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Reviewer: ZEE_21 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2009 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 14
I couldn't stop reading this. I literally sat here and read every chapter in one sitting. So different, so heartbreakin, so beautiful. Loved it!
Reviewer: tiffybooCullen (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 03:57 PM · On: Chapter 14
that was really good enjoyed it alot
Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 14
That was very sweet I am glad it ended so well for both of them... although I can't help either to feel a little sad for james..... definitely a great story :)
Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 9
I like this James character... he seems to be really nice...
Reviewer: VaniV (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 8
OMG... this totally went off wrong... it's typical of girls (at least in american movies *gg*) to jump to conclusions like that, and especially for Bella..
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 14
thats it thats how it ends? omg they have sex and its over. well it was a rollercoaster of emotions and bella was bella. good story though.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 13
wow im starting to seriously dislike the cullens i mean they should understand how edward would react why are they being bitchy rose is the reason bella is the way she is now and jasper. and they know what bella meant to edward but they are disregarding his feelings completely. some sympathy their showing. im ready bitchslap all of them except esme.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 12
wow bella seems like an idiot in this story to me. but anyway i love all the other characters. i love how james stayed true to his prideful self until the end. i feel so bad for edward more than anyone. i wouldnt say bella had that stockholmes syndrome but i guess she stayed with james because it would be easier for her that way than facing what she thought was rejection on edwards part. if she truly didnt love james and didnt have that connection to him im surprised that she went into that stupor. its not as if he were really her mate, i guess she just freaked at the life she now no longer can have , with him her familiarity and comfort is gone.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 3
bella must be really talented if she can look at her own neck wound without a mirror. anyway damn james that sure was something that he was able to not drain her especially if he wasnt desentisized()sp. to her scent. but her self sacrifice is pretty amazing.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 3
bella must be really talented if she can look at her own neck wound without a mirror. anyway damn james that sure was something that he was able to not drain her especially if he wasnt desentisized()sp. to her scent. but her self sacrifice is pretty amazing.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 2
poor edward. but i do like this possessive james and its funny how stupid victoria was throwing her life away so james could have a tasty treat not knowing that he would choose to keep her.
Reviewer: Fleuritup (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
wow his family was a complete ass and acted ungreatful for bellas sacrifice. thats amazing how the two of them outsmarted the entire cullen family. i hate how they were telling him he was too emotional. i mean shes his mate basically and if they were in his position they would have gone after james right away. now im all upset, i hope they catch up with james really soon beause hes pissed me off. lol good story though.
Reviewer: TinaT (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 14
Great stuff
Reviewer: Team Edward Girl (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 14
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWw
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 14
Aww, this was such a sweet story! I liked the way you evolved James!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 14
I love it when they purr!
Great Story!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 12
HOME! HOME! HOME! HOME!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 11
loved it!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 9
Your story you can do or say whatever you want. I love what you are saying in this story.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 8
OME! Seriously, poor Edward.
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 7
I am with you! How exciting!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 4
Awesome!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 3
Goodness, James is a little liar isnt he?
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 2
Hopefully she will have newborn strength and break is neck!!!!!
Reviewer: Cullen Concession (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nice beginning!
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