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Reviewer: transitory_moment (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2011 02:22 AM · On: Time to Play

I love this!!

Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2010 02:28 AM · On: Time to Play

Bella is pleased. I really liked that take on their honeymoon!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 01:13 AM · On: Time to Play

As well she should be pleased, lucky girl! I just about had to get out the smelling salts, over that one! Oh, to be young and in love, again. Not that old and in love is a bad thing, but you just have fond memories of the eary years. Really enjoyed this story.

Author's Response:

Thank you! This was an early attempt at filing thise damn "fade to black" moments that were just so frustating! Anyway, glad you liked it :-)

Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 02:46 AM · On: Time to Play

Oh God....where can I fiind a man like that? And looks like Edward. Oh ya, they only exist in fan fic. Very nice!

Reviewer: vixenjc (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 03:41 PM · On: Time to Play

one of the best sex scenes to date loved it. wish i had my own sexward on hand lol

Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2010 12:57 AM · On: Time to Play


Reviewer: eniny (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 10:45 AM · On: Time to Play

Mmm you filled the gaps perfectly. Very sensual and first-loveish.

Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2010 03:04 AM · On: Time to Play

I think you should write a second Honeymoon  :)

Reviewer: BandE4eva (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Time to Play

That was really good. You should do a part 2.

Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Time to Play

Uhhh, Definitely!! There really needs to be a part two; I think Bella needs to reciprocate!

Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Time to Play

Love this short piece. It is so much fun to read and fills in the honeymoon gap in the book! Ah, love!

Disney Vampire

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Time to Play


Reviewer: rtpobsessed (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Time to Play

Awsome job, very Edward. Wasn't sleezy at all but very sexual, AWESOME. You should write more :)

Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Time to Play

My god, that was so incredibly hot!!!

Reviewer: Niska (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Time to Play

Part 2?! Do you even have to ask? Of course!!!! And do it soon, please!!!

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 04:07 AM · On: Time to Play

This was so fun.  Sweet, sexy and satisfying. :)


Very honeymoonish. You captured them well.

Reviewer: katmom (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Time to Play

Yes, please...Edward getting his, ahem, come uppance....


Reviewer: AngieRenee (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Time to Play

The best I've read so far!

Reviewer: yihyu (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2009 01:16 AM · On: Time to Play

yes please continue.

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Time to Play

ofcourse he should, if you feel like doing it

Reviewer: melissa95 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Time to Play

that was amazing please write more!!!!!!!!!! xoxo

Reviewer: holnico (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Time to Play

I think so I wonder how edward would take it with his own medicine himself. That would be interesting to see.

Reviewer: nidka (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Time to Play

Yikes, that was HOT!!!!!

Please, please continue, don´t let us hanging here!, pretty please!

Seriously, I loved the way you write about them exploring uncharted terrirories, if you catch my drift. Very good indeed.




Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing, comments like yours keep me inspired. I am so glad you were able to pick up on some of the awkwardness the new lovers are feeling as they adapt to the new parts of their relationship. 

Reviewer: mommakay (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2009 03:35 AM · On: Time to Play

Good Job!!!  Very entertaining!  Please write another chapter!  This was very exciting....hope to see more

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Working on it!

Reviewer: sweetbella (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Time to Play


Author's Response:

Thank you!

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