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Reviewer: Aurelie (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 3
aww...love
he he he! your Edward is becoming one of my favorites! he is so ridiculously adorable i love it!
Author's Response: thank you
Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 3
I love this! Edward's so awkward, yet they manage to settle in and hit it off. I love Mrs. Cope, as well. She's got just the right attitude. Looking forward to seeing this continue!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like
Reviewer: jaminelabella (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 2
update!!! please!
Author's Response: Update submitted!!!!
Reviewer: Pears (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great story!!! You know I love it and I can't wait to read more, more, more!!!! I absolutely adore Geekward!!!!!
Oh, and I eat a fluffernutter every day for lunch - gotta love them!!!!!
Angie
Author's Response: It's impossible not to love Geekward he's just too precious. have you seen bad mother's handbook -- R. Pattinson's character in that is the gold standard of Geekwardness. My big thing now is fluffernutters and smores. I'm going to be as big as a house by the time this baby gets here.
Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 2
Heck, with a $100,000 salary she should be able to rent a very nice house or get financing to buy one! I can't wait to hear more about Edward's past and to see the two of them interacting on a daily basis.
Author's Response: Thanks you'll get your wish next chapter.
Reviewer: jaminelabella (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 2
aaahhh fluffernutter sandwiches. like in Shadows by Pears.
i love your story and i cant wait to read more. update soon!!
Author's Response: Yep, I beta for Pears and she's got me craving fluffernutter sandwiches. I've eaten them two days now and I could still have another one even though they send my blood sugar through the roof.
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 2
awww, edward is soo adorable.
jacob is a bastard!! i like it;P
Author's Response: thank you
Reviewer: Ezzmay (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
"Geek Edward" is a treat that is rarely explored. I likee - please update soon.
Author's Response: thank you I love geekward so "exploring" him is a dream come true for me
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 2
Lots of interesting possibilties for this story! Little Charlie interacting with Edward? Edward learning how to be socially acceptable with a woman? Revenge on Jacob and her lousy family?
Can't wait to see where you take us!
Author's Response: Not giving away the spoilers but glad you like it.
Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 2
I'm liking this story, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: thank you
Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 2
Sounds like Bella needs to keep an Open mind, but I can understand where her cynicism is coming from. The chapter did answer some of my questions from the last one and I am looking forward to how this pans out.
Author's Response: thank you.
Reviewer: tinkerbelle (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 2
Thanks for updating so quickly!!
Author's Response: thanks for reading and reviewing so quick!
Reviewer: Venus (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love, love, love this fic. I think an awkward, nervous Edward is so cute and endearing. I even love Jasper and Emmett's role in his life. Bella coming from nothing to work there for her son is great too. I wish maybe she had a nickname for her son because everytime I read Charlie, I think if her dad, not her son. Overall, I like the whole story and group dynamic so far. I even ran over to ff.net to see if you had more there. I really look forward to more! Please update again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you. Sorry no peeking on FF.net. I'm trying to keep both posted at the same rate and at approximately the same time.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 2
Another great chapeter. There are a couple OOC things that are sad, like Charlie not believing Bella...as much as I know he likes Jacob in canon, he adores Bella. I'll have to get past that. Other than that, I realy liked this! Keep going! Is this story on fanfic?
Author's Response: thank you, Charlie is a bit OOC and some of that I can't help but some of it will be explained. Right now he thinks Jacob is right and that's making him behave badly.
Reviewer: SpeedGirl (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great Chapter! Jacob is a dick
Author's Response: Thank you. Jacob is some part of the male anatomy the front or the back is your choice really.
Reviewer: peachykeenbean17 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 2
REALLY REALLY good! Keep it up can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 2
LOVE IT
Author's Response: THANK YOU
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
Thank you so much for taking the time to explain how realistic your portrayal is. I guess I went with my gut reaction which was that it was a ridiculous situation - I forget just how horrible things can be and that real life can be more ridiculous than fiction. I appreciate you taking the time. Thanks!
Author's Response: not a problem at all. Please call me out on things you don't think work I love to debate my work with people. It makes me think about things in a new perspective and then I have to decide whether or not to defend my position on it. if no one calls me out I just get lazy in my writing. Please, I appreciate hearing what anyone thinks and at no point do I ever require it to be positive. Thank you for taking the time to point out something that didn't work for you.
Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 2
grr stupid ass jake. lols.
omg how could he have turned her whole family against her!?
Author's Response: it happens. Thank you for reading it.
Reviewer: Shelly2 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 2
It was nice to get some background information on Bella. I'm really looking foward to more Bella/ Edward interaction. It'll also be ineresting to see how Edward interacts with Charlie!
Author's Response: Thank you there's more Bella/Edward in the next chapter. In fact the next two chapters are all about them interacting. Oh and someone else shows up as well.
Reviewer: Tulips at Twilight (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 2
How sad about Esme and Carlisle. No wonder Edward doesn't go outside. Jacob sounds like a jerk. I hope Edward finds out about Charlie soon and Bella gets out of that motel.
Author's Response: Thank you. I won't spoil it but things are looking up on the Bella living front.
Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 2
Jacob the creep! How could he do that to his own kid. It makes me sick. I am excited that she starts soon with Edward. I think her life is about to change, fo the good. Can't wait for more.
Hurry!
Author's Response: Thank you yes, Jacob is a creep in this story. I needed a bad guy and him and Jessica were it for me.
Reviewer: Shug (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 2
I feel so badly for both Bella and Edward. My goodness, they've both been broken, both have lost their families, though in very different circumstances. I'm thinking that they will be very good for each other! ;) Such a fascinating premise and so very well written. I'm definitely looking forward to more!
Author's Response: thank you I hope you like where it's going.
Reviewer: Shug (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 1
What a fascinating beginning! I love this very different, vulnerable Edward. I'm very intrigued!
Author's Response: thank you I'm glad you're intrigued.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wow poor Bella to be left alone with no one to help her or belive her side of the story. Jacob is really bad in this story. But fortunatelly she has found people to be by her side and help her. More important she has her son to think of, take care and love. Now with a good job, even if she doesn't see him as much as she would like, she can provide better for him and not need anything from those who now won't help her.
What is Alice's role in this story?
Thanks for the quick update :)
Author's Response: thank you for reading it! As for Alice I'm not sure yet but she will have a role of some sort. Alice and emmett are my favorite characters so I doubt I'll go long without them.
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