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Reviewer: midnightgirl (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2010 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 10
this is really good. i love it when someone takes a different aproach to the story. the history you described here is amazing.very creative. update soon.
Reviewer: 78slayer (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 10
This is a wonderful story, I eagerly await the next installment.
Reviewer: Yathena (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 10
urg!! i wanna know what Aunt Izzy is planning!!
update soon!!!!!
Reviewer: Jesse Mason (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 8
please write the rest! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Jesse Mason (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 10
PLEASE WRITE THE REST!!!!!!!!!! IT WAS SO GOOD!!! PRETTY PLEASE WITH SUGAR ON TOP WRITE THE REST!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: mel_bell (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 10
just read through this tonight.....really am quite liking it.....interesting way to explain bella's comfort around vamps......and tie that in with saving her in italy.....
Reviewer: NettieMarsh (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 10
i cant think of any questions for you. i just started reading your story late last night and im im truly in love with it. i would reccommend this to anyone that loves twilight and a new connection to why bella is so different from any other human. but please update soon, i know you're busy and i understand as im school, but i love your ideas and this story so soon pretty pretty please (yes ive resorted to begging..that's how much i love this story :)
Reviewer: ebatcl (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 10
Loved it! Though it seems obvious that Bella and Jacob's relation isn't important to this story, I still wish it won't be mentioned too much. Edward and Bella forever!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 10
Wow, its great that she is finally able to talk to someone about everything that happened.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 10
Ok, I'm a bit confused on what Izzy said, can you explain it a little? Love the chapter, it's great!
Author's Response: I'm a little confused on which part you're a little confused on... I'll PM for clarification.
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 10
*is confused and thinking of Charlie's possible yuck moment* How was Izzy playing the connection to bella other than Godmother? Family friend, or some how blood because in Charlie's head Charlise is Izzy's brother and Edward is his son, Izzy is Bella's Aunt making Charlise her uncle and Edward her cousin--*grabs head dizzy* Whoa that took a lot of work.
*snickers* This is too funny, I love all the dynamics of the relationships in this story! Especially that of Charlise and Izzy's.
Also the "Orgasm on wheels line" priceless *snickers and pats Bella and Edward on the head* I feel for them. *laughs louder, but quiets quickly as they start glaring evilly* *snicker*
Great writing, I can't wait to read next chapter! *eager!*
Jace
Author's Response: Charlie and Renee met Isabel and Alex right after they were married and became very close friends so naturally when they needed godparents, they chose Alex and Izzy. Bella called her 'Aunt' because she was practically family. I myself had a baby-sitter for close to 10 years that I called 'Mom' and then her name, because she took care of me from the time I was a few weeks old until I didn't need a baby-sitter anymore. I wanted Bella and Izzy to have the really close connection since Bella always felt like she took care of Renee. I wanted someone to take care of her, someone she could call family. But in the eyes of Charlie, there's no blood connection between Izzy and Bella, just a very close family friend. So the only thing Charlie feels wierd about is the fact that Izzy never told Charlie Edward was her "nephew".
Now for the whole 'things you never want to hear out of a parental figure's mouth' - trust me. I'm still scared from the Christmas where I was 13 and my cousins and I had to sit around listening to my grandmother to tell everyone to make sure they 'pull the rubers down nice and tight' on these candle things she bought everyone. Over 10 years later, it still haunts me.
Thanks for your review, as always, and I hope I cleared some things up for you!
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 10
*squeals at the mention* I was named in the author's notes!! That so totally rocks!!! *does a happy dance--pauses* err...I'll go read the actual chapter now *grins and dances away still muttering* I was mentioned in Author's notes!!
Jace
Author's Response: I'm very glad I could make you so happy. :)
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2008 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 9
Not much gets past Bella. It makes sense that they were saved in Volterra now, I never really thought that Aro would give in that easily...
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 9
EEEkkk Awesome story Post again real soon thank you!@
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 9
Bella wants to know how long they're here for, I want to know how long it'll be until an update!
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2008 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 9
lol, I just love this Bella, she is absolutely witty. your Izzy is great too. Can't wait to read more!
Jace
Reviewer: Anya (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 8
uh oh...wait...Carlisle know about Bella even before he met Bella? ok i need to reread this again, i feel like im missing something
Author's Response: Eh, it's fanfiction. I started this before Breaking Dawn came out and actually my beta switched categories when she read it and made an AU due to the whole vampire getting human preggers thing.....and then BD came out....so we're still rolling with it here. :)
Author's Response: Eh, it's fanfiction. I started this before Breaking Dawn came out and actually my beta switched categories when she read it and made an AU due to the whole vampire getting human preggers thing.....and then BD came out....so we're still rolling with it here. :)
Reviewer: kate_and_garrett (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2008 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 4
how could her grandmother have a hybrid and live without becoming a vampire?
Author's Response: Lol I posted this response on the wrong one....look above for your answer? :)
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2008 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 8
Uh oh, it must be some kind of weird princess of Volturra ring or something.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Extra
pretty kewl so far! So much additional knowledge I had no clue!!! Interesting mind frame I look forward to reading more!!
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 6
Awesome. I am riveted by this story. It is so original.
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 6
wow that answered a TON of questions!!!
Author's Response: Oh thank you, I thought it might never go anywhere :)
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2008 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 5
Cue Carlisle...
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