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Reviewer: ILEAMC (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 08:36 PM · On: A Day For Ranting

I really liked your story cant wait to hear more!

Reviewer: selene_romanov (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

I'm guessing Bella was out with Alice/Rose and she used him as an excuse to get out, or she was just fucking with him.  haha, more soon plz.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

This is a wickedly fun story!  I am guessing that either Bella is sleep talking or someone has walked into her apartment that doesn't have a lock?  Can't wait to find out!

Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

that was way better than i expeted...funny as shit!!...more please

 

Reviewer: allucinatoris (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Confused is an Understatement

hehehe  is this by any chance the product of the trio of girls all being together???

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Confused is an Understatement

LOL OMG HAHA!! *ROFLMAO*

That was so funny. What the hell was wrong with Bella though?

I loved this chapter. So funny.

Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.

Reviewer: hanachan89 (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 04:12 AM · On: Confused is an Understatement

hahaha! lol yea i think its good that you didn't have Jasper say that... LOVE the picture by the way, please pass that onto the artist!

so i think that Bella's just acting right now... like someone like Jacob is in her house and shes trying to get out of there by pretending shes going to go get laid lol.

ORRRR!

Bella told Alice and Rosalie about Edward and she is fucking with him while they're in the backgroud haha

i kind of hope its that last one... hehe...

PLEASE have them meet soon!!!!

LOVE THE STORY!!!! <3

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 03:54 AM · On: A Day For Ranting

I just started this story and I really like it so far. I need a little break from all the angsty stuff I've been reading. I love the drawing.

Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Lanemyer (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 02:32 AM · On: Confused is an Understatement

Wooooo!
Crazies are out to play. Can't wait to find out who Bella was trying to get away from. I'm thinking either Alice (though I'm pretty sure she could tell she was lying) or Mike (because then it would link with Confusedward and then they could get their freak on. Them getting their freak on is pretty much all I think about.)?

Ok loved it, again. Awesomeness in words = you.

10! 10! 10! (Rare I give a ten)

Reviewer: Usagi-chan (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

Tehehehe. How awesome. I think I died laughing at the interaction between the two of them.

Reviewer: Karah5406 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 11:17 PM · On: A Day For Ranting

WOW! I love this so far! i am about to read chapter two, but I wanted to review this chapter for you as well.  I really loved this beginning, I love seeing both sides and that his sympathy was fake lol.  I love with relationships in books, movies or stories begin antagonistically then slowly change to something else.  It makes it exciting and holds the reader attention and anticipation.  Great start! Off to chapter two!  OH--I love the artwork too, it's awesome and hilarious. Poor Bella, poor Alice :D

Reviewer: LauraJen (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

LMAO! This is great.

Keep writing.

Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

Ah, the 'crazy' gets back at him. Nicely done.

Reviewer: jewelryjunkie (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

wow, i'm still rolling around in my chair laughing my ass off. This chapter was hilarious- Edward's reaction to Bella's loony-ness was priceless! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

That was too funny!!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

That was too funny!!

Reviewer: Magnanimous (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

Ohh, She is so totally playing Alice and Rose right now! She told them she has a boyfriend, and so now she has to pretend that he really is her guy. At least, thats my theory! Anyways, I LOVE this story! It's so funny!

Cannot wait for the next update! Wish it would come soon. *hinthint* =]

Reviewer: MonCherie (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

I cant wait to find out what that was about lol :) Great update!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

WTH? LOL. Did Jasper say something to Alice or Bella to pull one over on Edward or is Bella talking in her sleep? Too cruel on the cliffie! LOL!!

Edward the telemarketer is cracking me up!

Reviewer: geosgirl (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 07:09 PM · On: A Day For Ranting

You know - if there was chance of landing an "Edward" from taking a telemarketer call, then I'm there! LMAO! Loved it!

Reviewer: Razzlebedazzled (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

OMG!! Bella was sooooo faking a convo to get herself out of a situation. I hope she's okay!

Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 06:34 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

I love this story...off to a great start! And the little pictures at the end of the chapters are hilarious!

 

Reviewer: loves-eternal-destiny (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 06:31 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

hahahahaha, i am practically laughing my ass off right now, haha. at first when you said about how bella answered the phone int he middle of the night with a quiet and alert voice, i thought maybe someone broke into her house or something, but then she started saying all of that shit, so i thought that maybe someone was trying to 'persue' her or something or the sort, hahaha. well either that or she was just trying to freak edward out. which she succeeded in doing! haha, just picturing edward with a baseball bat by his front door with a cute but confused look on his face is hilarious! haha. anyway, i love the story, and i really like the cartoons at the bottom too!!! i can't wait until you update next!

Reviewer: rocko (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

this is a nice story...original, at least =P

and the pics are really cute, by the way =)

Reviewer: peachykeenbean17 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Confused is an Understatement

HAHAHAHA I have actually screwed with telemarketers before... it's fun,.... unless you're a telemartketer then I'm sorry :( hehehe

Great laughes on this end and I love the pictures at the end!!

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