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Reviewer: TwoStep (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 16 - TZ

I really love this story, and I miss it a lot. Please update soon? : )

Hope all is going well with you!

Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 16 - TZ

Def more kisses needed!

:)

 

Reviewer: misyx (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2010 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 16 - TZ

I say, all of the above!  Way to simultaneously intrigue and squick us!

Reviewer: spawyer (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2010 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 16 - TZ

still loving it! missed it a lot 

Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2010 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 16 - TZ

I was sooooooooooo excited to see another chapter!! I looove this story and I love that Edward is so awkward and vulnerable, it makes him so endearing! I can't wait for more! xx

Reviewer: Randy (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 16 - TZ

Thanks for updating. When I got the e-mail that you had done so I had a smile on my face for the rest of the day. This chapter was worth the wait. Loving this story.

Reviewer: dealouise (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 16 - TZ

i really like how slow you are going - because it is not easy to explain, what drives them to each other anyhow - despite their differences, his grief, her fear, thank you - it is well written and i love the story- go on and surprise me

take care, dea, germany

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 16 - TZ

Soo, was that a date? Poor Edward, he wants to lay it all on the line so that Bella has every opportunity to go running and screaming! I think she's about halfway in between. Torn between running from him and running to him. Can't wait to see how the kissing goes!

Reviewer: maddierose (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 16 - TZ

well i just started reading this story and stopped at this point of course and i just wanted to let you know you better post soon girl! im intrigued!! Please please dont leave me hanign to long i cant stand it hahaha
I'm really glad he is a vampire because i just feel closer to the fanfic's that have a human Bella and vampire Edward...it just seems idk...right i guess ahahaha
hope to hear from you soon girl! Byeee
Maddie

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 16 - TZ

3)"@*#&$! cliff-hanger?!"

thanks for the update. still in love with the story

Reviewer: RAY-grrrl (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 16 - TZ

squeek!  i just about wet myself with excitement when i saw there was an update - and it did not dissappoint!  Hot?  Yes!   Cliffie?  Bearable, especially if it leads to more kissing next time.

Reviewer: Lamiko (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 16 - TZ

3) $#@%#$%? cliff-hanger lol plz continue i like it very much

Reviewer: aerosoldoc (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 16 - TZ

OMG I forgot your penname was SpikeIsHotter - that's how long it's been! 

p.s. I vote for more kissing. But you knew that. :)

Reviewer: Eaglerise (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 16 - TZ

Excellent chapter. Good to see into the psychy of Edward alittle.

Reviewer: princesspeach (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 16 - TZ

Errrmmm...I pick option #2.  And #3.  Oh, and PLEASE, with a cliffie like that, don't you DARE keep us waiting as long as last time, missy!!

Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue, part 1


Reviewer: twicurious (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 15 - TZ

I'll take updates any way you can bring them to us! Please come back and don't feel bad about any delay!

 

 



Author's Response:

Aw, geez, I'm sorry!  I've been trying to update for like, a month, but RL keeps getting in the way.  I've had to move out of my apartment of 4 years, have several high pressure meetings at school, and coordinate a move of all my stuff to the other side of the country.  Sigh.  Once my sig.o. leaves (this weekend), I intend to spent a few quality evenings at the coffee shop with my laptop and finish off the next chapter.  It's one long E/B (date night!) and I'm doing my best to make it a little sweet, a little scary, and a little sexy.  Will update ASAP!

Reviewer: Ginabella59 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 7

Another good chapter.

Reviewer: Ginabella59 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 6

Another good chapter.

Reviewer: Ginabella59 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 5

Good chapter again.

Reviewer: Ginabella59 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 4

Poor Bella...Good chapter.

Reviewer: Ginabella59 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 3

Good chapter.

Reviewer: Ginabella59 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Prologue, part 2

Hurry to see what the plot look like.

Reviewer: Ginabella59 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2010 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue, part 1

Good first chapter.

Reviewer: emjay1981 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Prologue, part 1

Love this story but when will we get more?



Author's Response:

Soon!  I hope :)

Seriously, the next chapter is 80% finished.  If I get a good chunk of time this weekend, it may be in the queue as early as next Monday or Tuesday.  But I have learned not to make promises...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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