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Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Breaking the rules
Edward really is a sneaky so-and-so!! Gracious! Well, he had objectives and he met them.
But that's not going to be pleasant.
Oh! What's with the blood thing? I thought vampires had venom in place of blood? Or is that one of your deviations from canon?
Still fascinating. I can't even manage to leave my computer to sleep. lol
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Unraveling the mystery
This is just fascinating. The backstory of the human/vampire/werewolf interaction, the "sacrifices" and the way you've got the sibs working to keep order in the new world order is just...wow. Extremely cool. Very well played.
Your Edward is a keenly edged character. I look forward to seeing this scenario play out.
Reviewer: marukawa (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Breaking the rules
well, i certainly didn't see THAT coming,...good job! xD;
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2009 01:53 AM · On: Breakdown
Ok sooooo how long till she is changed??????// i keep thinking it should happen soon!!!!UPDATE ASAP Pleaseeeeee
Barb
Reviewer: mrs_n (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Preparations
Holy Hannah I finally read through the whole thing. Its taken me forever because I got super busy right after starting it and didn't have time to read it for like a week! And then things just keep coming up every time I sit down to read lol. Its weird. I love it and I hate it. Edward really creeps me out and Bella is... Well, she just seems like Bella to me. But the Cullens seem hard somehow. Especially Edward oh my. Hes like a robot or something unfeeling. And even when he does feel her emotions as if they're his own he still doesn't stop being a jerk. He stresses me out lol. I feel like its not even interest that keeps me reading more like need. I NEED to know what happens. I NEED to know if he changes into someone better. Its so strange lol. Update soon. As now I'm caught up and can actually appreciate an update lol.
Author's Response: teaser at the thread.:D
Reviewer: kate1991 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Preparations
I don't want to wait long (whining here)...pretty please update soon. p.s Thanks 4 your answer
Author's Response: teaser at the thread. :D
Reviewer: kate1991 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Preparations
a question: Do E & B have a greater bond as mates than the other couples or not?
Author's Response: aieeeee! you'll have to wait for the next chapter but YES, they do. :)
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Preparations
I wonder if silence is the only thing that she offers him besides anybody else, or if it is just all that he says out loud.
Awesome work! Please update soon!
Author's Response: teaser at the thread. :D
Reviewer: pillowbiter (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 03:39 PM · On: In the name of synchrony
WHOA! You have far exceed any expectations I have from this. I havent' read any fanfic like this yet and I've read a few hundred now lol :)
Your Edward is...wow. You want to hate him because he's not allowing Bella to think for herself and he's s damn manipulative and just takes what he wants but gahh he's hot for it! You have created an incredible sexy Edward (as though he isnt enough already!)
You keep answering my questions from the previous chapter in the next one but I think you create even more than you're answering! I love it. You've def got a fan here.
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Preparations
Wow. Confused? No, not really! Not anymore, it's all starting to clear up now, I think! :D But who knows, you could pull another twist of some sort.
I love the battle plan they have. And the preparation that must've gone into this whole scheme. It seems to have all started a long, long time before hand, with Carlisle (right?). Their one defence, the one thing the Volturi wont exptect, is the werewolf involvement and help in this fight. In coming to Alaska, I'm guessing the Volturi have no clue that the pack has split and now own part of that land as well, not just in La Push - is that correct? Hmm... I like it! :D
So who could this one person be that is already in Volterra, that is the only person - above Aro - who the rebels and most of the Volturi guard will follow? And am I correct in thnking that they want Carlisle to lead and rule Volterra, is that what Edward was getting at? “Rest assured that I have no intention of overthrowing the Volturi, only of changing it. And I have no wish to rule it. I leave that to you. As your first companions, Esme and I will agree to whatever you decide. Won't we, Esme?”
Hmm.. interesting, very interesting! So is Bella becoming more of a vampire now, or is she still half vamp/half human? And what kind of training is she doing, if in fact she still is part human - unless it has something to do with her ability and power, the vampire blocker?
Please update again soon! :D Can't wait to find out more answers, and ask more questions!
Author's Response: teaser at the thread."D
Reviewer: pillowbiter (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Prologue
Wow. Only a chapter in and I'm already being taken by surprise. I expected it to be a random vampire that bit her! I really like where this story is heading and can't wait to continue reading!
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Breakdown
Hmm.. interesting.. why didn't I read this chapter before? Weird.
Anyways! I love it! Edward's starting to treat her more like a human being than a pet! He's trying, he really is now, I think! Yay!
Now Bella knows of his plans, and what her part is in all of this. It's about time! :P
I know, this is a shorter review, but I want to get to the next chapter before I go assuming anything! :P So on to the next...!
Reviewer: LMCullen (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 12:10 AM · On: Preparations
You have had me crying, biting my nails, laughing, swearing and i do not know what else
please do us all the favor and update very very soon
Author's Response: teaser at the thread. :D
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Preparations
ok started out great, but now.... Im sorry... no thanks
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Alice rules: No hitting
not dying.... finishing the change... its obvious
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:35 AM · On: I know what you are
Spooked HELL...... thats freaking COOL
Reviewer: kate1991 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Preparations
I loved your story so far. I hoped though that eddie would get his ass kicked by emmet for not treating his girl any better. He actually referred to her as 'my pet'...WTF
Author's Response: teaser at http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=3694&st=0&sk=t&sd=a&start=130 :D
Reviewer: kalanthia (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2009 01:08 AM · On: Breaking the rules
Woah, Edward, that mean bastard! And I started to like him til the middle of the chapter... grrr... otherwise, I like what you've written.
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:40 PM · On: I see you
is she a vampire already,just maturing or something
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Preparations
Yes I am confused but in a good way!!! Great chapter Really love this story!
Reviewer: hockeymom (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Bella comes home
oh my....
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Preparations
Hmmm he didn't let her drive...still trying to control what he has left. It would seem a major shift in the vampire world is coming. The plan is brilliant and I am anxious to see it all come to pass. I wonder who it is in Volterra that is to lead? The aniticipation is rising and I am getting more and more excited.
Author's Response: teaser at the thread. :D
Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Preparations
Very nice chapter. I can understand with Edward's gift, why Bella would be his chosen haven. Eager to know what is going to happen next.
Author's Response: teaser at the thread: http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=33&t=3694&st=0&sk=t&sd=a&start=130 :D
Reviewer: katbb1 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Preparations
Love your style of writing!
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Preparations
Thanks for the update. Well done!
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