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Reviewer: Buffan (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2008 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 1
I just have to say, I'm new to fanfiction and most of the stuff I've read on this site is some pretty intense soft core porn (a girls gotta indulge wink wink) but this story... Let me just say, your choice of English major was the way to go. You're an awesome author and I'm really jealous of your talent. I have to go to bed now cause I'm pretty sure I'm on death's door with this season's "common cold" (more like pneumonic plague if you ask me) but I'll be checking your other stories tomorrow!! You rock!
Reviewer: silverose69 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: poundingonthedoor (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 14
Easily one of the very best fan fics I have EVER read!! Perfect! I adore James so much, I loved seeing he had a tender side! The writing was good enough to make me cry when he died! :( lol which just means you're amazing!! Wonderful job! ....although am the only one that wishes Bella woulda stayed with James? lol
Reviewer: sweetiepie1190 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 14
That's nice. I really liked this story. It's the first one I have read on here. Your really good at this.
Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2008 02:41 PM · On: Chapter 14
What a beautiful ending!
Reviewer: FallenFlowers (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 14
That was... wow. Great ending to a great story. Thanks a lot for putting this up, I enjoyed every minute of it.
Reviewer: thatgirljen (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 14
I just wanted to say that I thought it was awesome that you did the love scene from his point of view. Im not sure why but it was nice to hear it from him intstead of her.
Reviewer: carson_maverick_girl (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 14
wow...on one hand that was difficult to read...I absolutely loath James and all but you did manage to give it wonderfully happy ending
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 14
Yay, they are together again!! Good story, great job!!
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 14
FInally!!!!!!!! I loved it!
Reviewer: edwardluvr (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 14
i love it! the ending was perfect, edward got to hear her thoughts without any editing and that was exactly what they needed. great job!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 14
Sniffle I didn't want to see it end! Awesome story! I am so TEAM EDWARD I wish it went on and the recovery and everything. Sniffle still so sweet!
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 14
Very beautiful ending, thank you for an amazing story. I loved it from first to last chapter and I hope you will find the inspiration to write another story sometimes, very much like your writing style.
Reviewer: Julie Cullen (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 14
You did perfeclty great! I dont know if I ever reviewed before, but I loed your story, from the beginning to this great ending you wrote. I hope you write another story. I love AU stories, and there are not many out there. You are a great writer and got me hooked since the first chapter. Thank you, Julie
Reviewer: Jenimafer (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 14
Wait...What? Thats the end?! Nooooo!!!!!!1!!! It was a sweet ending but i dont want it to end :'(
Reviewer: iliveforthis (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 14
wow... id never thought id feel sorry for james... awwh, well at least he realizes tht he and bella arent meant to be together...tht is after hes dead...lols such an amazing story! original plotline :]
Reviewer: Alice416 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 14
What a great way to end the story. The whole thing was great, just the right amount of suspense, sadness, and joy. I found myself crying when James died, and when Bella was "talking to him". You really make your readers connect with the characters in a way that many writers cannot. I can't wait to read what other stories you write. ~Gina
Reviewer: thinning_ice (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 14
I really enjoyed this story :)
Reviewer: beachgirl647 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 14
aww YAY they are finally bak together like it should be...yay although i kinda liked your James as well lol. its perfect, please update soon
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 14
aww. not exactly the ending I was expectig, but sweet nonetheless. good job. that was an interesting story.
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 14
This was an amazing chapter. This whole story is captivating and interesting. I really, really liked the story line and the raw emotion in the words. I just wish that there was one more chapter. i think the sex was a bit rushed and a bit awkward, but it was still lovely!
Reviewer: Alyxandria (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 14
What a fantastic story! Thank you so much for sharing. It was different from what I've read before, so I almost didn't give it a shot - but I'm so glad I did. Wonderful job! -Alyx
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 14
Yay!! Sad to see it end but all in all I loved this story!! Thank you for sharing!
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 14
You did good! Great ending!
Reviewer: mamagrace (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 14
I'm so glad they're finally back together! Thanks for not drawing out the painful part. Great story!
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