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Reviewer: jewelryjunkie (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:26 PM · On: General Pain is Tougher

Great job on the wonderful chapter! You write drama very well! I love how Edward & Bella have finally met eachother and know the story is really going to get interesting.. I can't wait!

 

Reviewer: Danger_Magnet (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:08 PM · On: General Pain is Tougher

Everything there is to do with this story never fails to make me giggle like a little girl!

The chapters are chock full of sexy AWESOME! *Though some of the circumstances of this chapter may not seem awesome through the characters perspective...ah but screw them I loved it!) And the reviews of love and praise make my day. And it's not even my story!

Just shows how awesome it is that it can affect me that way.

Also the lovely comments on my drawings make my head just that little bit bigger

Twitch, you have some kick-ass fans! Don't let them down! (phh like you could. You rock too much)

your adoring friend and fan, Danger_Magnet

xx ^-^

Reviewer: buckwheat (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:03 PM · On: General Pain is Tougher

Okay I really like this chapter! please update! A. S. A. P.!!!!

Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:52 PM · On: General Pain is Tougher

you have nothing to worry about... that was an intense drama chapter... very well done!!

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:37 PM · On: General Pain is Tougher

Loved it intense, but I can't wait to see how it goes from here.

Reviewer: Solidae (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:24 PM · On: General Pain is Tougher

YAY!  I loved the attack scene, and I am soooo glad they finally met!!! 

 

Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:22 PM · On: General Pain is Tougher

yay they finally met. Not in a good situation but I'm happy he saved her. I wonder what will come next. I want to say thank you not only do u write a great story but u provide a comic. I look forwad to them. Thank you and danger_magnet

Reviewer: rcselbsmn (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:17 PM · On: General Pain is Tougher

I loved this chapter! Great job!

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:00 PM · On: General Pain is Tougher

I just found your story today.  I am enjoying it very much.  And your artist does an amazing job!  I can't wait for the next update.  :)

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:58 AM · On: General Pain is Tougher

Yeah! everything is out in the open now. Kind of a wild way to do but its par for the course that Edward saves her. Good job, can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: gpl993 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:45 AM · On: General Pain is Tougher

That was PERFECT!!! I was so hoping that Edward would get to save her, although I didn't think that was when he would get to meet her.  Now they can finally have a real conversation, face-to-face!  I'm so excited for the next chapter!

Reviewer: whenpoetryrises (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:16 AM · On: General Pain is Tougher

I squealed when I got the notification of this update in my mailbox. Yes, squealed. Out loud. ;) Your story is one of my absolute favorites.

First, about the double-perspectives: in most stories, it wouldn't work, but I think it does in this one, especially because for the first 6 chapters they don't meet each other. It's a different take on the action and I think it works well. :) But of course some people will get bored reading. I did two POVs of the same event for just one chapter of my story and some people didn't like it. But I think it works, especially because you have them in the same chapter. If people want to read just one POV, it's easy to do! :)

I think you write action/drama sequences incredibly well. This chapter seemed very real. Of course, it's a sensitive/difficult topic to write about, so I applaud you for doing so with such grace.

Also, I am a big fan of Edward to the rescue! ;) I also liked how you built up to the ending, when they recognize each other from the telephone. People's voices tend to sound slightly different on the phone and they were both under stress, so it's much more natural that they didn't recognize each other right away.

I also liked how you highlighted Bella's selflessness and Edward's protective side in this chapter. I think it worked very well. It's interesting what they notice about each other in such a difficult situation.

I'm so, so excited for next chapter because I can't wait to see what happens next! I hope they get to meet and talk more at the hospital or afterwards. (Take all the time you need to update though--I'm not saying I want an update right away, just that when it comes, there will be some more squealing on my part!)

Thanks so much for writing! Fabulous chapter, as always. This story always brightens my day. :) Also, Danger_Magnet continues to do a wonderful job on the pictures and I will definitely be keeping my eye out for your cowritten story!

Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:53 AM · On: General Pain is Tougher

Yes!! Finally! They've met each other! I'm so happy for them.

Loved it! Seriously. There aren't enough words to express how amazing this story is. Your characters are awesome, and I'm always LOL at the funny moments.

Please update soon! I want to know what happens next!

Oh, and the drama was perfect. Very exciting and totally engaging. :)

Reviewer: Mayalucille (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:39 AM · On: General Pain is Tougher

This was completely awesome! Don't worry, you did a great job! Please updaye soon ^^

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:26 AM · On: General Pain is Tougher

I think you did a good job with this chapter. Im glad they know who each other are now. The drawing was great as always. I really liked Edwards abs.

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:26 AM · On: General Pain is Tougher

I think you did a good job with this chapter. Im glad they know who each other are now. The drawing was great as always. I really liked Edwards abs.

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:25 AM · On: General Pain is Tougher

Wow, there was a lot going on in that chapter.  Great job though!  Poor Bella...I'm so glad Edward was there to save her!  And now they know who the other is...I hope Edward calls her again...or maybe visits the hospital?

xoxo Sarah

Reviewer: Ctorrado (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:20 AM · On: General Pain is Tougher

Simply A-M-A-Z-I-N-G, I was desperate for them to finally meet each other, but never thought it would be through james' attack, and it was the most awesome thing ever, loved it.

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:13 AM · On: General Pain is Tougher

Awesome chapter. Now they have faces to match the voice. I'm happy that they have finally met each other in person!!

I'm so glad that Edward won against the fight against James, although I feel that it isn't over between him and Bella and maybe James.

Please update soon? I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:55 AM · On: General Pain is Tougher

It was perfect for me. So glad is all out in the open. Can't wait to see them interacting again. Is funny how she thinks that she might not get a chance to talk to him again, when he's just riding in the front sit, it just made me laugh. I love the comics too.

Reviewer: aerosoldoc (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:27 AM · On: General Pain is Tougher

What the...? "bloodlust"??

Are you telling me that Edward is a vampire telemarketer??

I thought this was AH??

Okay, that was kinda naughty slipping that in...

Seriously LOVE the chapter - I know how hard it is to write that action stuff. I can't wait to see how this all unravels, since they *finally* have met, I mean for real, you know...

"Slave"...ha!  I love how you've drawn these characters (and the actual drawing is awesome too). Looking forward to more...!

Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:04 AM · On: General Pain is Tougher

That's a great illustration, Danger_Magnet! In fact, I love all your illustrations, please keep it up! :)

As for this chapter - WHOA! Amazing doesn't even cover it. I was totally anxious and balancing precariously at the edge of my seat. You said you're worried about this chapter - well, I think you did great! And in a way it's so bittersweet because FINALLY they see each other. *snicker* Oh and I'm so excited now and can't wait to see what happens next.

Please keep it up!

Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:39 AM · On: General Pain is Tougher

SO CUTE!!!!CAN"T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!

Reviewer: frol (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:38 AM · On: General Pain is Tougher

YAY they finally meet!

Reviewer: tmacdon552 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:23 AM · On: General Pain is Tougher

This story is funny and snarky and the characters written so appealingly!  I cannot wait to see what happens now!  They finally know each other ! YEAHHS

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