Beautiful

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! Glad you liked it xxx :)

Awe!  That's just cool.  I love Seth as a character and it's nice to see him doing normal guy stuff.  We always see him involved in the pack stuff or over at the Cullens, never at home.  I've always thought he would be somewhat awkward and lost there.  Don't know why, but he just seems to be made to be this happy go lucky werewolf who doesn't quite fit in with the real world, at least for now.  You really caught that entire concept for him in making him think about what he would do when things had settled down and he would have to figure out what he was going to do after the supernatural world was done with him.

But back to Seth being Seth at home - I'm glad to see him acting like a normal boy suddenly being surprised by a pretty girl.  It was cute and gave Seth the opportunity to think about normal life and to interact with somoene who was 'normal' as well.

As always, loving the characterization and story!  Keep writing please.

Author's Response:

THank you! Glad you liked Seth - it was fun writing a normal teenage boy for a change! Thanks for your review xx :)