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Reviews For Missing Dawn
Reviewer: yihyu (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Desperation

interesting one. Bella could think of Isle Esme, she would definitely want Edward to pleasure her.



Author's Response:

Lol, who wouldn't?

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Desperation

I love this story i cant wait to see what happens next.Hopefully edward and  bella can have that conversation that they to have soon.



Author's Response:

Lol, I couldn't write that without steering completely away from canon, which I don't intend to do.  Thank you so much for reading, and I'm so glad you're enjoying it!  :D

Reviewer: achelle131 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Desperation

Wow, your rose is a super bitch! lol 

You actually bring up a lot of points in your A/N. It is kind of strange that they never got to really talk about the pregnancy, but I guess it is true that Rose was there to prevent that from happening. But even if she was there, i would think as Edward's wife I would still be able to voice that I wanted to keep the baby because it was mine and his, and not just because I wanted one.  and who would want to have puppies? LOL

can't wait until the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I so agree with everything you just said!

And I wouldn't mind having puppies if the dog was as hot as Jacob, lol!  ;D  (That's just me, though.)

So what did you think about my Emmett?  That's the first time I've ever written him. 

Reviewer: laylieb (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:24 AM · On: The Unforeseen

wonderful job!!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!

Reviewer: laylieb (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Isle Esme

beautiful!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so!

Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Desperation

wow



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Desperation

I agree with your AN at the end. Rosalie´s "helping hand" ha, ha.

I can also tell you why I love this chapter. Every time I read BD I am left with more what ifs than anything else.I hated the pregnancy through JPOV.

Thank you for your insights, very well written.

 

sincerely,

Karina.

ps. loved E last line!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Karina!  I'm so so glad you enjoyed it!  And I'm glad you appreciated the "helping hand" comment, lol.  ;D

Reviewer: Nattig9 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:01 AM · On: The Unforeseen

WOW! that was really good :) Great job!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  ;)

Reviewer: simon (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Desperation

Thanks for this fanfic.  I always thought there were so many empty and unsaid things in Breaking Dawn.  I have enjoyed you filling in the links.

Cant wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad to be able to fill in some of the gaps!  Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Desperation

I agree completely, they should have had a talk, but Rosalie probably got in the way.  (I understand her motives, but I'm really not a Rose fan)  But, by the same token, Edward should have understood that this was their baby and Bella would cherish it.  *shrug*

Either way, fantastic update!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  And yes, I totally agree that Edward should've realized why Bella wanted to keep the baby.  ;)

Reviewer: wishiwasacullen (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Desperation

KariAnn,

Thanks again for another insightful chapter.  I love both of your stories and have been jonesing (LOL) for new chapters.

I love the thought and care that you put into each chapter.  You have such an awesome ability to enhance each character so well.  You have filled in so many blank spots that SM left unfilled.

Thanks so much for having such a wonderful writing ability for those of us that don't. 

Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve with this story and with In Pursuit......I find myself checking every day the minute my computer is up and running.

Keep up the GREAT work!

"Impatiently waiting......" for more......



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm so glad that you're reading and enjoying both of my stories.  Because I put a lot of care into each chapter I write, it's nice to know my work in appreciated.  In Pursuit is my baby, lol.  I'm particularly proud of that one!  ;D

Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Homecoming

 i like it very well done



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: cbp (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Desperation

"One last thing that bothered me was the idea that Carlisle wouldn’t have realized that the fetus would need blood"  That was a big problem for me in the book, so I'm looking forward to how you handle that issue :)



Author's Response:

Well, I don't know how much 'handling' I'm going to be doing, because I really am trying to stick to canon as closely as possible, but we'll see.  ;)  Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: cfmom (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Desperation

Woo Hoo! Look how quick this chapter went up. So exciting.

*snort* If I'm honest the "helping hand" comment really wrote itself. It's so Rose. ;)

Can't wait for more of this story.

~Lisa

 



Author's Response:

Lol, I know, right??

So did you submit your next chapter, or are you going to wait 'til Friday morning?

Reviewer: Shastapopsicle (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Homecoming

This has been my favorite fanfic so far.  

I loved BD, but like many people felt that a lot was missing, and I just wasn't satisfied with my own imagination's conclusions. 

Based on some other stories I have read here, I was concerned before beginning that the rating of nc-17 forecasted a tawdry and tacky soft-core mess.  But I was relieved to find the telling of the honeymoon scenes to be well-crafted and tasteful, but still exciting.  There were only two instances in my opinion which were unpleasantly OOC, both occurring in the last love scene, but that is easily forgiven as the rest was so well done.

I understand Kariann's frustration in the final chapter with SM's decision to have Bella be silent on her return to Forks.  But I think it makes for good tension in the story, and I agree with her treatment of the storyline here.  Edward's only focus is Bella.  And like many real men, he can't conjure fatherly feelings until he sees his child before him.  Or in his case, "hears" his child.  

I think you did fine with the ObGyn stuff.  Close enough.  I've had 3 babies myself, and I think the mortification of the exam is something you never get used to.  You captured how Bella (shy and private) would have felt in her unique situation very well. 

Thanks for the great read!



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much for reading and for taking the time to let me know what you think!  I'm so glad you thought my version of the missing honeymoon scenes was well done, even if it did go beyond your comfort level at a couple of points, lol.  I understand that a lot of people have different opinions about what Edward and Bella would or wouldn't do/say in bed, and I respect those differing opinions.

Concerning Bella's silence on the return trip, you're right in that it did make for good tension, but I suppose what bothered me the most was the idea that Edward and Bella apparently didn't discuss the pregnancy at all.  If they had, I don't think Edward would've still been dumb enough to try and enlist Jacob's "stud services," lol.

Again, thank you so much for reading, and I'm flattered that my fic is your favorite so far!  ;D

Reviewer: mountaintop (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Homecoming

I enjoyed having Edward and Bella talk about the pregnancy, which was missing from Breaking Dawn...



Author's Response:

Thanks!

I know - in the book, they don't discuss it at all, which I really didn't understand!

Reviewer: plinky108 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Homecoming

that was awsome you MUST write more id like to hear what its like when they first do it when bella a vampire that should be interesting;)



Author's Response:

Definitely plan on writing that scene!  ;D

Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: SingerJ (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Homecoming

Two words:

LOVED IT!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: LadyMacKenzie (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Homecoming

I just found this story, Missing Dawn. I have read the first five chapters and I can't wait for the next chapter!! Please update soon!

{{hugs}}

Mac

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you found my story!

I am in the process of writing chapter six!  You'll have to forgive me if updates are a bit slow in coming, as I also have a multi-chaptered post-BD fic that I'm writing.

-Kari

Reviewer: wearefanpires (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Isle Esme II

OOO! YUMM! Haha! :-) Keep writing! Love it!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  :D

Reviewer: What_The_Hale (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 05:38 AM · On: Homecoming

This was great! I loved it how Bella was so fierce about protecting Renesmee, I know she was protecting her in the book but we never saw the early stages of her pregnancy. This was really great!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  ;D

Reviewer: twilover09 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Homecoming

Well, it's nice to find another fan of BD finally. It seems like most everyone I know and on the internet despised it. So I'm glad that you liked it too, I thought it was a good ending to the series.

Anyway, this chapter was great! I agree that Bella should've spoken up a bit more, it is her body after all. But you're version of this part was a good addition to the story and the interaction between the Cullens was perfect.

I'm looking forward to your other missing moments!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  I'm so glad you like my story so much!

While I don't know a whole lot of people who thought BD was perfect, I have met quite a few people on the internet who enjoyed it for the most part - like all the people who've reviewed this fic, for example, lol!

I, too, found it to be a good ending to the series, and all the problems I had with it are addressed in both this fic and my Nessie/Jake fic In Pursuit of Normalcy.

Anyway, once again, thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to let me know what you think!

Reviewer: twilover09 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 05:17 PM · On: The Unforeseen

I've really enjoyed your version of these scenes so far!! I think you have Edward's line of thinking and personality personified perfectly. This chapter was definitely tense and strained in BD, so Edward's view of it all is even more difficult to get through. The conversation with Kaure was very well-written, and exactly how I imagined it went.

Great job!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!

Reviewer: starfish (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Isle Esme

Woa, this chapter is sad and awesome at the same time. I really like it. Plz update soon, I can't wait to see the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, and I'll get the next chapter up as soon as possible!

Reviewer: vjstigall (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Homecoming

This is a great story. I don't think I've ever cried so much. I hope that continue this because it's really beautiful. 

Virginia



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  And yes - it will continue!  I apologize if updates are a bit slow in coming, as I have another multichaptered fic I'm writing at the same time.  :D

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