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Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: October 13, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Preparations

A little confusing, yes.  Totally staying with you.  And Tanya - Ewwww!!!!! 

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Breaking the rules

Ooh damn I ain't know that!!!

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Bonds

Her life would make a great t.v show. Could even put Gossip Girl to shame.

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 03:23 PM · On: Alice rules: No hitting

Oh shit. It;s proably because she thought that her thirst wre aniexty attacks.

Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Preparations

Good chapter, can't wait to get more answers.  Too many questions not enough answers!!!  grrr.  Answers would be nice, don't make me create and Evilward to get you for making us wait too long :)

Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Preparations

great chapter! update soon!

Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Preparations

i like edwards answer to tanya.

update soon!!

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 12:53 PM · On: What are you to me?

Hey he is invading on her private thoughts!! It's not like she can do the same to him,and he wonders why she punched in the face?

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 12:44 PM · On: I know what you are

Sorry Bells. I know that no amount of saying sorry is gonna help but at least you got to punch Suckward in the face. eople he got punched he can at least  say it was by a beautiful woman.

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Unraveling the mystery

Dammnit!! I wish Bells would have known that their tricking her. 

Reviewer: LindyP (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Preparations

Again, I was so happy to see your update! I find myself really having to reread everything so I can try to fully understand what is going on. So Bella is the key to their defeating the Volturi, but I wonder, is her power the same as Canon or different? I guess we'll find out. And what did the Volturi do to Carlisle & why did Esme not answer Edward's question about following Carlisle's commands? Your darker Edward really intrigues me! I find myself wishing that he would want Bella more for than just her silent mind though. Or maybe he does, but does not realise this as of yet? I would love a little look inside their time together alone in the cabin! That must be a touch uncomfortable! Looking forward to your next posting!

LindyP :)



Author's Response:

teaser at the forums: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=3694&st=0&sk=t&sd=a&start=130  :D

 

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Bella reacts to seeing Edward

Oo hot damn,hot damn!! It gets better and better by each chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 12:18 PM · On: I see you

Oh crap!!! Bella had a good ass meomory for a 9 year old.

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 12:10 PM · On: First encounter

Ooh this is so awesome!!

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 12:04 PM · On: The Cullens

Oh just DAMN!!!! Edward in the Volturi? Oh the irony of that one!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Bella comes home

Wow! So who on earth could the vampire who bit her be.

Reviewer: trutwilightfantasy (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Preparations

Oh, I'm with you, confused as hell, but I'm with you. Do they still plan on changing Bella? See, I'm so freakin lost. Are her and Edward builing on thier relationship at all? They still seem to be just barely tolerating each other.

Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Preparations

oh, you already know i love your story so much, so i won't compliment till death do us part (or however the saying goes)..i just really hope that silence isn't the only thing.

she is a unique person. and i'm not talking about her powers; i'm talking about her way of thinking.

:)

Reviewer: haippa (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 09:42 AM · On: Preparations

oooooooooooooooo i cant wait for the next chapter...............dis is awesome



Author's Response:

teaser at the thread http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=3694&st=0&sk=t&sd=a&start=130  ;D

Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Preparations

I love this story but it's confusing as hell.

Reviewer: princesspeach (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Prologue

Yep, still confused.  :)  But this fic is hypnotic, drug-like -- like my personal brand of heroin. ;)

Reviewer: Beignet (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Preparations

Excellent chapter! Is it wrong I am hoping for the great battle Breaking Dawn didn't give us?

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Preparations

Still confused, yes

Reviewer: hisbrandofheroine (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:14 AM · On: Preparations

confused...a little...enthralled...alot :)  This battle is going to be amazing...and who is taking over the Volturi rule...hmmmm



Author's Response:

something at the forums. http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=3694&st=0&sk=t&sd=a&start=130 :D

Reviewer: EverlightGirl14 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 06:46 AM · On: Bella comes home

Oh fanstatic!!!!!!!!

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