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Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 8
lol umm... I happen to like most of R&H's work so it's not really a threat unless you're talking about being so badly out of tune the animals run and hide? ;)
The chapter was very cute opening with Bella's "dream" hehe can't wait to see how Rose handles the move with Bella :)
Reviewer: Dr Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 1
I am so in love with Nerdward!!! This story is amazing :)
Reviewer: jewelryjunkie (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 8
I can't wait to see some more sparks fly between Edward & Bella! He's so good with Charlie it's adorable!
I wonder if Jacob is going to come to the party and shake things up a bit?
This story is great!!!
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 8
i am so loving this Edward, please update soon.
Reviewer: Minoy (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 8
Watch out Rosalie is about to go on the warpath. Whoo-Hoo! can't wait!
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 8
I love Rodgers and Hammerstein; I'd have no problem with you singing some show tunes! ;)
Awesome chapter. I really hope Bella just moves in the house with Edward. He's so cute with Charlie, I really enjoyed that.
Reviewer: duckyd16 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:14 PM · On: Chapter 8
sigh. im hooked... you have GOT to update again. my eyes hurt from reading. but i dont care!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 8
I think it's pretty darn sexy if a grown man wants to play cars and building blocks with a baby! Great job.
Reviewer: swan_song (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 8
I like show tunes, but I'll still review! :)
Edward being a "great dad" is the cutest thing ever, I'm such a sucker for a hot young dad! Yeah, it's the hormones. My boyfriend better watch out! I have only one complaint about this chapter: it isn't longer! I want more!
Reviewer: xsecretxkeeperx (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 8
Omg! Emmett's a little liar! hahaha, that's classic. Ugh, I hate when the chapters end :-( I love this story so much. I know I've said it a million times, but Edward is freaking adorable. How cute was he playing with Charlie?! And I love all of his "why"s. He really doesn't know why he shouldn't do things like hand over his company, lol! Or why him changing a daiper is a big deal ^_^ Great chapter! Can't wait for the next!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 8
I can't wait to see what happens while Charlie is going through his meds usually seven to ten days right? Alot could happen in that time.
Reviewer: Naelady (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 8
Manipulative Genius Edward is awesome. :) Now he just needs to beat the crap out of Jake, or at least take him to court for the shameful way he's been treating his ex-wife and son, and it'll all be good. Washington has some pretty strict child support laws, actually. Any judge in the state would probably bankrupt him for back child support and toss him in jail for being a dead-beat dad.
Reviewer: BellaWillow (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 8
And Bella thinks Edward is oblivious... That was a great chapter! Wonder what Rosalie is going to do? :) I like how Edward kept surprising Bella regarding taking care of Charlie.
Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 8
Hey! I like Rogers and Hammerstein. Bring on the show tunes! I'll sing along! Oh, and it's an amazing chapter. Much awesomeness. YAY! *hugs*
Reviewer: allaboutemward (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 8
I'll review as much as you want as long as there's no singing and you keep with the quick updates. Love this story!
Reviewer: Psykojinx (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 8
Reviewing! Faster faster! ;)
Reviewer: Dragon (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 8
Another excellent chapter! Please post the next one soon as I am dieing to see how Rosalie reacts to Bella's living situation.
Reviewer: whenpoetryrises (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 8
You know what I love? Finding an email sitting in my mailbox saying this story has been updates. It pretty much guarantees getting a smile out of me. It's just so sweet and wonderful! :)
First, this was my favorite line: "Her incredibly attractive, smart, witty, amazingly kind, but completely oblivious, boss’s house." What a perfect way to describe Edward!
I love the Edward-Charlie bonding time. They are so cute together. I also love how Edward's so practical about diaper changing. Yay for red matchbox cars and destroying Rome! I loved Edward's crack about Charlie making a good Godzilla, by the way.
I can tell Rosalie is awesome too. I liked her sweatpants story. I enjoyed seeing her in the chapter. It's neat how all the characters are so drastically different, but somehow they all fit together...mostly because of Edward, since he's kind of the centerpiece, although I'm sure he doesn't see it that way.
Thanks for writing and for all the smiles you give me! :)
Reviewer: bendigo89 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 8
This is a great story. I love the way you portray Edward and Bella.
Reviewer: monument (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 8
This is awesome! and this edward is adorable!!!! Keep writing!!
Reviewer: Libby Michaels (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 8
More please? This is just too short! I have now reviewed as you have requested because:
A) I am terrified you will break out "The Sound of Music" lyrics (I have a scarring high school experience playing third French Horn in the pit orchestra-- I still have oom pah nightmares about the Do Re Mi song...)
B) I am genuinely enjoying this fic and the nice characters you have crafted.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 8
I LOVE this story! Edward is just...I have no idea where you came up with the the idea for the facets of his personality, but he's...unique is the best word I've got :) But in a good way. And Bella is just about how you would expect Bella to be - so it helps keep the story balanced I think. Keep the chapters coming!
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 7
so cute...
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 6
YES, he needs vocal cords - and Rob's sexy accent!!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 8
So cool him playing with Charlie! That would do it for me for sure!
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