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Reviewer: tiggy616 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 15
Loved it!! I really hope for a romance with Adam!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Check out Turning Point, the new installment. :) I think you'll be happy with the direction it's headed. Eventually. Hehe...
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 15
I just found this series and read both parts straight through. (Yep...totally didn't do any housework today). Your writing is absolutely wonderful and Leia is an amazing original character. I am so looking forward to the next installment. Oh, and I'll just go ahead now and put in my vote for Leia and Adam having a relationship. I guess I'm just a sucker for a happy ending and want everyone paired up! Happy writing!
Author's Response: Hehe...as much as I hate to be the instigator of non-housework, thank you for reading! I'm so in love with Leia as a character. She makes me smile and she's generally so easy to write. As for the relationship, keep your eyes open for Turning Point, the next installment. :)
Reviewer: Hev99 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 15
Hey, I've just been to your series page to check up on whether the next one was started yet, and saw your series banner. Is that Alexis Bledel from Gilmore Girls as Leia? Is that how you imagine her to look?
Also, do you know yet what the next one is going to be called? So I can keep an eye out for it! Can't wait for my next bit of kick ass Leia! x
Author's Response: Hiya! Yes, that's Alexis Bledel. A friend of mine made the banner for me. Not really, on the look. There is another banner for the series that is my signature on the forums that is a little closer, but to be honest, the closest I've seen to how I picture Leia in my head is a young Natalie Portman. I just never found a decent picture of her to use for a banner. LOL
The third story is going to be called Turning Point. :)
Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 15
I loved this chapter. It was nice to have a little fun in the midst of all the drama...
Author's Response: Don't I know it. New Moon is darker, I know, but Leia is better in her element when she's making people smile. I'm trying to hang onto the lighter mood through the first couple of chapters in the next story. Thank you so much for reviewing!!
Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 6
First thing's first, I'm glad for the skip in time. It keeps some details from the book without boring us with them. Like Jake's transformation to the "dark side" as you put it. Good description for the transformation.
I like how Bella is given the choice of going on a vampire search and going cliff diving. If Edward knew, he'd have an anurism.
It's great how you describe the change in dynamics after Jake joins the pack. I forgott to say this before, but I like how Sarah is pissed that the elders won't allow their young to go to the Hospital when Carlisle is there.
I also really like how Leia tries to act normal around Adam. I greatly admire and enjoy that aspect of the story.
Now, the clock is ticking and Leia has to take on Laurent before the wolves show up. The anticipation for that fight is killing me. I hope that Leia kicks butt.
Ta
Master of teh Boot
Author's Response: I hope I didn't disappoint, though I know I didn't go into much detail. So I'm assuming you've read the next chapter and I'm curious as to whether you're disappointed with what happens to Adam. Hehe...Thanks again for reviewing!!
Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 5
Even though there won't be any romance for Leia, I have to say that this chapter rocked and I love your character Adam.
It's unusual to see a POV from one of the non wolf Quileutes and you pull it off nicely. I also like how his sister is going out with Jacob. Already, things are going nicely different from the book. What you also handled extremely well was how Adam figured out what she was. It was great seeing her tooth flash from his POV.
I also like the relationship that he has with his sister, very believable and very fascinating.
The dance session was great. It was so great and wonderful until we saw Bella torn to shreds by it. DAmn that Edward. Also, I like how Leia pulled off the trick with the lock.
Ta
MAster of teh Boot
Author's Response: Adam has become one of my favorite characters, but well...I can't really talk to much about him since you've not finished the story. I'm curious to see what you think. Hehe...thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 4
Hey, it's me Sorry, but I've been a lazy boy. It's good to be back with Leia. She's such a great girl, complex as anything. She feels like she's actually from the books.
I love when she flashed her teeth. THat's the best. I love also how she is able to clearly articulate the suffering that Bella and Edward Feel.
Ta
MAster of teh Boot
Author's Response: Hiyas. :) Nice to see you back reviewing again. Hope you enjoy this installment of Leia's Twilight. :)
Reviewer: renee721 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 15
WOW! I really, really, really love your story! It's going to seem like FOREVER to wait for the next one to begin! I hope you're able to start it soon! Thank you for great reading! :0)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I promise I won't be long getting the next one started. :) I've got almost two chapters written and as soon as I have the second on finished I'll post the first. I like to keep a step ahead of myself. :)
Reviewer: Krugness (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 15
I'm always sorry to see one story end but I can't wait to see the next one start. Adam is really one of my favorite characters now and I'm excited to see what you do with him in the next story. I was glad to see his sister brave coming to the house to see Leia. Have you set this up as a series so people can look it up under that section also? What will the thread in the forums be listed under?
Author's Response: Hi! Good to see you again. Hehe...and yes, I'm excited to get into the next story. Adam will play a little more of a role, for sure. Yes, I adore Sarah. Jacob needs a strong woman, for sure. Heh. As for the series, yes, its under the Baby Sister Series and that's what the forum thread is under. I started it, but of course it got buried. LOL. Its in the AU forum. :)
Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 15
I loved it and I can't wait for the new installment.
Brie,
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. :) It'll be up soon!
Reviewer: rosaliehale (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 15
You're series is great! I'm SO excited for the next one! Thanks for writing these books! =)
Author's Response: Thank you for much for reading I'm excited for the next one too!
Reviewer: Hev99 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 15
Yay! Sweet ending. Can't wait for the next in the series! Get writing!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you thing so. :) Thank you for being such a faithful reader. :) Already started on the third one. :)
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 15
yeah Leia, that's "all" you have to worry about... although I'm a bit sad that she didn't think about Adam in that last paragraph; I guess everything else was too distracting.
I'm with Edward though, "Leia, go to sleep!" hehehe
Looking forward to part 3 :)
Author's Response: Leia doesn't want to think about Adam when she's trying to be upbeat, because it makes her sad. Part three will be Leia and Adam's story, really, because by taking Jacob out of the picture, I've lost a lot of the B&E conflict in the story.
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love ur gonna keep it pg-13, i'm not the one for lemons and smut, so i love a good story that can be intimate without details, ya know? Thanks so much for giving us this story!
Author's Response: You're very welcome. It my pleasure to write it. :)
Reviewer: ChoccyJoJo (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 15
Yah looking forward to the next bit. :) Let us know when it's up. x
Author's Response: It'll be called Turning Point. I did finally start a forum thread, so if you wander over there any, look for it.
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 15
Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. :)
Reviewer: BsuzD (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 15
just wanted you to know that I have been enjoying your stories.
Brenda
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading them!
Reviewer: chiclet01 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 15
Wonderful! A great end to a very well done story. =)
I simply cannot wait until the next installment is up. I'll be able to read the whole thing from the beginning! I just have to make sure I don't miss it. =)
Thank you for continuing on with this idea! It's been a blast to read.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for being such an avid and faithful reader! Hopefully you won't miss the next one. It's called Turning Point, though I haven't posted anything yet and it might be a couple of weeks.
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 1
HOLY SNAPPLE! I just realized something... I AMTHE FIRST REVIEWER FOR THIS CHAPTER, AND WITH THIS MAYBE I CAN BE HE SECOND ONE! WOOOOOOOO, GO ME!
Reviewer: mjbabe58 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 15
Oh gosh! it can't be the end of this!!!!!! dang it! hahaha, now i'm going to bug you about the next story until it's up, aren't you just SO excited about that?! I no you are... :) i'm about to cry, it's so sweet! I love how she crashes Bella's motorcycle, hahahha, i was laughing when i read that b/c in my story I have Elli riding a motorcycle with Jazz, sorta a bonding thing, but anyways, lol, Alice is like woooo! lets go, and in mine hes totally opposite, she's just like, are you sure you no how to drive, i just think its funny how people interpret things, ya no? i can't wait for the nxt story, and the NEXT! hahaha, and I better se some love for Leia!!!
Just a huge fan,
Mj
Author's Response: :) I don't mind being bugged. I'm so glad you liked the story and I hope you'll love the next installment. There will be some loving for Leia, I promise. Just don't expect any lemons. If I do any, they'll be separate oneshots to keep my story's PG-13.
Reviewer: rockstarvampire (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 14
Love the JPOV! He adds his own kind of sparkles to the sunshine. I'm glad you're keeping up the series, I can't wait to see how Leia fits into everything. And how it all goes with Adam. Still like him and kinda want it to work out.
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't know if I'll ever do JPOV again, but I love him, seriously. I am already brainstorming for the next story, so hopefully I'll have the first chapter up fairly soon after this one is completed. :) I love Adam, myself, so I'm pretty sure it'll work out.
Reviewer: renee721 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 14
oooo, I can't wait for the next chapter! I love your story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :)
Reviewer: TaintedDarkInuShemeeko (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 14
I think you did a beautiful job. Telling the chapter from Jasper's POV. I really liked the Aztec toture part. It always gives me a laugh anytime you mention it. LOL
Looking forward to the next one.
Brie,
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I have such a hard time thinking like Jasper, even if he's my favorite vampire char in SMs books. Can't wait to start on the next one! :)
Reviewer: Hev99 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 14
Aww nice to see you writing from Jasper's POV. He's my favourite so I love that you've done that. You did a good job I think. Can't wait for the next chapter and then the next story. You have to tell us what the next one is called at the end of this one so we can all come and read! Once again, love your stories!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! Jasper is my favorite too, I just have a hard time writing his POV, so I don't for the most part. So thank you. :) I haven't even started writing the third one yet, so I'll have to think up a title before the last chapter gets validated. LOL. :)
Reviewer: twilight_writer1220 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 14
I think you did an excellent job with Jasper's point of view because it gave a whole new perspective into the story. Also it was great to hear about Adam agian. Hopefully everything will work out soon between Leia and Adam, as well as the vampires and werewolves. Looking forward to both the next chapter and the next story!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter isn't going to resolve much. Its just a way to wrap up the second book and slide into the next. :) Thank you for you reviews. They make me all glowy. :)
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