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Reviewer: happymoon35 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 12
Yay, an update! :) I have to admit I was sad when Bella said that knowing that Edward never cheated on her with Tanya didn't change anything. James kidnapped and murdered Bella and she still wanted to go back to him and not with the Culens? :( Can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: bells123 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
Please keep writing!! Loving this story.
Reviewer: bells123 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
Please keep writing!! Loving this story.
Reviewer: soldiersgirl (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 12
huh. I had rather hoped that Bella would somehow be forced back to the us to reuinite with Edward and be forced to make a choice. now the choice has been taken from her. No fun. Well written, but no fun.
Reviewer: Morgan (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 12
OMG! Wow.
Reviewer: mottmom (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 12
yea! the weirdo is dead! Is Bella blocking him with out knowing it.... Like she has been doing with Alice?
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 12
Enjoyed and appreciated it! Great chapter. That is something Rose would do! Love it that they killed James. I really enjoy this story! More please!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 12
Good, I am glad that Jasper killed James. It didn't matter if he loved Bella, he was not Edward!
Reviewer: twilighter45678 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 12
I liked the killing of james, gotta love some good action. Bella is sucha drama queen somes times, she should be happy that he is dead.
Reviewer: CapriciousC (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2008 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 12
Oooh, good chapter! Extra angst-y, and lots of action. Cool. Well, I'm not sorry that James is dead - Bella probably would have stayed with him out of obligation, if nothing else - but I know she'll have a hard time dealing with his death. Well, yeah, duh - she's catatonic. Sorry - must have more caffeine before attempting coherent thought. Can't wait to see where you take it next! This is such an interesting premise, and you write it so well.
Reviewer: Alex Ed Swan (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 11
i love this story it ready is a good idea
Reviewer: DanielRadcliffisHOTT (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 11
I love this story. I actually kind of feel sorry for James b/c he loves Bella but she doesn't love him and she may leave him. But I hope bella and Edward get to be together in the upcoming chapters
Reviewer: happymoon35 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love this story! It's such a great characterization of Bella as an abuse victim suffering from Stockholm Syndrom. You're a great writer and I love seeing your updates. :) I do not feel one bit of sympathy for James, though. He threatened Esme, kidnapped and MURDERED Bella, and continues to kill innocent humans, no matter how much it upsets Bella. He doesn't love her and I hope that the Cullens tear him limb from limb and that Bella spits on his body. Um, just my two cents! :)
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 11
Loved it!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 11
Love it. I think it's great that Bella thinks that she could leave if she wanted... oh, I can't wait for all the drama for when she tries.
Reviewer: twinkle_girl (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 11
wow.... james and bella are getting serious... i really liked rosalie for her determince to find bella... great job, KEEP WRITING
Reviewer: phantomwriter (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 11
And review I shall. I'm loving this story, but my loyalty to Edward is making me growl at James. In a good way. Sort of. :-D Can't wait for an update
Reviewer: mint_n_chip (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2008 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 11
update!! please update!!!
Reviewer: skyler (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 11
why the crap is she w/ james and not edward and she better go back to edward. i DO NOT LIKE!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 11
I hope that Edward saves her from disgusting James. Anyways, the story is going great and you seem to update quite often, so Thanks!
Reviewer: soldiersgirl (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 11
I hope you update soon. This story is amazing, although I would like to see more of Edward . :D
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 11
I am glad to finally know the reason for Bella not wanting to see Edward. I just want her away from James, but she does seem happy so....yeah kill him. :D
Reviewer: soldiersgirl (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 1
I'm definitely intrigued. :D
Reviewer: Jenimafer (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 06:56 AM · On: Chapter 11
OOOOooo awesome chapter once again. Still a bit iffy on the whole james/bella thing, but ill get over it once edward comes back... He'll come back right?
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2008 01:23 AM · On: Chapter 11
This is peace?! Wow! I would say there is alot of emotional conflict in your story. Very good!
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