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Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 9
O.k., Isn't Aro the one who can read all your thoughts with one touch? So, when they shook hands, he would know everything about them.
Ya, where did Rose come from??? Are the rest of the Cullen's there? I would have suspected Esme and Carlisle to be there, as Carlisle spent some time with the Volturi.
O.k., next chapter.....
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 8
Ya, but to go back to James??? At least if she was torn, even a bit, it would have seemed more in character.
Did James plan this out anyway? How could he??
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 7
James, more feelings???? Wanting a home????
I'm still waiting for Bella to make a run for it.
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 6
I hope this sad story ends triumphantly for Bella.
James, what a dick! Oh, now he has feelings???? JERK!!!
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 5
Oh, come on! Laurent has to have at least a little clue?!
I'm surprised that with the vast knowledge the Cullen's have amassed, that they don't have a cell phone triangulation set to hone in on the phone signal. Hmmmmm.....suspicious. *snickers*
Ooooo, James is gonna pay for that last sentence.
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 4
Yay, Victoria's dead!!
At least Edward got to take his revenge on her.
Great story, love the drama.
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 3
Ya, like James would be truthful????? Give your head a shake!
The kiss was hot!
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 2
Oh, oh....I know, Bella's blood is so special, that when he bites her, he changes to a vegetarian, as no ones blood appeals to him.
Tough luck for Vicky....LOL
Reviewer: antipyro (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2009 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 1
O.k., if the scent ended at the road, James wasn't one to drive a fancy car or anything....just seems a little OOC, but hey!, so what?, it's fiction.
Great story premise.
Does Victoria die?
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 14
I was thoroughly entranced through it all! I can't help still wanting more! ;D I can understand skipping the rest of the angst and reunions.
Looking forward to reading more from you!
Thanks for a great premise and alt look!
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 2
Intruiging premise. Looking forward to reading to the end!
Reviewer: AliceIsMyHero (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 14
wow, amazing, brillant, fantastic, i loved every minute, so unbelievable great
Reviewer: AliKatt (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 14
great story. short.sweet.to the point! THX
Reviewer: AliKatt (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 4
Really liking the story so far!
Reviewer: wilkesmom2 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 14
I love this story! I love the happy ending too but I would like to see more with Bella reconnecting with the whole Cullen family. Maybe another chapter or two of some happy peaceful times with them, like a look at them a few years down the road or something!! That would be so awesome!!!!
Reviewer: dylansmommy06 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 14
THIS WAS AN AWESOME STORY AND YOUR A GREAT WRITTER :)
Reviewer: missymarieb (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 10
OMG Heart Pounding!!!
Reviewer: missymarieb (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 9
OMG I hate you!! Not really ;)
Reviewer: missymarieb (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 8
GRRR....Bella and her insecurities..when will she ever learn that Edward Loves her? sigh....Great story
Reviewer: Maranwe (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 14
Aww, such a sweet story! I loved how James changed for her! Loved it so much!
Reviewer: sweetierosy (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 14
Very satisfying :)
Reviewer: sweetierosy (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 12
shitty shit shit. I LIKED James :(
Reviewer: sweetierosy (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 11
I am totally digging James. So bad and sexy :}
Reviewer: sweetierosy (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 7
I'm in love with James!
Reviewer: sweetierosy (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow! awesome!!!
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