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Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Goodbye To You
Loved Alice the Avenger!! LOL
Good tantalizing chapter. Liked the progression. Eager to see where it goes next.
Thanks for updating!!!
Author's Response: THank you for reading!!! :D I loved Alice, too!! I hope to have the next chap up soon!! :) Thank you again!
Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Goodbye To You
I loved how Alice came in at Jacob with a baseball bat. I am glad she realized that she loved Edward. I wonder how long it will take her to find him?? Go get the man!!!
Author's Response: She's gotta find her man first! haha Thanks for the review! :) I am really excited to write more for this story!
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Goodbye To You
I THINK JACOB KILLED IT FOR ME IN THIS CHAPTER. WHY WOULD HE JUST SHOW UP LIKE THAT? hE'S AN ASS
Author's Response: Because he IS an ass!! haha Thanks for the review!! I can't wait to write more!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Goodbye To You
Jacob had a lot of nerve showing up at Bella's apartment after leaving her at the altar during the ceremony. Then Bella's mistake was being to hasty talking with Edward about not loving him. She was confused when he came back. She was hurting, humiliated, and in shock from Jacob's statements at the altar that he didn't want to marry Bella. Now Alice tells her Edward left already. Didn't tell anyone where he was going. Now Bella wants to find him and tell him she really loves him and can't live without him in her life. Pretty much what he said when he left her the last time right after the almost wedding. I wonder if Alice doesn't already know where Edward was heading. Looking forward to hearing Edward POV regarding his leaving and travel plans.
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! I'm working on the Edward's POV right now. I hope to have it up in the next couple of weeks!! Thanks again for the review! I appreciate it!
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Goodbye To You
MrsP!!!! I've missed you my dear. How have you been?
Loved this chapter, so happy she realized she was wrong.
Can't wait for more...
Manda
Author's Response: I missed you too!!! I've been doing alright. Just really busy with school and such. I'm working on the next chap!! Thanks for the review :D
Reviewer: adenglem (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Goodbye To You
Oh My Gosh! I'm dying here. How could you leave it with that?!?! I can't wait to know what happens! Who does she find there? Edward? Or the people he was staying with? Ugh I can't wait!
Author's Response: I am sorry!! Haha, don't worry, the next chap will make up for that!!! I am glad you're reading!! :D Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Goodbye To You
wow, that moved kinda fast, still good though, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I honestly didnt know how to not be so quick.. you know what I mean? I tried rewriting this chapter about 5 times.. and it was just slow and was dragging on. I decided that I'd rather it be fast than drag. THanks for the review!! I appreciate it!! :)
Reviewer: adenglem (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 11:09 PM · On: What the Hell Just Happened
Oh poor Edward. Now he knows what Bella felt when he rejected her all those years ago. I know he has good intentions, but what does he expect her to do just hours after getting dumped at the altar??? He needs to give her some time. And Bella needs to stop being so stubborn and get her head out of her ass and realize her feelings for Edward. It's always been Edward and always will be Edward for her and what happened between her and Jake proves that. Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: wolfs rule (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 03:34 PM · On: What the Hell Just Happened
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! JAKE CALLED OFF thE WEDDING WHY CUZ OF LEAH I THINK THATS KIND OF DUMB I MEAN REALLY!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: he called it off not because of Leah. it was what she said. i'll get into that in the next chap.
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 01:23 AM · On: What the Hell Just Happened
OMG JACOB IS AN ASS!!!! I DON'T LIKE THE WAY THIS STORY IS GOING... BELLA IS GOING TO BE ONE BITTER SHREW AFTER THIS.
YOU ARE GOOD!!!!!
Author's Response: I am so glad that you think that!!! (that im good) im still thinking about where I am going with this. I've played around with some ideas.. we'll see. thanks for the review!
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 01:17 AM · On: Shocked
WHY ARE YOU SO MEAN? LET BELLA GET MARRIED PLEASE..
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Bump in the Road pt. 1
JACOB DESERVES WHAT HE GETS BUT EDWARD IS BEUNG A DICK. HE;S SUCCEEDING IN BREAKING THEM UP.
BELLA'S JUST GULLIBLE.
YOU ARE GOOD. I FEEL MAD AT EVERYONE IN THE STORY. YOU TELL IT WELL
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 01:09 AM · On: Answers
EDWARD IS ALREADY ON MY BAD SIDE. HE NEEDS TO GO AWAY AND LEAVE BELLA ALONE WITH JACOB
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 12:58 AM · On: I Didn't See That One Coming
NONONONONONONO
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Misty Harbor
I'M STILL ABSORBING THE FACT THAT JACOB AND ALICE ARE FRIENDS. HMMM...
ALICE BEING HAPPY THAT JAKE PROPOSED?... HMMMM....
Reviewer: Terenthia (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Answers
Lemons could stand to be longer and more...sexy. But its your story. I'm a team Bella girl, and don't know how this story is supposed to play out, but honestly right now I'm rooting for Jacob. Edward is a dick.
Author's Response: i agree, i've never been much for writing smut, but im realllllly working on it!! promise thanks for the review!
Reviewer: jenlovesmeme (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:02 PM · On: What the Hell Just Happened
the ending blowed!
Author's Response: I'm sorry you feel that way. There was a reason I had the ending be like that and in future chapters i'll be able to explain it more. Sorry you didn't like it.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:37 PM · On: What the Hell Just Happened
What a surprise. Never would have thought of Jacob calling off the wedding and leaving Bella at the altar. Edward professing his love for Bella at this time was not too smart. She's been dumped twice in the same place. Edward should have been just her friend to comfort her and gradually make her realize she still loves him. Now she's decided neither of them is good enough for her. Jacob going for the witch Leah. Stupid. Well now the twist has arrived and the cross roads is here. where will the story go from here. Update soon.
Author's Response: Yah Jacob is kind of an ass. And Edward is Edward... ya know, the outspoken kind. And bella's frame of mind is she isn't good enough for them... because both of them left her. soo ya.. where will things go? who knows?
Reviewer: nothing2do (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:41 PM · On: What the Hell Just Happened
Oh no.....I can't believe she said she didn't love him. Why do people have to lie and hide their feelings all the time......I am waiting for the next chapter to see what Edward does to get her back. I sure hope they find their way to one another.
Author's Response: She truely believes that she doesn't love him. I mean if I ever got dumped at my wedding, i wouldn't go jumping into someone else's arms.. ya know?? we'll see what happens!! thanks for the review!!
Reviewer: Wolf_Lover (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Misty Harbor
I said Just Kidding I still love ya!!
PeaceLove&Twilight
♥♥♥Wolfie♥♥♥
Author's Response: haha yayy!!! =] I love ya too!
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:14 AM · On: What the Hell Just Happened
*growls* I guess this was a natural break in the story. *pouts* But it just got going, and it cut off! (hear the full on toddler whine!) lol
Good twist. I'm sensing a good long stretch of angst on the horizon. Suits the story, so I won't complain. It will make them stronger, I'm guessing. Glad E made his decalaration. There was a small part of me that was pissed at him for driving off just like before. He should stay where she can find him if he truely wants to be with her. I'm guessing he won't leave for Denali for 3 yrs this time, though! poor A and J, can you get any more drama to sour you own hea?!
Thanks for writing. Still have me sucked in!
Author's Response: sorrrrry!!! But we can't have everything be all chummy, can we?
Yah I dont think he should have drove off, either... but he wanted to clear his head and we'll see where he ends up. No, he won't end up in Denali, that's a promise!!!
I'm glad I still have you sucked in, you keep me writing!! win/win!! haha thanks
Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:50 PM · On: What the Hell Just Happened
JACOB said it?! JACOB.
Woah.
And then Bella totally blew of Edward?
Man, poor girl!
Author's Response: Yah... good twist, huh?? Yah it's definitely not Bella's day, that's for sure!
Reviewer: katstrat (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 05:17 PM · On: What the Hell Just Happened
Heartbreaking!! Bella was really cruel towards Edward... but I think she lied. I hope she will realize that she made a huge mistake by telling Edward she wouldn't love him and letting him go. She should run after him, apologize... I so hope you've got something like that on your plate for the next chapter.
The storyline is great, please update soon!
Author's Response: Well, she didn't want to jump right back into Edwards arms!! what kinda story is that?! haha. I guess you'll have to see what happens!! :)
Thank you so so much for the review!! =]
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:23 PM · On: What the Hell Just Happened
WOW good story...Please ud soon
Author's Response: :) thanks!!!! That makes me smile that you like it!! =]
Reviewer: PoorJacobBlack (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:18 PM · On: What the Hell Just Happened
OMG
Author's Response: OME!!!! or OMJ....if you're into that kind of thing ;) haha
SORRRRRRY!
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