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Reviewer: whenpoetryrises (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 4

Yay! Bella the superhero to the rescue! :D

Emmett's awesome. It's official. If I could, I'd give him a gun that doesn't run out of bullets. :P I like how he calls Edward "Bean Pole" and how he can be casual with both Edward and Bella.

This chapter made me seriously regret the fact that no one has ever exposed me to comic books. I should get on that one.

Edward is still highly adorable and Tanya Denali should leave him alone. *shakes head at oblivious golddigger*

This was a fun and wonderful chapter and it rather cheered me up. Props to you and thank you for writing! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. The gun that never runs out of bulletts was always my favorite part of Drew Hayes's Poison Elves. I highly recommend every one that I wrote about in the chapter but I'll warn you that Poison Elves has some really dark, dark themes to it and it's also harder to find because it's not mainstream.

Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 4

Hell Nah!!!!! Touchdoen for Team Bella!!!!! I feel sparks coming on, NOW WRITE THE NEXT DAMN CHAPTER!!!!! LOL!!!!!



Author's Response:

thank you but it's already written my dear. I'm actually about four chapters ahead in the writing. I just post slow because I have to do it from home and not work and it seems like home is a distant memory some days.

Reviewer: RestfulDreams (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 4

Dorky Edward is fantastic.  He's adorable.  :-)



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 4

awwh haha edward's so adorable when confused! squeals :D



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: samasa (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 4

honenstly, i was really worried about this story.... don't ask me why....but lets just say that his story has gotten better and better with each chapter.....I LOVE IT!!!! they need to validate your schapters faster...you need to write faster and this story is being added to my favorites!



Author's Response:

thank you. Twilightzoner is actually amazingly fast on the validate it's unfortunately that I have to work some crazy hours right now and things aren't getting posted as quickly as I'd like. I can't wait for my summer vacation to start in three weeks. Then you'll be sick of reading my stuff.

Reviewer: Radical (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 4

Your Edward is just so ridiculously adorable that even if this was the most terribly written fanfic in the entire world (and it definitely is not by any means) I'd still read it. He's just that sweet and innocent and I love it. :)



Author's Response:

thank you I'm glad it's not poorly written because I'd feel bad if you were reading it and it was.

Reviewer: christykq (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 4

Well, I think Ms. Swan is smitten with the billionaire. Poor nice Edward. He needs to speak up and knock all the hussies that want his money back. I want a job where I can wear my pajamas to work and go comic book shopping on company time. A hot, single, billionaire for a boss wouldn't hurt either. Great chapter. Great story. Update quickly.



Author's Response:

thank you-- can I second all your wants? Update is set for thursday

Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 3

This just keeps getting better & funnier!!!!!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 4

That was great! I love that they were bonding over their love of comic books! And Bella's rescue of Edward from Tanya was perfect!



Author's Response:

thank you. I liked the rescue as well

Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oh, that was really good! I like Bella too since she is a riot and both her and Edward are so clueless.



Author's Response:

thank you.

Reviewer: audio science (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 4

Geekward is so fucking adorable!

I'm addicted to this fic like youre addicted to reviews =}

please update soon!



Author's Response:

thank you update should be thursday

Reviewer: AndieLand (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 4

Aw, Edward's cluelessness is kind of endearing! And Emmett is hilarious! Can't wait for more :) 



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: fawnlike (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 4

Awww, that was cute!!

 



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: 3 little cullen boys (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 4

Love it, my husband like the comic references, I just think the stroy is cute. 



Author's Response:

thank you, my husband liked the comic references as well

Reviewer: marvelousmarbles (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 4

oh jeez, he blushes...... :) :) i'm in love.



Author's Response:

thank you. Clones are currently in discussion stages. Yours will be available with super blush powers

Reviewer: Shamatt (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 3

This is hysterical



Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: frol (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 4

 I am so in love with geeky Edward. Emmet is awesome as always!  Nice work and great chapter!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 4

this is one of the sweetest stories i've ever read... edward is just so shy and sweet, and bella is perfect for him!  I feel bad for her and what she went through with jake and all, but i'm happy that she is working with edward [and hopefully gets together with him] but awesome job on this story!



Author's Response:

thank you. I can't tell you that but I'll give you a hint -- I'm a sucker for happy endings.

Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 1

I WAS LAUGHING FROM BEGINNING TO THE VERY END OF THE CHAPTER!!!



Author's Response:

thank you. I like to make people laugh. Shh, don't tell my students.

Reviewer: vivaciousv1114 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 4

I cannot wait until the next chapter. Edward is serious adorable here. I want one for myself.



Author's Response:

thank you, cloning strategies are currently being discussed.

Reviewer: marvelousmarbles (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oh my god. You know in the Eddies and Bellies, the category "Edward You Most Wish Was Your Boyfriend"?? (or something like that)....  i pick this Edward!!!!  holy cow.  would you like to run the company???? he is so damn cute i can't handle it.  i like nice guys.  there aren't enough Edwards who are just super nice.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Wow that's a really great compliment. I'm all for attempting to clone Edwards. Any Edwards actually. Ok except maybe Evilward.

Reviewer: peachykeenbean17 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 4

I like your analogy for reviews.... I had totally forgotten about this story, but now as I reread it, it's VERY cute. Keep up the good work. I like the whole Edwards kinda clueless thing... hehehe it's new for him :)



Author's Response:

thank you. I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 4

that was priceless how Bella handled Tanya.



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: starlit (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 4

i adore your shy edward - genius writing!!!  Thanks and will anxiously await your next update!!!



Author's Response:

thank you update should be very soon.

Reviewer: BelleDuJour (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 4

Such a cute chapter!  I love how Bella stood up to Tanya and Edward was so adorably clueless about it.



Author's Response:

thank you he is pretty clueless

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