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Reviewer: mikki13tx (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:40 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
I am enthralled. Excellent story.
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:18 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
This was a very suprising chapter. It was very brutal and dark, but we were given the information to understand everything Edward has done and to see the shadows of the future. I cannot wait to read more. Great writing!!!
Reviewer: Galathea82 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:15 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
Ohhhhh Jesus you make my dream come true!!!!!! All I ever ask in life was a smut where Edward can bite Bella and here I have it!!! awesome lemon thank you very much lol
i like a lot the connections they have, that they can fell what the other is feeling.
And the threats? maybe the case against her would not be easyly resolve as Edward think and please I love him dark!!!
Reviewer: Saymi (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:59 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
This story is one of the most original i've read since i started reading fanfiction. The convolution of each charecter, how each chapter turns out to be a surprise and the twilight mythology you created have me hooked! Who're the good guys, who're the bad guys who knows? Your Bella is a very real one (as real as one can be, being a human/vampire). And i dont know whether i love or hate Edward. Controlling, manipulative, lonely, strong, unrepenting as he is. The fact that i'm leaning towards love goes to show how obsessed i am with him.
The scene in the meadow had my heart, my lungs, my stomach hell even my liver in a twist. It was so raw, unbridled, simply unlike any other.
I'm waiting on th edge of my seat for the part.
Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:47 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
very good!
Reviewer: mikki13tx (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:24 AM · On: What are you to me?
i like it!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:08 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
Manipulative, sexy, bastard! How she loves to hate him and yet knows that loving him is inevitable! So, he wants to protect her, but she is resisting-she needs to find out more about what she is up against before it's too late!
Reviewer: MVC93 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:11 AM · On: I know what you are
Love this. I certainly agree with you about the forest scenes and the spookiness, it's great :)
Reviewer: mzvez (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:44 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
Oh my goodness!! I love it, love it, love it
Reviewer: NeeNee (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:18 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
omg!
I love it
Reviewer: justreadit (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:13 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
what a psychologically thrilling story! love it!
Reviewer: JulieUK (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:23 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
Excellent!!! Best sex scene I have ever read!!! Looking fwd to your next update!!bravo!
Reviewer: Rachael (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:23 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
Crazy shit. I can't keep up with it. But, like a gruesome car accident on the side of the road, I can't look away. So bring on more mindfuck!
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:09 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
I was trying to follow the plot but I got so caught up in the hot, dirty vampire sex that my brain went all fuzzy. I'll have to read it again (and maybe again).
Reviewer: Sophiegirl (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:07 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
That was so raw.. Nicely done!
Reviewer: ChoccyJoJo (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:00 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
OOoooooooooooooh interesting! No threats from me, i like it and actually abandoned my lie-in this morning in order to read this, so there's dedication for you! Looking forward to what happens next.x
Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:52 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
God, he is a manipulative bastard. Seriously. But that had to be the HOTTEST freakin sex scene I've read in a while. I mean, whew, I think I smoked three ciggs during and after that scene. Hehe. How can he expect her to accept him though, when he insists on being a deceitful asshole? Do we get an overview in Epov, 'cause I'm dyin' to know his thoughts on this chapter. Hell, I'm dyin' to figure out what the hell is goin' on PERIOD.
Reviewer: Scully (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:44 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
Holy shit I love this story. It's such a different take, I would have never thought of it.
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 01:37 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
whoa intense!!
It was interesting giving them the link between their minds, it gives Bella the opportunity to discover and interpret and understand more about Edward than I think he would ever reveal verbally... and it will help overall with the challenges ahead, I think.
Reviewer: honeybee (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:37 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
GAH!
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:21 AM · On: In the name of synchrony
Wow that was really good im really enjoying this story i cant wait to see what happens next :)
Reviewer: pclo (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 11:02 PM · On: In the name of synchrony
oh my! Perhaps Edward is not so evil as he first appears. Can't wait to find out.
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:54 PM · On: In the name of synchrony
that was intriguingly hot ! :P
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:34 PM · On: In the name of synchrony
Wow, Edward is willing to go to any length to get her, huh? That meadow scene was quick, dirty, and pretty hot! Interesting chapter!
xoxo Sarah
Reviewer: brain candy (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 09:48 PM · On: In the name of synchrony
I like the dark Edward, he's so different. Good chapter!
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