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Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 14
At the last chapter, you said the angst was going to last for awhile, but now it's over? It seemed so quick. But I love me a happy ending, so I can't complain. I really liked Bella's confessions and goodbye at the end, clearly she needed to let the go before she could move on. Thanks for a fun story!
Reviewer: cullencrazy (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 14
Yay! Great chapter!
Reviewer: Marigold (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 14
Aww, yay! Sweet ending, thanks for the story! =D
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 14
Perfect ending for this story. Great job, I really enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 14
Great story. This was very original and very enjoyable. I am thrilled that true love prevailed at the end. Great job!
Reviewer: JocelynCullen (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 03:47 PM · On: Chapter 14
I loved this story from the beginning, and that was a very good ending! Really enjoyed it,
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 14
Way better ending for them then I thought they might get!! I still think James was a selfish ass who didn't deserve pity, but you drew him so well, I could see why some would feel that way :) Thanks for a great, well knit, story.
Reviewer: Momstheteacher (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 14
The chapter was sweet. I'm glad Bella is making her peace with what happened. Angst is good but too much angst can make stories slow down too much. It was about time happier things started to happen.
Reviewer: yourbrandofheroin (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 14
Loved it!
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 14
That was a wonderful ending. HOT ending! I really enjoyed this story , thank you for taking the time to write it!
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 14
Another excellent chapter.
Reviewer: Brindalyn (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 14
Clapping Wildly. Wonderful, Beautiful job!!!
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 13
I don't know if you'll find this helpful, but I thought I'd mention it. First, I love this story. :) Second, Bella's behavior is very much in line with Stokholm syndrome. Thought you might be able to incorporate that in future chapters. Can't wait to read what happens next.
Reviewer: Mallers (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 14
the end?? as in THE END? and of the story?! Well i loved this!!! I loved it loved it loved it!!! I always got so excited when i saw this story was updated!! It was exceptionally great!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 14
I am so sad that this story if over :( I truly loved it. And I am so glad that it had a happy ending. I hope you write more.
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 14
Yeah! Doing the happy dance!
Reviewer: elana (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 14
Nice! The only thing missing now is the Epilogue where they find the new clothing that Alice left for them...
Reviewer: mottmom (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 14
I liked your story... Thanks for sharing it with me. Bella's power was quite interesting. I am glad she finally began to understand. It would be fun to see her and Edward getting to kwon each other again.
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 14
Yippy! I have waited for this!
Reviewer: Skysangel123 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 14
I really liked what you did, not making it to easy on them but in the end it was prefect. Great job! I enjoyed it alot!!
Reviewer: firemoon_dragon (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 14
finally theyre back together!! i was worried it take more time :)
Reviewer: Scarlett_Letters (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 14
The end?! :( You did great! I'm glad Bella got to say goodbye in a sense to James, but it was time for her to be with Edward. Yea, and a sweet little lemon too.
Reviewer: Vamp1918 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2008 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 1
Okay so I LOVE this story and I want to read more! It's Halloween.... please update? Happy All Hallow's Eve!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 13
Who knew James could be redeemed? And poor Edward :( I hope he fights for her, makes her see he loves her and always did. Please please please, update soon!
Reviewer: bells123 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 13
If nobody beats me to it while I'm typing, I'll give you review #300. Desperately awaiting more of this story!! It's one of my faves. It's very well-written and has kept my attention from the beginning. I hope there is more coming soon.
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