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Reviewer: kezzy014 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Bonds

Really love the story, i thinks its really good i love the conection between edward and bella its literal and mean she has to become vamp lol,

please update soon

kez x x x

Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Bonds

i wish i had NOT found this story untill it was done i kills me with the cliffs it is a GREAT STORY!!!!  up date!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Jinxed_Angel (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 02:03 AM · On: Bonds

She lives!!!! I'm going to cry, I really am. I thought for a moment that that was the end of our dear human Bella, but she lives!

Thank you for updating, and I'm glad about the inside info on why Edward felt weak too. I can't think whats going to happen next, but thats the fun of being a reader. If i could write as good as you I'd be getting reviews like this.

Anyway, hope to see a new chapter soon.

An Entranced Reader,

Jinxed

Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Bonds

Ah, so many great answers!! This story is awesome.  So I'm assuming that was one of the pack hearing them, since a wolf howled, but maybe Edward could hear them too?  Edward has put Bella through so much already, I hope she doesn't make this too easy on him, no matter what she decides.  But that's just me being stubborn!  lol

Reviewer: writingunderatree (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Prologue

Awesome chapter! The plot is so . . .whoa. And the blood leap twist is so interesting! A cultural twist! I'm also Filipino so I know what you're talking about. It's like those stories my grandma used to tell me in the province.



Author's Response:

hey! A fellow filipina! Kumusta?

Reviewer: brain candy (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Bonds

I love the bond that Edward and Bella share!  The blood leap plays into this story perfectly!

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Bonds

Very interesting!!! What will Bella do next.

Reviewer: roze (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Bonds

That was a great chapter.

Reviewer: tan (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Bonds

this is getting very interesting.  you are very talented, i love the story, it is very different yet still on the same wave lengh as twilight.

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Bonds

another great chapter!!!

update soon!!

Reviewer: DebBee (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Bonds

Very interesting chapter...and it also answered some of the things that I was wondering about from the last chapter. I've read about the unique bond between some twins that allows them to feel the loss of each other...always incomplete, even if they never knew that they were a twin. Intriquing concept to add and fitting with your version of mating. I like the few stories that I've read that take the vampire mating deeper than SM does, making them true soulmates and their lives (or unlives...lol) connected to each other in an unbreakable bond. I'm also enjoying the edginess (for lack of a better word) of your Edward and Bella, and  can't wait to see how Edward reacts to what he overhears of Esme and Bella's window conversation.

Reviewer: Flipper (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Bonds

I just came across this fic last night and read the whole thing from start to finish.  I really like the premise of this fic.  It had be glued to my computer all night.  I also like that Edward & Bella aren't so lovey dovey which is how lots of fics portray them.  I like the twist about them being so connected that if one dies, the other dies as well.  That was brilliant! :)  Please keep writing.  Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Sophiegirl (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Bonds

Really cool chapter!

Reviewer: elektrik_lady (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Bonds

wow, I just read 12 chapters.. and I want more! Edward needs to see her.

Reviewer: Bellina (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Bonds

Wow, awesome chapter, nice twist!

Reviewer: lovesfool (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 11:21 PM · On: Bonds

oh my goodness...finally an answer to this secret bond!! i really like your whole idea about it. i'm looking forward to see what it's going to do to their relationship now that they both know about it...maybe some falling in love? or more angst??? hoorah for angst!!

Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Bonds

loved it cant wait for more

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Bonds

Good stuff... Can't wait 4 the next chapter :)

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Bonds

COOL!!!!! MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: artsyfartsy (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Bonds

So fun and totally creepy!

Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Bonds

Edward saw them. ha ha ha.  n e ways  i love this story and i can't wait to read more please please please update soon

Reviewer: skymykel (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Bonds

Great Chapter!  I've been waiting for this and I wasn't disappointed.  So, what will Bella choose to do?  I guess we'll have to wait and see!  Good job, and I'll be waiting for more! ; ) 

Reviewer: queenj21 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Alice rules: No hitting

Sooooo i take it our lovely Edward is a little experienced in this story, eh?

 

"He'd never had one so young, so uninitiated"

 

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Bonds

Well, that is quite the shocker!!  So either Bella dies and Edward dies too-an irony not lost on Bella.  Or  Bella dies, Edward has to kill her, and they live eternity together-possibly in a love/hate relationship!  And now you throw in the window and a wolf-howl!  I don't know if I will be able to sleep properly until you update!

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Bonds

Uh oh!  Something tells me that werewolves are out there!  Very interesting about the blood leap.

xoxo Sarah

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