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Reviewer: randigiles (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

Well thank you (very little) for scaring me with an authors note...and tell james i reviewed.

Sex tips from Jasper are Win...and Tardward is a douch. 

Reviewer: cbaby1234 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

I LOVE IT!!!! its the best yet! please continue cuz i hate cliffhangers!

Reviewer: twltr12 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 1 - New Beginnings

I absolutely love this chapter! Though I must say that Edward is in alot of trouble after that incident...

By the way, the end note is genius :)

Reviewer: hexagonalprodigy (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

Okay, that authors note on the bottom was absolutely hilarious. I'd say you'd make a pretty penny writing horror/stalker movies.

Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

I choose to review because that was the single awesomest chapter note I have ever read.

I have to say, after Alice and Jasper's reaction to Bella's virgin confession, I am not surprised that Edward was totally surprised. Ah, emotionally stunted Edward. How we missed you. So now he's off wallowing in guilt about how he just stole her virtue and acted like a jerk, even though the only truly jerky thing he did was leaving in the first place. Sigh. Am I wrong in thinking, also, that there is more to the Tanya story than we have been told? Hm...

Reviewer: Mace (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

And the award for the most creative review request goes to...

LOLA84!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  (What a surprise, ladies and gentlemen!)

Great story, great chapter, waiting for more (etc, etc, etc).  I especially liked Edward's reaction to Bella's little revelation... whoops, guess those specific words never did come out of her mouth all together, huh Edward?  Hope they can make up!

Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

Wow.  Edward is a complete asshole!

Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

HAHAH that is fucking awesome haha how you're telling us to review.


What is Edward's (almost typed out Rob) problem?????  I love this!!!!!!

Reviewer: domisgone (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes



Just for your extra effort, with the whole James bit at the end.... WHICH I LOVED.... I will review your chapter.


How could he just walk out on her? Doesn't he realize that leaving her that way is worse than fucking her rough? It doesn't make sense!


GAH!!  Can't wait till the next chapter!

Reviewer: bacmel79 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

edward is an ass and deserves a beat-down

Reviewer: ilove_edward (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

very good chapter.  But what is Edwards problem?

Reviewer: glitteryangeleyes (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

Awesome chapter! Please update soon!! =)

Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

I can't believe Dickward walked out. That's it she needs to dump him like the big fat penis he is!! Excellent chapter!!

Reviewer: ashtreeha (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes


you're going to update asap right?

you can't just leave it like that!

Reviewer: Dark Rose (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

Love the chapter, but the end is so sad.  Necessary to the story I'm sure, but still sad. 

Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

Lol, well that's one way to get people to review! Anyway, holy Emo chapter, batman! What's with Edward's assholeness? Someone, and I think you are qualified since you are the author, needs to tell him that it's not nice to go all bitch after you take your girlfriend's virginity. Seriously. 

Reviewer: carolinacrc (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

good god why is edward such an ass??

Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Boyfriend

Way to go Bella!

looking forward to next update!!:)

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Boyfriend

o i can't believe that happened....

Reviewer: PsychWardSiren (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 11 - The Fall

Just found this story and I'm loving it! MOREMOREMORE please.  :D



Reviewer: Bella Quinn (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Boyfriend

ouch, quite the way to kill the mood...way to go virgin!

Awesome story though :) Love the Lauren tibit.

B. Quinn

Reviewer: GiveUsAKiss413 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Boyfriend

I really love this Bella. 

Reviewer: Defiance (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Boyfriend

Oh no she did not!!! *bangs head* OMG, I have to know what happens next, please update quickly!

Reviewer: Dazzled2Xtreme (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Boyfriend

OH MY GOD she did not just do that LOL I am cracking up !!

Reviewer: amandahugnkiss (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Boyfriend

Bella!!!! What a big mouth... ugh... learn some timing girl!! ;) sounds like something I've done in the past. lol! hello mouth? please insert foot.

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