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Reviewer: Mystic_Ice24 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 5
More! More! This is really good! Feels like the books!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 5
Wow! Great story and great chapter!! Update again soon! I can't wait!
Reviewer: InnerAnomaly (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 5
this just gets better and better! I can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Nox (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 5
VERY interesting read keep going!
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 5
Too much angst!!!!! Really on the edge of my seat to see how this unfolds. Thanks for writing this!!
Reviewer: NoMoreThanUsual (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 5
My God! What a cliffhanger!!! I'm sorry your family was not well. I hope things are better now. They must be for you to be back to writing. And you've done such a stellar job with this chapter! Simply awesome!!
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 5
oh cliffe excellent job!
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 5
No! Not Angela! *sob* 'His tone of voice was still and hopeless. / He looked up at me, his eyes blazing. Fuck. “I am nowhere near hopeless, Rosalie."' Hehe! =D She was caught "red handed!" lol I love this chapter! I'm so happy that you updated. By the way, I hope that your family member is feeling better. =) Can't wait to read the next chapter! Hopefully we'll see Bella and James again soon! *wink, wink; nudge, nudge*
Reviewer: kARLOTITA09 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 5
hope your family member is better! :)
Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 12:28 AM · On: Chapter 5
so awesome. you capture the characters' voices so well. the suspense you are building is stunning. i love it how you are having multiple POVs. although i really want to see what's going on with bella and james after the transformation. i feel horrible for being pushy. update soon?
Reviewer: darcy (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 5
This story is really riveting in its freshness. It is unique. I have no idea what is going to happen next, but I can't wait to find out. Poor Angela.
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 3
Please update soon!!!! Great story!
Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2008 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 4
Grrrr.... update soon....
Reviewer: x-stephanie-x (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2008 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 4
woo excitement! well done and keep up the super awesome work! i can't wait to read more! - stephanie x =]
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2008 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 4
Hmmm....What's gonna happen now??
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2008 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 4
Yay! Another chapter! *grin* I LOVED it! My favorite quote: '"You know I could find you in the next thirty minutes and snap you apart like a twig. I wish I could, but I am…” He trailed off, “Currently preoccupied."' Busy seducing Bella! Mwahahaha! LOVED it! He's just so casual... Honestly, I can't wait for this "relationship" to start... I know, I know... *ashamed* The story's moving at a very fast pace... But, in this case, it's not a bad thing.... You're not rushing through it, and I must applaud you for this! *claps* Hehe! So many authors tend to do this... and it detracts from the story... But... Ah! A cliff-hanger! You can't stop their! What's happening next!?!? I must know! Arg! *pulls at hair* Update soon... Please? *puppy dog eyes*
Reviewer: mikrro (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 4
oh no... this isn't looking so good. :/ love the chapter! can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewer: Reiko Katsura (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 4
Another great chapter!! I know that Edward is probably worried...to death (literally) but I hate that he takes it out on people like that.... If anything, Alice is the closest person to Bella, aside from Edward. He needs to calm down.... But the sad thing is that he would probably react this way in Twilight, too.... *sigh* Well, I'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter!! Thanks alot!
Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 4
OHHH please update soon. this is awesome!!! i hope this story is kinda longish.
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 4
Great story!! Please update soon!!! Love it!
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 4
oooh really good pacing. Keep it up!
Reviewer: ra258 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 4
This is a great idea, very vivid. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: NoMoreThanUsual (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 4
Excellent story! Very original. I love it.
Reviewer: kcullen (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2008 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 3
omg!!! this story is soooo exciting!!!please update soon!!!cant wait to read the rest!!! but please get bella back to edward soon!! and please dont write that bella and james did "it" cuz that wud be sooo sad for edward!!
Reviewer: broadwaydoll98 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 3
omg i love this story it's sooo good. update soon please, i can't wait to see what happens :]
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