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Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Fall
Awww, loved this chapter! Well written and interesting
Reviewer: Dazzled2Xtreme (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Fall
adorable edward !!! A resounding yes i am sure sy
Reviewer: Twilight_fan_girl (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Fall
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!! I love the purple crayon thing xD And awwwwwww Yes, Yes and Yes with sprinkles please! xD This story is awesome!
You rock xox
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Fall
aww, adorable note!! :) really liked this chapter. I'm happy that Edward knows about James and that he and Bella are getting 'steady' lol:D Looking forward to next chapter, hope you update soon! :)
Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Fall
P.S. – In the spirit of the crayon-written note, please answer a single question.
Will you be my girlfriend? (Circle one)
Yes
No
Maybe
Circle yes, Bella, circle yes. Hands down best friggin part of the chapter. Loved it. It's so whimsical and lighthearted compared to how bipolar Edward usually acts. I'm sorry if it's been explained (with weeks in between chapters sometime it's hard to remember details for each story) but why Edward is distant and moody; I know he was turned off by thinking she was like Lauren and Jessica but even now that he knows she isn't he's still hot and cold. Of course so is she. But we know about James to explain it. Now he knows too.
James = Creepy
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Fall
LOL The note reminded me of a song called "Check yes or no".
I actually had a guy pull that one on me once...we were young and I didn't want to date him.
Thinking of it now, it was so cute!
Looking forward to the next one!
B. Quinn
Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Fall
oh that was great
Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Fall
hahahahha. i love the circling of yes, no, or maybe. my friends and i used to pass noted like that to one another during sorority chapter because we were bored.
im glad they worked out some of their issues...they were killing me before! can't wait for more :)
Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Fall
awwww makes me think of that country song, when he sings "check yes or nooooo"
Reviewer: justfornow (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Fall
LMAO... Love the crayon note and love Edward falling out of the tree LMAO!
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Fall
Simply PURFECT!
Reviewer: bloodvixen (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Fall
AAAAAWWWWW i love the last part! its so elementary! haha! love your work! update soon!
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Fall
I wish I could draw a circle around EXCELLENT CHAPTER!
Reviewer: FrostedCullen (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Fall
can i circle yes? lol
great update, i would write more but i have to sleep at some point...
post again soon.xx
Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Fall
awwhhh thts so sweetttt! good thing their fight didnt drag out long :D
Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Push
amazing
love it
cant wait for more
Oxo
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Revelations
that was such a great chapter!!!!
i really liked it!
i wanna read the next one really bad but i have school tomorrow and i need to sleep!
now i cant wait until tomorrow when i can read it again! it will be my reward for having self control. hahahah
great job with the chapter!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Fallen Angel
bella and edward are just too cute
great chapter!
Reviewer: Irritable_Grizzzly (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Push
Awww geez Bella. There's a little something called COMMUNICATION. Maybe you've heard of it! Possibly the guy you're going out with might want to know you've got a psychotic stalker calling you.
I’d like you to meet my, uh… Edward Cullen
Yeah. Things could only go downhill from there.
Author's Response: Hahahaha. That shit's hilarious. Yeah, communication is definitely a problem for them (and it's only going to cause more problems...)
Thanks!! :D
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 4 - The Longest Day
james is back!!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Old Friends, New Foes
edward cracks me up!
great job with the chapter!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 2 - First Impressions
bella is funny!
great chapter!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 1 - New Beginnings
great first chapter!
i really liked it
Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Push
I totally loved it....even if it took me almost a half hour to read chap. 10 (my computer was being gay)
Looking foward to more!!
B. Quinn
Author's Response: Glad you stuck with it despite the technical difficulties!! I posted a Ch. 11 teaser over on the forum, so check it out!
:D Lola84
Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Push
Dying of curiousity and want to see teaser, please!
Author's Response: It's posted... hope you like it! :D
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