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Reviewer: Twilight Seductress (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Lobster Lunches and Boarding Passes
Poor Alice:( I loved this chapter, can't wait for the next one!!!
Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Lobster Lunches and Boarding Passes
This story should have more reviews. It's a pity that it hasn't been read more.
Reviewer: lilsabeth (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 04:44 AM · On: The Breaking Point
yay. but i dont get why she didnt just say that she was scared of another miscarriage.
Reviewer: mareimbrium (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 01:38 PM · On: Bella Cullen
Love it! Your title grabbed me from the start.
Reviewer: b00ks4u (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Bella Cullen
I was trolling for stories and found this. I am def. interested in reading more. Chapter 1 down!
Reviewer: minnesodagirl (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:21 PM · On: The Breaking Point
thank you- this was the best chapter yet- but i almost dont want bella to be preganant right away- too predictable i guess- also more on the jake nessie relationship- they come for dinner or something?
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Technicolor Yawns Over Stepford
Oh my God, she's pregnant, isnt she? Of course thats what everyone thinks when a girl has stomach problems. So maybe she's not. Either way, great chapter!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 03:21 PM · On: Socks are the Antichrist?
Good chapter. I was hoping that Bella wasn't gonna be pissed that Alice was sleeping with Jake. I think she handled it quite well. Good chapter hun!
Reviewer: Kris Butter (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:35 AM · On: The Breaking Point
i love your story-
kinda wishing nessie's point of view will make it in here though,
got to love jacob(:
Reviewer: mistydawn (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Edward's Epic Fail
I have been reading this story all damn day, I've been cryng or on the verge of crying thru the last three chapters, it's almost one am and I have six more chapters to go to get caught up. I am competely hooked by the characters and story line and I am exhausted by the emotional rollercoaster it has taken me on.
I absolutely love it!
Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:59 PM · On: The Breaking Point
This story had me both crying and laughing! Thank you writing it! I have added this to my favorits and look forward to seeing where Edward and Bella go from here!
Reviewer: cutie82 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 07:49 PM · On: The Breaking Point
how many more chapters do you think? I guess Edward isn't always perfect. It's different because alot of other stories Edward is the most considerate perfect person. In this story, he is human. He makes mistakes. Great story. Can't wait for the update!!!
Author's Response: Tentatively, there will be 43 chapters, but there might be a few more or a few less, just depends on how much time we need to wrap up the story lines.
Reviewer: alicenative (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:21 AM · On: The Breaking Point
I came upon this story a couple of days ago and I absolutely love it!! I feel for Bella, as I had a similar experience before I became pregnant with my oldest son. I am confident that they will get through it and be able to move forward as I did.
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:33 AM · On: America's Next Top Bitch
Hehe, cute chapter! So now Jasper has her number...Interesting. I wonder when he's gonna dump the bitch. Now to get ready for the talk with Jacob. Great story!
Reviewer: Love-joy cullen (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 03:12 PM · On: The Breaking Point
Now that is probably the second time this fanfic has made me cry out of happiness. Please update soon!
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 08:11 AM · On: The Breaking Point
aww, I really liked the chapter. Although I do still think they need to have it out.
Reviewer: buli (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:42 AM · On: The Breaking Point
So amazing, the end is so beautiful, i'm crying. Your story is full of real life drama, Edward and Bella's story is not fake, its a genuine one and there aren't much on Twilighted. Amazing, I love it!
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Ass Grabs and Booty Calls
Oh sure. Now he wants to talk. Men. Sex first, talk later. Hehe. Great chapter!
Reviewer: Twilight Seductress (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:35 PM · On: The Breaking Point
GREAT!!! I can't wait for the next update!!!
Reviewer: runner28 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:07 PM · On: The Breaking Point
so good
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:12 PM · On: The Breaking Point
YEah! THey are getting along for now. I hope she doesn't get knocked up right away. I think they still have a lot to work out, like why is she scared? Is she afraid she'll miscarry again or that he'll change his mind about the baby?
Reviewer: anne86 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:13 PM · On: The Breaking Point
Wow! That was an amazing chapter. I was really worried for Edward and Bella. Ever since the miscarriage and Edward's dissertion or her, she really put a wall around her heart. At the end of the chapter, it seems like the wall has been torn down and Bella really opens herself up again to love and to heartbreak. It was incredibly well writen and I can't wait for more.
Reviewer: inlove22 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:06 PM · On: The Breaking Point
awww. love edie and bella
cant wait for more
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:45 PM · On: The Breaking Point
Excellent I knew she would get over being scared it just had to take Edward to open up and do it!
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:17 PM · On: The Breaking Point
....I don't ever think I've heard anything more perfect...because even though they have problems...they're choosing to overcome them.
I love that more than anything.
This story=LOVE.
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