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Reviewer: kwake (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2013 10:22 AM · On: Laid Bare
I love this Rosalie POV!!! This is by far the best "in canon" fanfic I have ever read, and I've read MANY! You do an incredible job of getting into the characters' heads and expressing their true emotions! This is better than reading the real BD:-)
Reviewer: kwake (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2013 09:46 AM · On: Reflections
Really liked this chapter! Awesome foray into Edward's mind during his first hunt "post-coital".
Reviewer: kwake (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 06:43 PM · On: Relinquish
Love this Edward fantasy of changing her while literally inside her, possessing her! HOT!
Reviewer: kwake (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 06:28 PM · On: Paradise Found
Loved this chapter! Great use of Edward's piano playing analogy in their lovemaking :-)
Reviewer: Avacharenma (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2012 03:20 PM · On: Paradise Lost
Just wanted to say I Love what you have written! Breaking Dawn is my favorite book and getting the insights to their minds as this time in the book we oly got Bellas is wonderful, you are very talented and I can't wait to read more !
Reviewer: Aluap07 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 08:11 PM · On: Paradise Found
Excellent I'm loving it and can't wait to read more keep up the good work !!!
Author's Response: Thanks! This is by far my most popular story. I do hope you continue to enjoy it.
Reviewer: Aluap07 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 06:16 PM · On: Finally
Excellent just what we needed more details of the honeymoon !!
Reviewer: Aluap07 (Signed) · Date: November 19, 2012 10:50 AM · On: Expectations
Good stuff !!
Reviewer: Aluap07 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2012 05:31 PM · On: Forbidden Love
Good start !!
Reviewer: LetsJustDance (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 08:36 PM · On: Revelations
Edward's inner dialogue is quite interesting...I like how you are layering his thoughts into the canon scenes...nice, unique storyline. It's hard to be unique anymore, with the sheer volume of Twilight fanfiction stories, great job! *hugs*
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much! I loved writing this story and it took me two years to finish it! I spent a lot of time just thinking and getting into Edward's head. So glad I was able to entertain you!
Reviewer: deacongirl01 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2012 01:26 PM · On: Epilogue: Let's Start with Forever
I really enjoyed this. I normally don't go for the fics that essentially re-hash the plots of the books but this was so different. The viewpoints of the other characters were sorely missing in the books and movies. I love this Edward. You did a masterful job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I loved creating new scenes embedded in the old scenes. Glad it entertained you and thank you for leaving a comment!
Reviewer: TRLore (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2012 09:45 PM · On: Epilogue: Let's Start with Forever
I have been in desperate need for MORE of Twilight and you definitely delivered! NEVER stop writing! Your understanding of the characters, the undertones and the things that were unsaid is truly remarkable!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your very kind comment! I was. Very much like you, wanting more. I tried to write this in a way that would sound like SM wrot it. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: TRLore (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2012 08:49 AM · On: Forever
"Run, Spot, run!" Emmett shouted in Jacob's direction.
LOL! That was priceless!!!
l love the way you write. I've literally been up all night reading it!
Reviewer: TRLore (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2012 09:36 PM · On: Revelations
In a word.... BEAUTIFUL!
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2012 07:12 PM · On: Epilogue: Let's Start with Forever
That was absolutely awesome!!! I loved all the different POV's especially Esme's.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for sending your comments. I am very happy my story entertained you.
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 08:33 PM · On: Epilogue: Let's Start with Forever
I enjoyed this view of Breaking Dawn. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and commenting!
Reviewer: Chope (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2012 11:32 PM · On: Blessings
Thanks for that great view of breaking dawn. Absolutely loved it. It gives you more insight into the other side of the story. I am already reading future imperfect and await your updates.
Author's Response: Thanks Cristina! I so miss this story and wish I could see what I wrote on the big screen! Thanks for giving Future Imperfect a try! I know it is very different, but I thought a dark thriller would be something different to try (but I love HEAs!)
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 08:27 PM · On: Epilogue: Let's Start with Forever
Simply gorgeous! Thanks also for the explanation of the Cullen coat of arms; I put a copy of the meanings into my TW Saga books! I laughed about Emmett's gambling winnings for 10 minutes! I went to YouTube and I liked your video a lot! I saved it into my favorites, too! I enjoyed Honeymoon Suite and it's in my favorites! Happy New Year!
Author's Response: Michelle, seriously, how can I show you my appreciation for the numerous and wonderful reviews you have given this story?! They are not only very kind, but very fun to read. It is so fun to feel as a writer that you have connected with a reader, so I sincerely thank you for allowing me to enjoy the connection you experienced with this story.
If you liked the coat of arms explanation, you might want to hop over to my Carlisle and Esme story and check out the end of the last chapter -- I detail the meaning of each symbol and give it a fanfic origin.
Again, your reviews have been such a gift. Please let me know if I can ever return the favor!!
Lisa
Reviewer: Georgi (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 07:15 PM · On: Blessings
AWESOME!!! The best fanfiction so far, I can't wait to start the next. You have an insite into the charactors that is both predictable and suprising creating a fun and suspensful read. Thanks for the time and Love it took to create this masterpiece.
Author's Response: Yeah *claps excitedly* I am so flattered by your comment! Wow! "A masterpiece"! Thank you. I loved writing it and the best part was reliving BD again and in greater detail. I freaked out when BD1 ended just like Honeymoon Suite. I guess I like the theatrical.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and send me you comments. I enjoyed reading them very much.
Lisa
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 04:18 PM · On: Blessings
I never fail to cry in BD for Bella's quieting heart; but also, I cry for Edward's relief and joy at being reunited with his Bella and for Bella awakening to Edward and Renesmee; I cried over this chapter too! The scene captures and squeezes my heart EVERY time!!
Author's Response: You know, to me this was the biggest fail in BD1 -- we never see the relief and joy from Edward when he realizes Bella is not dead, but in transition. I think this could have moved the audience to tears done correctly.
Reviewer: Georgi (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 04:11 PM · On: Misconceptions
A very New Perspecive on Rose!!! YAY! GREAT JOB!!
Reviewer: Georgi (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 04:01 PM · On: Laid Bare
Ab-so-lute perfection. This was sooooo missing. Thank you
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 10:27 AM · On: Sire
What a scene; I cringe and rejoice every time with this chapter in BD!
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 09:25 AM · On: Recognition
Beautiful lyrics! I loved the moment Renesmee spoke and Edward discovered what Bella always knew--that baby was a God-sent miracle for the entire Cullen clan and Jacob! What a cliffhanger!
Reviewer: Micm (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2012 08:26 AM · On: The Ties That Bind
I can't believe how Edward stooped to use Jasper that way; bless Jasper for refusing to be used! Jasper was always like an enchanted prince in a fairy tale for me; so admirable and noble! You showed his inner strength!
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