as I read. This story is becoming one of my favs!
I would love an outtake with Edward able to hear the girls. That would be soooo funny!
Reviewer: Roselover2 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
but we love to provoke the precious when we provoke the precious he pokes us !!
I love listening to the girls argue with Bella that has to be some of the funniest stuff I have EVER read
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
I think I must have said this before, but it deserves to be said again...your Bella and her girls are freakin' awesome! They are so funny! I love the conversations they have amoung themselves! And now Bella gets to see that the whole family is great -- not just Edward. Fantastic chapter and I'm so looking forward to the dinner chapter!
Kathy M.
Reviewer: Lizzie Welling (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
This story has me in a constant stream of laughter. I get weird looks from my roommates when I'm reading and suddenly burst into giggles. Thank you for writing something so damn funny, and please keep it up!
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
"BAD HABIT"(aka the road rage song), is on my ipod, too!!
Reviewer: accsmom (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
oh my gosh i was laughing so hard i was crying at this chapter...
WHAT A WONDERFUL WONDERFUL CHAPTER>...
Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
"arachnid - slash - primate" ...NO you DI'INT!!
i get into trouble at work every time i read this fic - i can't control my snorts! the lols you inspire cannot be contained, like Bella's girls...
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
I loved this chapter...made me laugh and get turned on!
Reviewer: justjo (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
AW, the happy families!
PLEASE can we have more Stern Masterful Edward in Control, pretty please?
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
I love reading this story, I pretty much pee my pants from the comments the girls make. It also is sexy as hell, Edward is freakin hot, and I love he and Bella's bantering. Lookng forward to the nest update.
Reviewer: justjo (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 13: Take A Hike
I love the sex, I wish I had some of that.
I'm jolted out of it by using cum as a verb though - isn't cum ejaculate, and coming is the verb? Don't mind me, I'm fussy like that. That maybe why I don't get to have the sex that Bella does... sigh.
My pedantry aside, this is such a funny, romantic story, your humour is great. Love the dynamic. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: MsLessa (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
You know I've learned not to drink or eat anything when I read your updates. I always end up giggling like mad and grinning from ear to ear. Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: justjo (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 10: The Morning After
Noo, that's much less fun than before.
Reviewer: SusanL (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
Go on. Admit it. You made Carlisle an OB/GYN just to make The Girls happy, didn't you.
Fabulous, as always :)
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
Fabulous chappie.
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
love this story ,looking forward to the next chapter and love all the stories you mentioned as well
Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
The humor is quite good in this chapter. I think I luaghed hardest when Carlisle was involved. The girls and Bella's dialogue over that was priceless. Looking forward to dinner... :)
Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
Another awesome chapter....can't wait for the much promised dinner chappie
Reviewer: RiRi (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
Dang I am glad my girlie bits don't speak to me...too much!! :D
Reviewer: erinnnzomg (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
Poor, lonely Precious. I'll keep him company! :D
-erinzomg
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
Oh, but we want to provoke the precious...
The story just keeps getting better and better....
Reviewer: peachykeenbean17 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
I LOVE that you made Bella just as bad as the rest of them. She needs it once in a while
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
Tihi...Ok, I love Bella's talk with the other "two"...but that was just nasty.. ;D
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious
wow the girls reaction to carlisle...way too funny, excellent chapter!
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