god, i really, REALLY hope you plan to have bella make edward suffer.  i mean, as if biting her as a child and thereby turning her into... whatever the heck she is right now, he has to manipulate the hell out of her instead of allowing her to come to him.  and i think it's pretty clear she would just have come to him in the end.  argh!  too bad she couldn't have attacked him with something slightly more damaging than a crow bar.  i feel like he is just trying to set her up for a bad case of stockholm syndrome.  now she's supposed to want to be forever with the one who hurt her most.  seriously, where is the downside for edward in all this?  of course, there is none.  i really hope she gets some sort of revenge for all her misery.

 

but also, in regards to legal suit charging bella with knowledge of, & attacking a vampire, isn't edward guilty pior?  he attacked her first.  and the identified themselves to her.  hmmm.....

PLEASE......NEED EDWARD TO CHANGE HER AND HAVE ROMANTIC SEX FOLLOWED BY WILD SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OR THE OTHER WAY AROUND!!!!!!!!

PLEASE............................LET EDWARD DRAIN HER AND MAKE HER A FULL-FLEDGED VAMPIRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I got your story off of Darkwards Dungeon & I must say I am TOTALLY hooked! I love it! It is so original & well-written. I love how you portray a darker, more mature Edward. And I like the fiesty Bella. Honestly, the way this story is going I am wondering if you might bump up the rating to a more mature level. Obviously this Edward has had more experience with women! I love the growing facination with each other. I can't wait for your next update!

LindyP :)

I think this is by far one of the most original fanfics I've read. I really like the dynamic between edward and bella. It is refreshing and genuinely interesting!

Please keep this going, I have been checking back regularly waiting for new chapters. I think you are fantastic

 

xx b

Very interesting. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Big sigh with the wolves.

The entire Twilight mythology needs a strong Bella. I love Edward in the original, but to me Bella was really more of a cardboard cut out than a whole character.

Enjoying your translation.

 

Well, I would think that anyone who recognized someone very strange who hurt them as a child may have the urge to scream & run. It's a different opening than just seeing this mysterious beautiful guy.

Interesting.

 

Well that could certainly bring complications.

I'm lovin' the story, even though I'm confused as hell. I get that they have some sort of bond that ties thier lives together. Hopefully NOT in the sibling way you described in the blood jumping desciption. 'Cause that would be AWKWARD and CREEPY, considering he grinded himself on her earlier int the story. Hehe.  Is it similar to the imprinting legend? So, she's faced with the decision to live forever or die, right? Hmmm...hard decision. *snorts*  And now the wolves are gettin' involved. FANTASTIC! Poor girl can't win for losing.

A wolf?? So Jake is entering the picture?

B.Q.

Ohhhhhh so awesome!!! Im here thank to the Darkward Dungeon and Jo is a master in recs!!

Eun this fic is awesome, and you add this conection and OMG!! is super nice I just hope that Jake doesnt put his cold nose in this because I dont like him, and that last paragraph scare the s** of me.

Any way is your fic so....

bye!!