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Reviewer: jennymafurr (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

still here.

awesome slap.

I love jacob. "best pair of tits I've ever seen" "fuckchair, gross!"


update sooooon.


Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

I think James got to Edward and is holding some kind of blackmail over him. Making Edward break up with Bella and stay away from her to keep her safe.

Because in all honesty... why else would Edward do this? There has to be more to the story. There always is.

Reviewer: domisgone (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

:( Why is Edward such a douche-bag? Seriously? He makes me want to puke my dinner as well....


God. I know that this is a Edward/Bella fanfic, and they'll get together. But on days like today, I wished she would stap him repeatidly with a fork in his eye.


Okay, I'm taking it too far, but you get what I'm saying, right?

Reviewer: Defiance (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:25 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

Still reading, and still pissed as hell at Edward. Dude needs to man up and get over himself. Glad it was Jake that called and not Mike. Can you imagine the reaction when she dropped the towel if it were Mike there with her? *gags*

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

GREAT CHAPTER!! i cant wait for the next one! update soon please!

Reviewer: EBF (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

another great chapter keep it up!!! i want to know what happens next!!! T_T @ cliffhangher

Reviewer: Linds14 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

:( This was so sad. I'm pissed at Edward still.

He better get his shit together quick. He has a lot of begging and groveling to do.

(still think Bella should have told him..but yeah, he flipped out waaaay too much!)

Great chapter!

Reviewer: twltr12 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

Oooooh he makes me sooo mad! I don't know which I was more of, sad or ticked off! I thought he would at least show some emotion, but that's just messed up!

I do love it though! Most stories are all lovey dovey two seconds later, so I admire the change! Keep up the amazing writing, I can't wait til the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Melsie (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

WTF is his problem???? OMG GAH!! I am so unbelievably PISSED at Edward right now!

**soothing breaths** okay I think I have calmed down enough......NOPE STILL MAD AS HELL! dumbass Edward!!!

Melsie =)

AWEsome chappie btw!!

Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

edwards gotta pay.  he's terrible.  great chapter though!

Reviewer: iheartcullenboyz (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

so... yea i would have killed him point blank thats it she should exact her revenge and i mean asap before anything can happen with james... we need to see very very jealous and repentant edward that he let her go and treated her that way and then james can happen because they will be all good by then....ooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh let her hit him again just once more... i mean the other side of his face must be feeling very left out and its only going to be for good measure and plus it was funny as hell the first time so it will be even better the second time..i'm rambling yes i know i will go now

Reviewer: scottslass (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

Awesome chapter! You're doing a good job of showing her despair and rage. Now I'd like to know what the hell is going on in Eddie's head.

Reviewer: Dazzled2Xtreme (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

Fix them!! Although I love a good cry you need to fix them or I might not sleep soundly again! ** wipes tears **

Reviewer: Waldinando (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

This chapter almost made me cry.  Why is Edward being such a jerk? :(

Reviewer: iheartcullenboyz (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

angry or not james is hott as hell and he can have that conversation with me in person any time...i like rough and tumble's the best kind of fun roflmao jkjk but he's still hott but good chapter and i am about to read the next

Reviewer: NenerBener (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

MY Heart Hurts! 


I can't wait for more, more, more, more!

Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

Oh my god. My heart aches for her so much. F((( Edward....Thank god Jacob didn't take advantage! Excellent writing!

Reviewer: carolinacrc (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

props to bella.

he's a douche.

i honestly don't think she should ever let him back in her good graces. none of that, "we can try to be friends", or "forget this ever happened", or "I loved you so I left you" shit...

if he ever says a word to her just tell him to fuck off

Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

edwardddd u asss....y couldnt u have listened to bella?! arghhhh poor bella...i bet its gonna get worse when james calls again....

Reviewer: truthordare (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable





l o v e

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

gahhh... i'm so mad at edward!! james is still out there and he needs to protect bella... i mean jake's a good guy and all but i'm team edward all the way... and right now i'm just super mad at edward

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable



Reviewer: Ammage (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

ooooh! Edward better redeem himself!

loved the update, really can't wait for more xx

Reviewer: Chestar (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 8 - The Circus

that chapter was f-ing hilarious. absolute LOL

Reviewer: CanadianCullen (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Unbearable

I love it! 

I hope she friggin kicks his butt for leaving her like that :)

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