gosh...I dont even know what to say. your story has had me so confused at times but I just kept reading hoping to understand what was going on. I think I can say I pretty much comprehend it all now. You definately took me on a wild ride with your story, you definately hit the nail on the head with the "push and pull" effect:). Can't wait to read the epi and more of your work:)

Theresa

ha she blocked him? way to go bella LOL.

 

And she threatened him saying every werewolf dies, she will kill a family member. WOW she really does have balls. I love your bella. she makes me laugh

“I will give you everything. My blood, my body, my life,” he promised her. “All I ask is that you never leave me.

aww so sad and sweet


She leaned into him and kissed him gently, softly. Like a lover would. She touched the wound in his neck in a silent apology before stepping back.


“I'll see you around, Edward Cullen.”

aww cute


great chapter. I loved how she yelled at him....destroyed his car...hit him with the crowbar....and fed off of him..then kissed her... such an amazing part hun

though I really wish you had some Jasper, Emmett and Rosalie chapters..where they talked to her (all the vampires, not just mostly edward and alice)


lmfao so the wolves were watching them....it was all a plan. Edward wanted her to attack him....so the wolves would have to side with edward and his family....I didn't expect that..I loved that convo with Jasper. lol. and she is a wolf's god child? Billy's I'm guessing?

Author's Response:

finally managed to catch up.

 

Hi there! So glad you're enjoying to story and no, I don't take anything that you've written as a flame. If it is/was, then you're a very, very kind flamer (which you are not. A flamer, I mean.) I appreciate how you've qouted the parts that are most interesting to you and I love reading your comments. Makes me wanna write the last chapter (epi) that I promised! LOL.

 

You're halfway through the story. Just a warning: It's going to be a bumpy ride so try to hold on to it and see you at the end. :)

 

Thank you for reading.

 

Hugs, Eun

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

“In your dreams, vampire.”

“No, Isabella. In yours,” he chuckled lowly.



Way to go, Edward. First threaten her, then creep her out by propositioning her and then stare at her stupidly for the rest of the day. He heard Alice chide him in his mind

llol


I loved this chapter..the lunch......her collapsing..him getting weak...him caling for rose and emmett..them helping her. great chapter

haha spongebob prints. cute.

 

i liked the part where edward was sitting on bella's bed....thinking questions to her...though it was confusing...she is goign to be his...he is going to be hers....and he could just take her and she wouldn't know in the morning? strange.....I don't see how she wouldn't know.

*smirks*

kinda pervy of him to be touching her all over though.....lucky little girl she is lol

anyway great part:)

. She also exhibits acute hearing, as she seemed to have picked on some frequencies that Emmett designed for her to overhear. "

I kinda wish that I knew what emmett said and how she reacted..


hmm so the cullens have been video taping her? Another thing that I wish you wrote out......I was kind of looking forward to the cullens watching her and finding how different she is..instead carisle showed him videos that were taken and stuff.....It isn't what I was expecting or hoping for but still was a good part

I also was hoping that they would notice her binging on rare steak and having one of her freak out moments..where she is going crazy because she is so thirsty..I wanted that to be in public....and have people make fun of her but only the cullens can help her out. But I guess if that did happend only Jasper would be able to help her out.

Esme had enrolled them all in. Emmett and Rosalie as seniors, Edward as a junior and Jasper and Alice as sophomores.

I never understood why they can't be in the same  grade....even when Stephanie Meyers wrote the book.....because everyones adopted. Everyone thinks that Rose and Jasper are twins in the book...I don't know about your story but she is a senior and he is a sophmore? Anyway if I was one of the vampires, I'd want to be in the same grade...I'd not want my siblings/friends graduating a year or two before me and getting stuck being alone LOL.

And nope that wasn't a flame hun. I have no reason to flame you! I am not a person that is rude and flames. I honestly LOVE your story so far:)


And I was right edward did bite her...and rose was there...I got confused in the chapter before this one..I thought edward said his family and him havent been in forks for a decade or so......weird that she doesn't remember them though.

WOW it got even more interesting hun. Especially the ending of this chapter when Bella was talking about how she was now after being bitten..though she doesn't remember being bitten...she remembers his eyes and voice though..strange.

 

she eats bloody steaks....she gets thirsty and then shakes for hours going crazy because she can't stop the thirst. that is so interesting!

I really am hoping that she does that in school...in public so the cullens have to help her out

This is a really interesting take on the characters in a very well written novella. I hope you write more, you have quite a talent.

 

What is going on?  I am not really sure, however this is interesting.  I guess I'll get on with the reading.

good stuff... very interesting read... completely unconventional

So Edward falls asleep after sex. This just struck me as funny because it's a joke about men in general. lol I really enjoyed the chapter. :0)

Author's Response:

LOL. It is funny. But I thought it would be appropriate that Bella's blood could put him to sleep, a very human activity. :)

hanging in there... gonna keep reading. :0) I'm interested in seeing what Bella's time with the wolves is like.