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Reviewer: Susan2e (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2013 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Loved it! Thank you,
Susan
Reviewer: dawningbeauty (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2012 01:51 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes
*lurks* :)
Reviewer: lyn_b (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2012 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Great ending! Looking forward to reading your other story, but I have to wait until it's complete - just a little quirk of mine, which means I can't review as you write - but if I could prioritise my fav authors, you'd be #1.
Reviewer: lyn_b (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2012 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Get Some
damn! have to go cook dinner and if it wasn't for the fact that the kids would starve....
Reviewer: lyn_b (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes
Nice to see a non missionary first time
Reviewer: lyn_b (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Push
Wow. Where were guys like this when I was growing up? Oh yeah, that's right, my parents sent me to a catholic girls school.
Reviewer: lyn_b (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Whiplash
Really gotta stop reading and do some house work ... although I'll prob need a break in, say, 3/4hr.
Author's Response: Ha, glad you're enjoying it! :)
Reviewer: lyn_b (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Old Friends, New Foes
I'm loving this. It's been a while since my last reading of Twilight but your style reminds me of SM and her additions of humour.
Oh, and my innocence is gone - I'd never heard anyone described as you did Lauren - what a brilliant insult. And no, I'm not a teenager, I'm in my early 40s and obviously had led a sheltered life :)
Reviewer: lyn_b (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 1 - New Beginnings
Loving BB (Bella with Backbone) and toilet paper Mike!
You write very well, and you (or your betas) have done a great job with your proof reading (my obsessive tendencies tend to get frustrated when I read stuff with repeated errors eg your for you're).
Reviewer: thelion587 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
i really enjoyed it. i have read several stories so far is this is one of the best. it is has a very interesting and sophisticated plot and i enjoyed your version of all the characters. keep up the good writing :D
Reviewer: Twilighter4Life1901 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
great story
Reviewer: katejones243 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 1 - New Beginnings
I know this has been up awhile and I'm just now reading it, but I had to stop halfway through this chapter and tell you how much I like your writing. You crack me up by her thoughts and feelings. Reminds me of myself through out the day. I find this to be refreshing and cant wait to read more! :)
Reviewer: Eddica (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2011 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Good end to this story!!!
Absolutely love it
Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2011 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
loved the little prayer at the end that cracked me up. this story is awesome this is my second time reading it and I love it just as much now as the first time.
Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes
ok well they could have avoided that if Bella was a bit more clear but Edward was a total ass grrr
Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Boyfriend
oh bella... nice
Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Dynamics
finaly
Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Revelations
oh for the love of god woman call the police better yet tell charlie esh... she frustrates me. in a good way lol I love the drama
Reviewer: luv4rain (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2011 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Old Friends, New Foes
he is such an ass. Love this story btw
Reviewer: tinks (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2011 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes
lmao! after that effort you deserve a review!
i love your story! i feel like ime on an emotional rollercoaster with these two!
i also love the way i think i know whats coming next but you keep suprising me! its brilliant!
Reviewer: Nanibaby791 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2011 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
LOVED IT! :) Definitely just read the whole thing in a few hours . . . if only i'd had wifi, i would have been through it faster.
Reviewer: cedward2417 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
*awe* Great story.
Reviewer: cedward2417 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2011 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 13 - Mistakes
Well, shit. This story has been completed for awhile and I just started reading it!! I didn't think you'd actually still be looking for reviews... jeez, I'm sorry, did you really have to sic James on me? That was just mean! (I didn't mind the heavy breathing so much, though, hmm?)
Anyway... I am very glad to have stumbled onto your story... I love it. I haven't been able to stop since I started (kids be damned...eat some crackers) this morning. I am still trying to figure Edward out... he confuses me, and I am kinda pissed at him right now. What was his reasons for not wanting to have sex with Bella in the first place? Was he afriad it would ruin whatever it is they have started? If so, why the hell did he up and leave her just now... total dick move, btw!
Reviewer: lauren_joy_mason (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 02:15 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
i loved your story so much and keep writing :)
Reviewer: kittiekatz34 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
loved it just as much the first time i read it:)
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