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Reviews For Good-bye Too Soon
Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2016 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 18

I can't believe what a masochist I am for reading this again, knowing it was abandoned indefinitely. Over the years, I've thought about it at the most random times and wondered how their story would have ended. If I recall, you had some health issues and I certainly don't blame you for allowing that to take precedence. But still, I admit that a very small part of me will forever be holding out for that next chapter.   *sigh*

Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2012 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 18

Love the story so far.  Keep it going!

 

 

Reviewer: 184 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2011 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 18

Awe, so sad to see that you haven't updated this in a while.  Such a good story, I've really enjoyed reading it- hope you'll decide to finish it

Reviewer: Kalimando (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 18

Will we see a new chapter soon? I enjoyed reading this. I hope it can eventually be completed.

Reviewer: kbaby (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 18

Got to give me more please!!!!!!!!!! I have to know what happens next, I am on the edge of my seat.

Reviewer: Tayanna-Ushlee (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 1

Agh! I have forgotten about this site after a while. I hate RL. lol -.- But you didn't update far. . .I jumped on my laptop, signed into my dusty account and your story was the first I looked at.

Gurl, I was hoping for a heapload of chapters to catch up on. I was too excited, waggin my tail like a dang dog. Then I see I only got a few chapters and my face was like "Wth? What happened?" lol

But you are busy since RL can be a pain in all the wrong, uncomfortable places so I forgive you. lol Hope you didn't forget about the story.(: Enjoy your days.;]

xoxo~Tay-Ush

Reviewer: gemgem (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2010 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 18

please write more! please please please. this is a great story

Reviewer: mlover25 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 18

Bump

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 14

Yea Bella has a backbone!!!!!!!!!!! She's turning the tables on Edward!

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 13

I love how Bella & Legeera have a conection!1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 12

Legeera is scarificing her life to save Bella's, that is so noble! Poor Alice

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 9

this was fascinatying. Mortal enemies getting along.

Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 6

I'm not a sadist or anything, but I'm glad that Aro, asserted himself and punished Edward for breaking the law. Shows theVolturi aren't push overs. Can't till Bella's changed!

Reviewer: pillowbiter (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

I haven't forgotten about this story!!! Hope you haven't either :)



Author's Response:

I'm still here :)  Sidetracked but now inspired to write again by someone I love dearly.  Chapter 19 is done and off to beta.  Coming soon.  Thanks for your patience.  Debra

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 18

Wow, in a way I'm glad Bella fainted at the end.  I could feel the tension buyilding up and was scared for Charlie to explode.

What's going on with Alice?  Why can't she hunt?  Is the poison from Legeera doing something to her body?  Is it changing Alice into a human again?

Arrgggh, another fantastically written chapter, but also one that is full of angst, unanswered questions and another cliffie... you and your evil cliffies.....

Can't wait for more, now that I am all caught up, I hope you will update again soon.



Author's Response:

Upating is now coming, finally.  Thanks so much for holding on with me.  Debra

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 17

LOL I'd love to see Carlisle and Esme grounding Edward :) hehehehee

I'm scared for Alice.... you won't let her die will you?  Oh please don't :*(

And can't wait to see the reaction of Charlie now that Bella is out of danger.

I love that Legeera and Bella have a connection there.  I"m happy that Bella's presence seems to have a positive effect for Legeera, but I'm not sure that it's a good thing for Bella.  I hope that now she knows what it happening to her, it won't be quite so terrifying?

K, I'm moving on....

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 16

OME!!!!  I have been missing this story so much, but I had to deal with some issues in real life for a few months, so writing and reading were placed on the back burner.

I really hope that this connection between Bella and Legeera isn't going to be too detrimental to Bella's health.

Loved the interaction between Bella and Rose.  I think rose is just beginning to realise how brave Bella really is.

And uu oo . I really do hope Charlie has forgotten where his gun is ... can Edward maybe hpnotise him into forgetting he just walked into Bellas room to find her screming and Edward touching her???

Can;'t wait to read more, I'm so glad I"m behind everyone else.

Yet another great chapter....

Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 18

Please update soon.



Author's Response:

19 is on the way, thank goodness, thanks for your encouragement and patience.  Debra

Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 18

And don't think I won't give you a virtual ass-whooping if you ignore me!



Author's Response:

IM HERE IM HERE.  Yay, arent ya glad !  Chapter 19 is done sweetie and at the beta.  Hopefully to post soon.  Missed all you guys.  Debra

Reviewer: Roonie (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 18

Okay, Chicka. Break's over. Real life has held you hostage long enough. Meanwhile, poor Bella is unconscious and my girl-crush, Legeera, is doing who knows what, in God knows where!  

Time to crack those knuckles and get typing again. Even five minutes a day will eventually produce SOMETHING for your patiently waiting fans. Pretty please????



Author's Response:

you win, hehehe 

Reviewer: Karsha (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 1

Please tell me there is more coming soon?



Author's Response:

Chapter 19 is done, going to beta, thanks for reading and being patient.  Debra

Reviewer: pillowbiter (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

I hope you're still planning on finishing this story. Its one of my favorties out of my 100+ stories I have favorited on here :( PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEE PLEASEEE UPDATE

 

I'm literally begging. PLEASEEE



Author's Response:

I missed it too :)  Debra (im back ) hehehe

Reviewer: Lori01 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 18

I hope you didn't drop this story, I really like it.



Author's Response:

Not dropped, just sidetracked with real life,  Chapter 19 now done.  Will post soon. Debra

Reviewer: gemgem (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 18

please please please write more i have been waiting for ages



Author's Response:

coming coming coming, 19 is now done!! YAY  thanks for waiting for me  Debra

Reviewer: beaverB (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 18

♠sooooo....Is Jacobs big entrance coming soon♠


♥i cant wait till the next chapter...Hope it comes soon♥ 


 



Author's Response:

Its finally done, chapter 19 is at the beta, thanks so much for holding on.  Debra

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