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Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 9
GAHHH! you can't just leave it like that!!! ... okay, well maybe you can, because you did... but still. Interesting turn of events. I like how you've evolved James's character. I also think it's ironic how they ended up in italy...hint of what's to come perhaps?? But what I especially like is how you imagined bella's eating habits. Obviously to any one who's read the books, Bella wouldn't ever be able to kill anyone herself, no matter what. I really don't think that James would let her drink animal blood either. But donated blood solves both problems. Smart. I do think that James should be a little more controling though. Even if he does love her, I still picture him somewhere between Edward-controling and abusive-boyfriend-controling. Just my oppinion. Maybe only durring some situatuions though?? grrreat! UPDATE SOON!!!!
Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 9
MORE. i love this to itty bitty pieces. i love the mug, i think everyone is very in character. it's awesome and i'm panting for more.
Reviewer: edwardluvr (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 9
ohh this is good!!!
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 9
Ewww, James is getting her dirty!! Make her take him off, please!!!!
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 8
**Bangs Bella's and Edward's heads into solid wall***** Stupid, silly dumb vampires!!! ARgh!!! Please don't torture us very long....
Reviewer: invisiblevampire (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 9
Hmm. Everyone seems to have changed quite a bit in the few years they've been apart. Great job evolving the charecters!
Reviewer: Katya (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 9
Gaaah, you're killing me. I really love James here, you've totally got me fancrushing on him (and Cam!) I wonder how many of the Cullens are there. I wonder how they'll react to Bella being involved with James. SO MANY QUESTIONS. Update fast, I can't wait for the next part. This story is haunting me.
Reviewer: The_Ocean_Girl (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 9
I love this story and can't wait for more, but there's one thing in this chapter that's really bugging me. It's the car. . .Venice is a pedestrian only city (none of the 'roads' are even big enough for a car to fit) except for the boats, of course. I know it seems a bit anal but. . .it just bugs me. But other than that I think this chapter's pretty great.
Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 8
i don't think its OOC she's very disoriented by the turn of events. i cant wait for the next update.
Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 8
wOW i'm lovin it
Reviewer: Nox (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 8
erg more!!!! that is awesome im addicted lol great job
Reviewer: Hopelessly_Obsessed (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 7
Aggh! I'm dying of anticipation! Please update soon!! Please? :) All the best.
Reviewer: mint_n_chip (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2008 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 7
great job! update soon!
Reviewer: KrzyRiver (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2008 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 7
Just stumbled across this fic and I am absolutely in love! Love watching the interaction between Bella and James. And I like how you give us a peek into everyone's head. Hope to see even more Cullen POVs! Can't wait to see where this goes!
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2008 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 7
I hope that school is going well for you but I am about to die here. Please kill James already and let Edward and Bella get back to lovin one another. PLEASE???? PLEASE???? PLEASE???? PLEASE????
Reviewer: Hopelessly_Obsessed (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 1
LOVE it! :D It's such an amazing idea! I so imagine Cam (GORGEOUS!) Gigandet, while I'm reading! PLEASE, please, please update soon! Please?
Reviewer: edwardluvr (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2008 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 7
kill james off!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: brightangel (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2008 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 1
i luv, luv, luv ur story plz keep writing it's amazing. Update soon!!!!!!
Reviewer: whoa_lipstick (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2008 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
I'm officially a huge fan of this story. Do you have it posted anywhere other than this? Such as fanfiction.net or livejournal.com? If not, you should definitely consider... it'd be so much easier to track updates (unless there is some sort of feature on here that lets you track stories) and such. I absolutely love the way you took this story. James getting Bella is totally delicious. I can't wait to see whether or not she makes it back to the Cullens. Also, will we be seeing Renee any time soon? She seems like the type to be hysterical about her daughter that has possibly been eaten by a bear. I'm also loving your characterization of the Cullens, especially Rosalie. I can't wait to read more! :)
Reviewer: NJTwilighter (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2008 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 7
Awesome story! I love the whole idea of james actually getting Bella. You are a really great writer...I can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: ficklecraftster (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2008 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 7
love it so far! can't wait to read the rest!
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2008 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 7
omg! this rocks. Defineeetly on my faves. Nice twist, i can't wait to see what happens! UPDATE!!!!....please?
Reviewer: codyaudrey (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 7
I absolutely looove this story. I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: InnerAnomaly (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 7
it's rather odd reading james as a sincere personality right now... lol.. excellent writing though.. I'm fully enjoying this story :)
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2008 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 7
Yay! An update! I've been going through withdrawal! *gasp* I'm addicted to your story! =D Hehe! Once again, I really love the way that you've developed James's character... Also, the way you incorrporated that "no bloodlust Bella" thing from BD? Pretty clever! =D Loved the chapter... as always! Can't wait for the next one! =D And that whole "two chapters a week thing"? I'll hold you to that! *wink, wink; nudge, nudge*
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