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Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

Your Edward is endearing. You do a wonderful job characterizing a shy person trying to negotiate a conversation. :) Books



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh dear Edward...

What a 'nana he is! I like this polarised version of the insular recluse from the books.

Cheers

Emmy.

 



Author's Response:

thank you. You're the first to comment on the parallels I'm trying to draw from the book

Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 5

Another excellent chapter. I liked how Edward took charge when Bella needed him too. It is also nice to see Aro as a good guy. Making Jane a dog was priceless. :)



Author's Response:

thank you Jane's a good dog

Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 5

Eee! Does this mean he invites her to live in his house? Hope so!



Author's Response:

thank you can't tell you though it'll ruin it.

Reviewer: terrabella (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 5

this is a great story! I love your characters, it makes it enjoyable to read.



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Raven27 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 5

I love it so far!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: tiffany027 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 5

So I just stumbled upon this story last night and became instantly in love with it.  Very different from what I've read in the past.  Edward is so amazing in this fic and his awkwardness just makes it that much more fun to read.  Please update soon.



Author's Response:

thank you update is coming very soon.

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 5

Aw! He's so sweet!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 5

Wow!  When I mentioned about Edward finding out about Charlie, I never imagined it would be the next chapter!  And now we get to find out what kind of living conditions Bella and Charlie have been living in.  I love this story!  All the characters are so warm and wonderful!

Kathy M.



Author's Response:

thank you I'm glad you like.

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 5

Great story.  Can't wait to see where it goes.



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: valelf (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 5

That was so good! Poor little Charlie. Bella's going to be so embarrased about where she lives, isn't she? I love this Edward! He sounds so cute!



Author's Response:

thank you can't tell you any of that because it's a spoiler and I dont' want to ruin it.

Reviewer: MooChapman (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 5

A fantastic update, I can't wait for more.
Really I could read this all day a not get sick of it, good work.

Moo Chapman



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 3

Isn't the Green Lantern's weakness the color yellow? I don't know why anyone would like a superhero with such a bogus weakness. What if the Green Lantern was eating lunch at Au Bon Pain and this chick in a yellow sundress walks by? He'd totally be like "Ack! You yellow fiend, you!!" and then fall out of his chair and into his tuna salad sandwhich!! That just sucks. But it sort of makes sense also because the color combo of green and yellow IS truly horrifying...



Author's Response:

Yeah it's horrifying as a combo and in the end it comes down to this -- IT'S FRICKIN GREEN LANTERN. He's the ultimate geek super hero. I don't know why he just is.

Reviewer: MissAmi (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 5

This is soooo goood!!!! Keep writing, it's brill!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: Wishingforlove (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 5

I just read this today and I really like the idea behind it! The only thing I notice is that Edward seems a little over-childlike. I get the idea you're trying to go for very shy, a little bewildered by normal social interactions, etc, but maybe you can give us a little bit somewhere soon that shows he is an adult and can function like one for the most part? His inner voice just seems a bit too immature. Other than that, I really love the story!



Author's Response:

thank you. Edward's character is still developing and being a geek his mindproceses and social skills are underdeveloped. He'll have his "adult" moments they just aren't here yet.

Reviewer: brighteyes87 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 5

Awww Geekward is going to become Saveward!!!! Love it!

I'm really, really looking forward to reading more!



Author's Response:

geekward/saveward we're merging them in the cloning.

Reviewer: Dragon (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 5

This chapter rocked! I can not wait for the next chapter hopefully Emmett and Edward fix Bella's and Charlie's living situation.

Author's Response:

thank you update is tomorrow

Reviewer: Twilighter21 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 5

Great Chapter! Charlie is so cute! Can't wait to see what Edward has to say about Bella's living conditions!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!



Author's Response:

thank you update is tomorrow

Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 5

i really like Edward and Emmett in this story, but heck i like them in every story. But its just something about them that I cannot put my finger on it in this story and makes me smile. Great job please update soon.



Author's Response:

thank you update is tomorrow

Reviewer: Brownhoodie (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 5

I'm the kind of girl who sticks mainly to full on angst and pain and horror kind of fics but recentely I've been venturing off and reading other type of stories, this being one of the first and I am so impressed! 

 

Cliffhanger Much! Ok, ok not an extreme 'Someone's gunna die' kind of cliffhanger, but still XD

Please update soon, this is such a interesting concept! *Adds to faves*



Author's Response:

Thank you besides don't you like clifies? update is tomorrow

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 5

OMG!! GAH!! I LOVE EDWARD!! So fantastic all that he did for Bella and Charlie!! What a sweetie!  Uncle Aro is a sweetie too!!Ooh!! emmett doesn't like where Bella lives!1 Wouldn't it be cool if Bella and Charlie moved into Edwards place and Mrs. cope could help with babysitting!!!! I cannot get enough of your story. Please update again soon!! Fantastic job!



Author's Response:

thank you update is tomorrow

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 4

OMG!!!! I agree with Emmett!! I love your Bella!Thanks God she went up and saved Edward from that skanky Tanya! It is cute how Bella and Edward are very much alike! Cnanot wait for more!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: riverspirit (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 5

I heart this story :) Edward is soooo sweet, and I love your characterization of Bella!



Author's Response:

thank you

Reviewer: twijinx (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 5

I absolutely adore Geekward. I want to put him in my pocket and keep him with me. Can't wait to read more :)



Author's Response:

thank you cloning efforts are being done but currently not miniturization.

Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 5

:S ...awww poor Charlie, i can imagine how distressed Bella must feel.



Author's Response:

trust Dr. Aro he's good.

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